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Yukito


Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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A romance story with Twilight and Trixie, based in a world where Twilight and Trixie are a couple, and get together in secret to go on dates.

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 769 )

Very well written, and both Twilight and Trixie seemed to be in character. I'm not really that into Twixie but this is a good story, well done.

Hey There! This is really awesome.:twilightsmile: I think you have taken a good middle ground with Trixie's characterization. Some of the scene transitions are a little clunky/rushed. Also you have a typo: 'wear you cape'

Great stuff! Very well-written. You make good on emotions and on good, subtle humor. Thanks for sharing this, and I'll be looking for additions to this story, I hope you go through with that idea :D

There where some adorable moments in there, that's for sure. Good stuff, man.

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Fix'd! Thanks for pointing that out ^_^

You just had to make a reference to 'that' fanfic didn't you?

Loved it from start to finish. Can't wait for the next one when they tell the others.
All in all story well told well done my friend well done :rainbowdetermined2:

I see the concept and realize that this would be incredible.

I liked it so much, I was going to watch the author.

Then I realized that the author was Yukito. Someone I already watched.

YUKITO, WHY YOU SO GOOD?!!:flutterrage: You make my story look like crap!:fluttercry:

So I'm gonna stop watching you and then watch you again! How's that sound?:twilightsmile:

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I'm assuming you mean the famous Pinkie based one that begins with a C.
I like to imagine that, when Pinkie gets stressed out, she writes horror/gore stories to calm herself down, as opposed to going insane and having another tea party with inanimate objects again.

Trixie and I seem to have similar karaoke skills. :trixieshiftright:

What makes this work, for me, is the scene where Trixie is explaining the origin of her Cutie Mark and totally abandons her third-person references, arguably her least-appealing characteristic. ("Bob Dole," said ancient human Bob Dole, "disagrees.")

And these are two ponies I wanted to see shipped: Trixie's always tried to maintain a distance from the rest of the world, and Twilight always seems to think that nopony will ever want her because she's such a bookworm / egghead / recluse / whatever.

This was awesome, I am defidently looking forward to reading more of this story :) update soon please :pinkiehappy:
Also I noticed you had some sentences that had some errors in it, if you want I read fanfics almost religiously, I could pre read and point out these errors if you wanted :twilightsmile:
Btw. Twixie = awesome

Good story, Twixie, not clop, and there'll be more written as separate, related stories?
Watching.

I think we need a sequel about how the rest of the Mane 6 respond to Twilight and Trixie's relationship.

Erm... can you continue this story? With trixie coming with Twi to Ponyville?
It will be amazing! :twilightblush:

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I think I might just take you up on that offer in the future :3

A good, fun story.

I thought Trixie's backstory was a tad cliche, but that just may be due to me seeing so many similar backstories for her, that I've become desensitized. I also find it surprising Twilight didn't comment on the Sonic Rainboom.

Oh well. Either way, very good. A nice late night read for me before I go to sleep! :pinkiehappy:

And I don't think you need the sex tag. Everything you have is implied for the most part.

I really enjoyed this story, but it seems unfinished. All the hype for an exciting conflict of twi bringing trixie to ponyville? I duno but the ending WORKS but that doesnt mean it feels any less sudden.
Still, live your style! Please cotinue writing =D

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Yeah, I'm planning on have her bring it up later, so don't worry 'bout that.

And thanks, I'll remove the tag then if it's not necessary ^_^

Very, very nice. A bit saucy, but IMHO doesn't cross into mature. Trixie... so much untapped potential. So much ignored, too. I like how you write her.

Sooooo...*kicks dirt with hooves* 'uhhh, sequel? Please?

I loved this story. The sex tag is unnecessary. Also, this needs to be continued. This really felt like a single chapter in a larger story, and I want to know how they initially got together, and how Twilight's friends will react.

So adorable! Such a sweet little story, I can hardly wait for the sequel.
I'm going to pretend that said sequel is a definite thing, and not just a 'maybe', for the sake of my sanity. :twilightsmile:

As I read it, Boast Busters never happened in this world, and Twixie has never met the rest of the mane 6? In which case, Twilight's fear of telling them who she's dating seems a little over-wrought... only it's Twilight Sparkle so over-wrought and over-thought are not surprising at all :twilightsheepish:

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Oh no, Boast Busters did happen. But Twilight never really had anything against Trixie in my mind, and I like to think they could easily get along if they just talked to each other for a bit (which is basically what happened. They met by chance and talked a bit, and found they had a lot in common)

Out of curiosity, what made you think Boast Busters didn't happen?

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Thanks for clearing that up!

I read too much into "they met by chance at a sci-fi convention in Manehatten". I took that to mean "for the first time", particularly as you never make a direct reference to the events of Boast Busters. I now understand that they met again, after the events of that episode, hence Twi's uncertainty about [re]introducing Trixie to her friends. I was torn between the two interpretations as I read, and the wrong one won.

But Trixie, since the beginning, nopony has stood at the top, neither you nor I, not even Celestia herself!

That was actually a pretty sweet story, after it started with them mentioning gore fics I assumed it would end up being bad but you did a really good job on it. I hope to see more of this.

Gooooooood. Goooooooooooooood. Eeeeeeexcellent. :D

Well Spike took that much better than I thought... then again he was about ready to fall asleep so meh :twilightsmile:

So if it is a Twixie story, it will be set on Mars and everypony will be wearing Snickers ?

Hold on... *checks view mature box is unchecked* Wow... it's amazing what you can slip under the teen category :rainbowderp: I thought content like this:

Trixie was busy working her tongue over Twilight’s body, and all Twilight could do was fall to her haunches as she lost herself to Trixie’s teasing.

Was WAAAAAY out of bounds for a Teen fic. You learn something new everyday it seems. I'm not going to read anymore (sorry) it's too much :heart: if you catch my drift.

You spelt patiently wrong in the authors notes:rainbowwild:

1061509...I meant to do that :applejackpokerfaec:

1061669 That one actually was intentional :derpytongue2: Anywhom, patiently is now spelled correctly :3 :pinkiecrazy::yay:

You, my dear friend. have claimed my three millionth read word on this site^^
I love your story and everything you do with it.

I'm rather enjoying this. Looking forward to more. =3

Ohhhhhhhh,

This is an awesome pair!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhho!

Datin' on a prayer!

Take my hoof, and we'll make it I swear!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhho!

Datin' on a prayer!

:pinkiehappy:

I wish more people shipped Twinkie, and more importantly that they're good at it
You have done this:moustache:

Good to see this as one story, here. :twilightsmile: It just makes more sense that way.

Good on Spike, there. :pinkiehappy: And damn, pretty powerful scene with Trixie and the old gang, there. Can't wait for more!

Also,, best present EVER!:trixieshiftleft:

Well this is going to be interesting can't wait for the revalation of trixie learning of twilights family

Ah, this was another great chapter cant wait for more! And my I cant wait to see what happens when Twi and Shining meet up. I feel will be super cool or super awkward.
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Ah a beautiful bait and switch. I thought it was Shining Armor calling to Twilight. Since when does Equestria have terrorists, it's a fairly homogenous population.

Once they meet up with Shining and Cadance, it can be a TRIPLE DATE!!!!

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