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Oh gods, this shall be MARVELOUS!

And indeed it was...

I dig it

So many stories going on my read later list today. :rainbowderp:

it was just matter of time, my friend, and it was magnificent.

I was like
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During certain scene, I'm gonna let you guess which one.

It was great... but there was a lack of feelings/reactions during sex. It almost looked like it was some sort of chore with no real reward at the end.

4368123 It was never really meant to be romantic. I would liken it to bathing a disabled adult family member. It is an intimate act without the eroticism.

It was good.... But I think it needed more feeling. More Emotionall flow...

Still good though...

4368219 Mmm I understand. Still, the sensations and the pleasure stimulation could've been there more as well, I can't imagine sex where it is lacking passion like Maud Pie Selfcest.

4368645 I got ya. I'll go back and punch it up a bit more.

i chuckled from the cover pic cause i know what its from and where

I get that this is just meant to be bullshit and funny and all that but even still .. . there is one major plot hole in this that can't be over looked.

It was the first time anypony else had touched Rarity's privates

If true then how does she know having sex with a mare will cure it?

Also she says that Sweetybelle does not have to worry about getting pregnant because her cum can't do that.
Same problem; how does she know if she has never had sex before with it?

Oh well . . .I goes if a story could get by with plot holes as big as this it would have to be a clop fic lol.

4369445 Don't think about it too much. I certainly didn't.

...
I can't even anymore...
Enjoy this other thing:

Anyne #18 · May 11th, 2014 · · 15 ·

Disgusting

I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to explain her cutie mark to the other crusaders.:rainbowlaugh:

Ha! That ending was fucking hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

I like Sweetie x Rarity stuff. :pinkiehappy:
Also, a wood nymph... is it just me or was that a very sneaky pun?

4371454 It was more of a *puts on sunglasses* plot device.

I spy with my little eye some Fruity Milk art work for the cover... also this is the only foalcon other than Silver Spoon that I have been okay with...

4372615 Indeed. I give them credit in the author notes. This story was directly inspired by their work. I was in correspondence with them before hand. They even made a special Tumblr post about it.

this story gets the luneth spark seal of approval:pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile: because it's amazing

The image of a rooster and a stocking appeared on her flank. It was her cutie mark!

haha, I see what you did there.

Great story! Thumbs up!:heart:

The best 'cock sock'.......the holiday hell?

Ahem! This story came out of nowhere, but i certainly found it interesting and enjoyed reading it. Most excellent.

hey rarity can you do that to me *blushes intensly*:twilightblush::twilightblush:

Cute but there are several mistakes throughout the story. You might want to go back and reread it to catch them. The sex bits were incredibly quick, but the last portion with Rarity's cock growing inside Sweetie was rather enjoyable.

Futaloo is best cock-sock

wait I don't get it what does her cutie mark mean?:trixieshiftright:

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The image of a rooster and a stocking appeared on her flank.

It's explained in the author's note.

I really wanted to like this fic, but I just couldn't finish it, due to a major problem: it feels rushed.

Everything goes at a way too fast pace, with not enough descriptions that would slow down the dialogue and establish a better timing. The author really needs to look it over and describe everything better to make it more enjoyable. As it is now, the way it's written makes it difficult to get into the story and be interested in what happens next.

A damn shame, since the idea was interesting.

4786312 Sorry about that. I knocked it out in an afternoon as a one-shot to try to get past a writer's block. But I totally agree with you about it being rushed. I'll get to padding it out a bit more and I'll let you know when I do!

"Cock Sock"

Fucking brilliant!


Great story, awesome job!

I hope Sweetie Belle doesn't get her cutie mark as a cock sock.

I can't stop fuckin laughing at her cutie mark

Please excuse me for being the neïve----I cant even spell it right to my non-existent knowledge on the matter! Ha!!!----but what is a 'cock sock' exactly?

Is it just another way to refer to condoms?

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A warm and cozy place to insert your penis. It may also be used to describe someone used for sexual pleasure.

"Everyone that had slept with Emily said that she was one of the best cock socks they had ever experienced."

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Slightly disturbing, but not as much as some of my fav fics. So acceptable. Thank you for not beating the bush. Or were you beating the bush that's in the bush that's in the bush?!!

A great read it but it feels like the climax scene was a bit rushed and wasn't descriptive enough.

6544293 Yeah... it was kinda something I whipped up one evening after finding the... source inspiration. I have no excuse. And unfortunately, I don't really have any plans on coming back to this. But who knows.

The Cutie Mark part was hilarious. Her special talent is...being a cock sock. Well, she'll be able to make a great living as a prostitute, I guess.

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