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Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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HAH! Oh my god! :rainbowlaugh:

Well. Um. :twilightoops:

Isseus #6 · Mar 10th, 2014 · · 96 ·

Foalcon. Ban it with fire. Pedo bastard go rape kids.

Comment posted by Isseus deleted Mar 10th, 2014

XD Scootaloo

Hydran #11 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · 4 ·

4064060 then clearly you havnt notice that this is not real life.

lelelelele.....

We need more of this pairing. Perhaps an aged up Sweetie Belle/ AJ fic. :ajsmug:

Glorious... just glorious you genius bastard.

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You're a foalcon writer yourself. You're just flaming this story to make yourself feel better. Pathetic.

Good story btw

Isseus #17 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · 34 ·

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I love you people. Hell, one of you even knew what I write and STILL didn't get it. How did that song go again...

"You've been trolled, you've been trolled..."

I made that joke because usually those moralfags come to foalcon fics to downvote and rage. :p I upvoted without reading mwaaahahahaaa!

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Doesn't still justify shitting in this author's comment section. Really? You're gonna bring yourself down to that level?

4066086 You, my good sir, have now lost twice. :facehoof:

Isseus #21 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · 24 ·

4066098 Aaaaaand he goes for a hat trick! :facehoof:

4066081 unfortunately there is no telling tone in typed words.

4066081 sarcasm cannot be translated into text.

I didn't even have to see the mature tag to know where this was going. I still think FlutterBelle is better than SweetieJack though. :P

4064060 Now, if you'd just said this in a nicer way, or italicized some words and used bold on others to signify differing pitches when "saying" the words, then you might have
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Nailed It, but you didn't, so downvote for you.

4066081 Well, I for one dared him to write this story, preread it, and I can tell you that most people don't bomb a story for just having foalcon. But you can believe in whatever helps you sleep at night.

Well. Um. This story was poorly worded. And I only say that because I didn't touch myself. Hey-oh!~ :rainbowlaugh:

Have a like and a mustache for Spike. :moustache:

4066081 good thing I didn't waste my time with a full on rant like most do

4066108 Don't bother trying to save face. You're like the little fat kid at school that keeps shouting "No, you!" like it's supposed to be a comeback.

It's too late, everyone already knows you're a moron.

Isseus #30 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · 22 ·

4066284 I find it ironic that you stand here defending this fic, knowing I've had to block and report you for trolling in my fic... pots and kettles, eh?

4066582 Ooh! I have been duly chastised! Personal insults will surely prove your point on the internet!

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Hey, um, I think you missed a memo. Something that is very, very important for you to know.
THIS IS NOT REALITY!
THIS IS FICTION!
FANTASY!
DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT?!

Read it, enjoyed it, upvoted it.

4066601 LOL You reported me for TROLLING? Wow you are delusional, blind to your own faults, and though I've known it for a long time, extremely petty and small individual. You're the one that thinks pulling a half-time pity show out of the blue and fast paced shipping and lash out at your readers because they didn't agree with you?

wow. You really do have issues. Good to know, keep me blocked. You deleted a comment and thought you can say anything you want to make me look bad, and despite that I didn't report you. Because you're just not worth it. But what you did in this fic, what you tried to do when you attempted to bash and troll in One Word, honestly, if anyone needs to be reported it's YOU.

Out of respect of a friend though, I just chalk up your stuff as part of your anxiety problems. I know how that is, but at least I don't make excuses for stuff and randomly attack people and make poor 'jokes'.

Defend this fic? I can slap you with our skype convo in picture form if you think I'm just trying to mess with you. If you weren't so petty with blocking this would be in your inbox. I just hope you were smart enough to delete that dumb comment bashing you threw up on your "Not the place for this" rant on your story.

Your story didn't "deserve" anything. THIS story doesn't "deserve" anything. Each individual reader DECIDES FOR THEMSELVES what they like and if the story was given the love and effort to write a story.

You can go ahead and report me for "trolling" with this comment as you will call it. But I'll be happy to point out your petty attacks on other authors and show them the comment you deleted and accused me of calling people names which I've proven was just you being petty.

