• Member Since 15th Dec, 2011
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DarkJester


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157576
hey guy
i just read the summary ind
im thing this is gona be verry sexual
im i right

157576 Didn't read, but your comment tells me enough.

The cover art worries me...

Ewww. Icccck. Well written but....ugh.

Remind me why I read this stuff all the time?:trixieshiftright:

Oh, yeah, I enjoy seeing my childhood innocence burn in the purging fires of sex.:trollestia::pinkiecrazy:

157717
I find it funny and depressing at the same time that I follow in the same line of thinking.
I have been unable to keep from reading stories involving sex recently and it confuses me as to why :unsuresweetie:

#9 · Jan 25th, 2012 · · ·

who the fuck wrote this, to you i say BRAVO!!!!!!!!


and by "bravo" i mean "IM GOING TO FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE AND SHOVE A RUSTY SPOON INTO YOUR NECK AND TWIST IT TILL YOUR EYES EXPLODED AND YOU STATR BLEEDING FROM EVERY ORAFICE YOU HAVE, YOU SICK TWISTED FUCK"


love dashandpinkyFTW

who the fuck wrote this, to you i say BRAVO!!!!!!!!


and by "bravo" i mean "IM GOING TO FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE AND SHOVE A RUSTY SPOON INTO YOUR NECK AND TWIST IT TILL YOUR EYES EXPLODED AND YOU STATR BLEEDING FROM EVERY ORAFICE YOU HAVE, YOU SICK TWISTED FUCK"


love dashandpinkyFTW
157811:flutterrage::twilightangry2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::flutterrage::twilightangry2:

Well...that was...uh....hmm. Squick :pinkiesick:

Although, it was still fun to read, even if it was kinda...:applecry:

I love this stuff!!!! dont you judge me!

ha ha, awesome ending! :rainbowlaugh:

I NEED AN ADULT:raritydespair:

Dear fucking god. Why did I click on this? :twilightoops:

Umm... now dark jester normally I like your stuff, my little masochist being one of my favorites.
But this, while it was very well written, was just, uuggghhh. I have no problem with foalphilia (as I said I loved MLM), and non-consensual doesn't bother me that much (though I only approve if they both enjoy it in the end), but please have some kind of warning that a story features traumatizing rape. I knew from the summary that something not-entirely-to Appleblooms knowledge would happen, but I never would have guessed that it would be this horrible. So please, for the future, warn us. (Oh, and sorry about the hate, but it was something I had to say, and I still love the majority of your work.)

158327
While I respect your opinion, I am curious how you propose I do that? The tags/warning labels offered do not cover rape.

Second of all, from what I've both seen and written in the past, this rape is pretty mild. From my point-of-view anyways.

Yet, despite your feelings on the subject, you still read the whole thing anyways. I quite flattered!

158461 shhhhhhh...just let it happen:moustache:

And then Apple Bloom started the first convent in Equestria.

158405
Good point. I suppose you could put into the description, although that would probably be presenting too much information to the audience.

You are right on that. I am rather new to this, but I do know of some of the stuff that's out there. Perhaps after reading more stories, this won't even phase me.

Of course. Even if it wasn't quite to my taste, it was still a very good story. The fact that it distressed me enough for me to leave that rather worder comment is a testament to that. You are very talented, and I will continue to read all your works in the future.

Also, thank you for responding at all. Not many people would take the time to do that.

164058

Of course! Anything for a fan. ^^

hmm
A clopfic
:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
I
WILL
READ THIS
ALL
THE
WAY
THRU

um
i just read it and
lets just say clopfics arent for me
sorry:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

I havent read this one and I probably wont, no offense dark jester, just clopfics arent necessarily my thing. But you must have done quite a number in this one to make everypony so squeamish, makes me want to read it anyway

174926

your comments make me happy,

:applecry: :moustache: :ajsmug: nice, I say, though the idea of foals getting invloved did not appeal to me... it was certainly arrousing

Arrousing?:derpyderp2:
What ever

oh and thanks Ingwaz
Im glad i made you happy:twistnerd:

Loved it, ending was great. :heart:

I did not like this.
don't get me wrong, I like your other stories. Heck, I read "my little masochist" more than once.
However, this one just struck the wrong chord in me.
Guess I just cannot stand the whole non-consent thing.

157717
i will have to agree with you on that:pinkiecrazy:
:scootangel:=:pinkiecrazy:

It's just some harmless incest by colorful ponies on the internet
I don't see why I shouldn't enjoy it:pinkiehappy:

as long as this doesn't hurt people in real life, I couldn't care less

................:rainbowkiss:

poor apple bloom:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

i want to kill applejack now...

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<..<
....
>..>
.....
*click*

Write something like this again, and I will give your name to the Authorities. :ajbemused:

i recall this fic already being on furafinity i believe.....

OH GOD THAT ENDING, i laughed, i actually laughed xD

you are a sick man you need help:pinkiesick:

O yea awesome story :)
I would have loved to take apple blooms spot on the bed ;) lol

O'LORD JEEZUZ ! THE ENDING HAD ME IN TEARS! FUCKING CLASSIC! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

... :applejackunsure:....

The story itself, however... Well, it just lost all it's clop-value for me. Don't get me wrong, it was very well written, nicely paced and had rather humorous dialogue, but I found myself a little unsettled by RD's and AJ's demeanor's. How they treated her seemed strangely in character, yet I could never see them putting Applebloom through that much emotional torture. Yes, I know Rainbow Dash isn't a sister-type character, insensitive and all, but I would have at least expected sympathy and mercy from Applejack. I mean... She's her kin, they're so close in the show. :ajsleepy:

I'd have thought AJ would realize how much psychological pain that could give Apple Bloom, having to live with those memories all her life. :trixieshiftleft:

I kind of feel empty now... Well done, I suppose. :fluttershysad:

2386794
Thanks for the review, but sometimes in porn you just gotta break some rules so that you can clop to it efficiently. :D

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