Do us all a favor. Go back to writing stories, review stuff in your old stuff and see what worked and what didn't, and go from there. I can point you to a lot of unbiased people who can word stuff more elegantly than me about the stuff you decide to live in denial of.

I don't block people. So you won't have to worry about not being able to respond to me anywhere. Good day.

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Well, you could have made it more obvious, that you are joking...:applejackunsure:

Isseus #35 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · 26 ·

4067877 First off, I really think this shouldn't be in the comments section of someone you value, because it has nothing to do with his fic and more about your wanting to once again attack me.

LOL You reported me for TROLLING? Wow you are delusional, blind to your own faults, and though I've known it for a long time, extremely petty and small individual. You're the one that thinks pulling a half-time pity show out of the blue and fast paced shipping and lash out at your readers because they didn't agree with you?

Yes, let's start with petty insults that you can not base on anything and just throw out without knowing the person you are attacking. I almost gave up here because frankly, when you insult someone, you are not going for a conversation, but trying to prove a point. Sorry to teach you one of the basics of communication, but that never works. Antagonizing someone never helps them see your side of the story or care about your opinions. I have not "lashed out" at any anyone, least of all my readers whom I value highly, In the comments section of my foalcon fic I said that I was disappointed, because I genuinely was, and that I think people who unjustly go to fics because of their subject matter to downvote them should go fuck themselves. I also mentioned that I understand that the topic was very touchy.

wow. You really do have issues. Good to know, keep me blocked. You deleted a comment and thought you can say anything you want to make me look bad, and despite that I didn't report you. Because you're just not worth it. But what you did in this fic, what you tried to do when you attempted to bash and troll in One Word, honestly, if anyone needs to be reported it's YOU.

You came to my fic and immediately lashed out at both me and JakeTheArmyGuy. You called my writing shallow with no examples and mostly your message was about how you didn't like the characterization of Diamond Tiara I was using in the fic. Your comment was very aggressive in its tone, just like your previous post here as well. You didn't come in to have a conversation or critique, you just wanted to come vent. I've said it a million times that I'm willing to talk about anything to do with my fics if the other person is civil about it. You were acting very immaturely, both towards me and Jake, so I decided to delete your comment and just excuse it as a bad day so you could save face as well. Here's the actual message:

I'm sorry I had to delete a comment from this section. I welcome criticism, but outright personal attacks and namecalling aren't of use to anyone. I'm sure Telaros just wanted to vent, but this just isn't the place for it. He clearly had differing headcanons about the character of Diamond Tiara than I did, so let us leave it at that, please.

You can't get any nicer than that, now can you?


Also, what does One Word have got to do with this? I left BW a very nice, constructive comment on a fic I liked? Here's the comment for you to re-read:

I'm a bit torn on this story. On one side, this was expertly crafted and beautifully written. I loved how you took your time setting the simple scene and kept it strictly in Diamond Tiara's perspective. She seemed too adult in her perceptions until I remembered she was telling it in adult hindsight to her own daughter. The description of Cheerilee was also fantastic. I honestly don't like the character of Cheerilee as she is portrayed in the show as she seems a bit too laid-back and even lazy in her teaching. She often ignores important events that everyone else knows and is ready to skip her whole lesson plan to go parade one of her students through a bustling marketplace etc. The side of her you show here made me think a lot better of her.

The big problem I have is that the literal crux of the story felt bland to me. The "one word" that Cheerilee delivers felt so... trivial. It didn't have the weight behind it that showed DT to feel. The expulsion bit was far more intense and seemingly held far more importance than just one word. I somehow don't see how it could have driven home the point. If it had been stressed earlier that she was going to "really try her best" and Cheerilee asked "Really?" and DT agreed. Then the word would have had far more impact. There's also a big 'What happened to the mouse" -moment in if DT get expelled from school or not? Sure, it's not important, but it also leaves out the repercussions of her finally breaking Cheerilee's last thread of trust in her.

I also half-expected Silver Spoon to be the pony who plays truant to avoid having to be with Diamond Tiara because even she feels DT is so nasty and doesn't want to hurt ponies any more. That would have also given a huge payoff, especially now that she was already absent from the scene. Think about how it would have turned out?

DT tells SS that Cheerilee scolded her.

SS is like "oh"

DT laughs and says that "Can you believe some ponies actually refuse to come to school so they wouldn't have to hang around with me cos I'm such a 'nasty bully'?"

And SS would just nod.

DT would even go as far as ask: "Hey, who do you think it is? Who's such a weak stupid idiothead that they wouldn't wanna be around me."

And SS would say, with tears in her eyes... "...me."

BAM! That'd be epic! Aaannd... I seem to have somehow gone onto a totally random tangent with the comment. Ooopsies.

Anyways, Even though I thought the actual "one word" was lacking, the rest of the story was beautifully crafted and the first scene with just DT and Cheerilee really brought up some good emotions in me. Especially the fact how out of her normal chipper character C was really brought me into the moment. Same goes for all the details, the little bits that brought the story really come alive. I especially felt that the moment the adult DT was telling her foal about the nasty words she was hurling at Berry Pinch, how bad she felt remembering the things, how sick it made her feel. I could just imagine it.

You write damn well, my friend.

bash and troll...

I have no idea what could possibly make you think of that as anything but positive?

Out of respect of a friend though, I just chalk up your stuff as part of your anxiety problems. I know how that is, but at least I don't make excuses for stuff and randomly attack people and make poor 'jokes'.

I'm so happy that you've found out so much about me just so you can use those things against me. Calling in someone's psychological problems as a weapon sure makes you look good. Yes, thanks for asking: Ever since I got my new medication over two months ago, I've been doing awesome. Before that I had a really dark period and you're quite correct that I wasn't the best person back then. I got through it with help from my friends on the site and other's I've met in the brony community.

Now, here's a funny thing: If you pull out 'a friend' without naming them, for me it's just a bluff. Also I have still not attacked people in this thread, apart from you, and that was in response on your (once again) overtly aggressive comment. Poor jokes are a staple of my existence for better or for worse, and I admit that I should have done this one more obvious.

Defend this fic? I can slap you with our skype convo in picture form if you think I'm just trying to mess with you. If you weren't so petty with blocking this would be in your inbox. I just hope you were smart enough to delete that dumb comment bashing you threw up on your "Not the place for this" rant on your story."

Sorry, but just like your comment in my fic, you once again write very emotionally and angrily. For example: "I just hope you were smart enough to delete that dumb comment bashing you threw up on your "Not the place for this" rant on your story."" is a sentence that I do not understand. I really tried to, but it just doesn't make any sense. Also suddenly you're talking about a Skype conversation? I'm sorry but you lost me here.

Your story didn't "deserve" anything. THIS story doesn't "deserve" anything. Each individual reader DECIDES FOR THEMSELVES what they like and if the story was given the love and effort to write a story.

I once again don't understand what you mean with "if the story was given the love and effort to write a story." I suggest that the next time you wish to rant, you take a deep breath after writing it, read it through, and only then post it. Right now you are coming off as a someone very immature and ragey, even if you weren't like that.

Allow me to link the actual comment you're referring to as lashing out:

Well, I can't really hide the fact I'm disappointed on how this fic was received. I understand that it's a taboo subject, but on my other fics dealing with the subject, Dominant Ideal and Lead. Care. Inspire. I have at least gotten pretty reasonable commentary and discussion, most of which has been pretty interesting. This time I spent over forty hours writing this fic, and CarcinoGeneticist spent countless hours editing it, and here we are. Didn't even make feature, which I fully expected I would. Hell, it's not even that! It's that from the moment I posted this fic, I got five downvotes in minutes, meaning that people came in just to stroke their moral organs and to downvote a fic they found objectionable. It didn't have anything to do with how the subject was treated or if the writing was good, it was just that they saw foals and the sex tag, spent 10 seconds opening the fic and clicking the thumb down and going on their merry way.

Let me put this in a nice way: Fuck you.

I wrote a blog about prejudice and people being afraid of their own thoughts a long time ago when Dominant Ideal came out. I suggest people give it a read... not that I'd expect any of the haters to even know how to read at all to begin with. Let them be happy reading their awesome Naruto-Halo-Fallout-Crossover-HiE-2nd person- gorefics starring YOU as Alucard fighting starships or whatever.

This fic was written as a gift to a friend and he liked it a lot. I'm really happy for that. I'm just pissed off at the FIMFic system.

I said nothing about deserving a spot in the feature box, though I did hope I'd get there with all of my hard work. The comment even clearly states that no, it is NOT about being featured. I said I was disappointed in people because I lost that chance solely because they downvoted a fic I wrote just because of the topic and characters in it, not the actual story or quality. If I receive five downvotes in under fifteen minutes of posting a 40k word fic, I can be sure that:

A) They didn't read the fic
B) I'm not going to get featured because of the FIMFic system.

You can go ahead and report me for "trolling" with this comment as you will call it. But I'll be happy to point out your petty attacks on other authors and show them the comment you deleted and accused me of calling people names which I've proven was just you being petty.

You have proven nothing to anybody except yourself. I deleted your comment because it insulted me and another reader without bringing anything rational to the conversation. You might have had a valid point, but because of the way you brought it out, i had no choice but to try and keep the comments section nice. I even tried to cover for you so you wouldn't look bad. Also which petty attacks are we talking about now? If you really want to bring your unmodified comment to the conversation, sure. I don't think this thread is the place for that, but I will also not unblock you, because from the comments in my fic and your post here, I am quite certain I do not wish you to be able to hurt others if I can help it, Just remember that you wanted to call me out here, bringing out several personal attacks once again.

Do us all a favor. Go back to writing stories, review stuff in your old stuff and see what worked and what didn't, and go from there. I can point you to a lot of unbiased people who can word stuff more elegantly than me about the stuff you decide to live in denial of.

Please do. Just make sure that these 'unbiased' people are actually just that, because I always value commentary and critique on my writing because it helps me improve. It's always nice to get more readers! :pinkiehappy:

I don't block people. So you won't have to worry about not being able to respond to me anywhere. Good day.

Bai

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Telaros, stop. Just save yourself the headache and stop. The guy is clearly bull headed.


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Don't go around reporting people for trolling when you yourself are acting pretty trollish, it makes you look like a hypocrite.

This story was a silly and awesome as I expected it to be. Good Job, Yukito. :moustache:

On the other hand, I think the comments section is just icing on the cake. :moustache:

I don't see Comedy Here Just Stupidity.

So when does AJ buy a white fan and give free candy to the fillies at the school?

I say this story was written pretty nice.

Isseus #42 · Mar 12th, 2014 · · 13 ·

4069261 Apparently you didn't read his comments and my answer. It's pretty clear that Telaros is lying as much as he can to save his own face and I've shown that without a doubt. I'm sorry it had to be in a completely unrelated thread, but as I said, I won't unblock him because he hurts people. I will not take this conversation further, because I've pretty much seen what kind of a person Telaros is and there's no reasoning with a liar.

finally got to read this. All I can say is good job, Yuki!

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Sweetiejack? Oh the absolute irony of that pairing name in this situation.

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That's why it's not tagged as a comedy...

4072136 Though the situation you suggested as such and how does it suggest slice of life for that matter, random defiantly but Slice of life, Whose life does it take a slice from, Who in there right mind would assist their young sibling in on such a sensitive subject.

4071514 Just leave this alone mate, you will not win. you did a mistake, and now you try to cover it up.


Anyway, avreage fiction with a funny ending. Good going, keep it up

Loved it! Sweetie is so cute!
I feel bad for Rarity, who'll now probably have to explain this to her.
Or Applejack, when she realizes what she just did.

"It'll be our little secret."

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Well I had to tag it something. I considered Random but, to be honest, I don't think AJ's actions are too 'out there' or spontaneously whacky enough to be considered random when you consider the episode it's set in.

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Holy mother of dislikes

That's almost as much dislikes as Knighty's post in the clopfics group about not posting NSFW images.

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