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Incredible Blunderbolt

A post-active FIMFiction veteran who's been there, done that, and got the tee-shirt, kid.


When Twilight springs some great news on her friends, she didn't seem to notice that Rainbow was less than ecstatic. In fact, it was all the pegasus could do to not pin her down and force her to take it back! Now, time is running out, and Rainbow Dash has to make a decision. Should she take a chance? Nothing is worse than the road not traveled, right?


An Equestria Daily feature from a time when that meant something.

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Comments ( 69 )

Yay! It's here! I always look forward to your Twidashes. They're always heartwarming.

Well, that was cute.

I had to smile at "Marizona," though. You should feel bad for that pun. It was too obvious.

I liked it. A lot :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

DAYUM That was good.

Twidash for the win! :twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

Rainbow Dash felt a deep melancholy begin to fill her as she walked Twilight down the isle... of seats. I love this!

"The middle-aged mare with the newspaper leaned in close to the young earth pony in the seat next to her. “It's so nice to see young love blooming in these trying times,” she said. The earth pony nodded her head and adjusted her the bow in her hoof. She thought about a certain brazen deejay she was going to pay a visit to as soon as she arrived at her destination."

I see what you did there.

Ahhhhh. I love a nice, refreshing shipping fic.:twilightsmile:


It was. That's why I smiled.

It's no better than the puns that they make in the actual show, though.:rainbowwild:

A :moustache: for a splended story indeed.

Amazing story! It's so good! :twilightsmile: :heart: :rainbowkiss:

Please, do a sequel. It would be awesome! :pinkiehappy:

This was such a cute story. I really liked it. :twilightsmile:

Are we going to get a sequel?:twilightsmile:

This was a very adorable story. I loved how you portrayed Rainbow Dash - she seemed very in character, and the attitude was spot-on :twilightsmile:

That was so CUTE! :rainbowkiss: I'd love a follow up to that story so much. There were a few spelling mistakes, but nothing that took away from the main story which was well put together and kept me very involved throughout. Overall, I loved it! And I really hope as an author you keep contributing, be it similar stories or something new entirely.

Fillies and gentlecolts, might I call your attention to Manehattan and Fillydelphia?


I could have said "Neighbraska," "Neighvada," "Fillynois," or "Mane." :pinkiecrazy:


I was waiting for someone to say that! Here, have a 'stache! :moustache:


If there is significant enough demand for one, yes, I have a sequel idea that's ready to go.


Why thank you! :pinkiehappy: If you enjoyed that, allow me to point you to my other works: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=5882


Dat pic... :applejackconfused:

Thank you all for your favorites and comments!

874507 Thanking you kindly, good sir! I shall endeavour to check all your stories out in due time.. :twilightsmile:

A meme making the rounds these days: "I hate being bipolar. It's awesome."

I thought of that while watching Dash polish off that drink she hates so much she had eight of them. Still, that's the sort of thing she does, and really, no example of shipping is successful unless you can believe it. I believed every word of this one.

I DEMAND A SEQUEL TO THIS!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Twilight's a bitch in the beggining.

Anyways, this story is amazing! Can you do a followup for hearth's warming eve?
AUTHOR: This is definitely going to get featured, I know it.

epic story, would love to see a squeal... if thats ok with you :fluttershyouch:

After this story I can't live, not knowing how things will work out for them! :rainbowwild:

Very good! We need more demands for a sequel! Especially significant ones! :pinkiehappy:
If there is enough demands we will get a sequel. :twilightsmile:

That was a very nice story. :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

875501 wouldn't you rather HEAR a squeal?

fml... i was drinking last night and misspelled sequel :P

I think this definitely deserves a sequel. That and I really want to see what you do with their date. Great job on this.

This story needs a sequel so bad. So bad that I'm now going to follow you. Because not only do I want a sequel, but this was so nice and heartwarming.

Edit: Okay, Now I definitely need to watch you. Just looked at your stories and saw you did one of my favorite TwiDash's, "Trust".

I like "Trust" a lot! That's why I began watching The_Incredible_Blunderbolt in the first place. :twilightsmile:

And now we have another great TwiDash story. And it definitely needs a sequel! :pinkiehappy:

Wow... I usually hate shipping, but I found this incredibly emotionally compelling. Your characterization of Rainbow Dash was awesome! You kept her in character, but added a completely believable lovesick side to her. I think everyone has felt something like that at one point in time so it felt both sypathizable and realistic. It added an emotional connection and that's why even a grimdark addict like myself was able to understand what Rainbow Dash was going through.

Again I hate shipping and you got me to care/d'aaawwww through the whole thing.
+1 thumb. Very impressive.

Wow, I'm impressed. Great writing, great pacing, great story.

And so many feels! nerddogueto.com.br/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/i-know-that-feel-bro.jpg

Excellent. That's the only word capable of describing this.

This story where amazing!
Please make a sequel to it i must know if it works out for them!

I think I can safely say the demand is sufficient! Sequel! If you don't I'll... I'll.. I'll scream! :fluttershbad:
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Wow that was great! I enjoyed it very much. Great writing too. Ahhh, TwilightxRainbow is always the best, apart from TwilightxLuna of course. xD

I hate how Twilight treat Rainbow Dash is the beginning, but I'm glad that her friends disaprove her attitude at the train station. Also, I like the ending, it's realistic and cute :twilightsmile:

This is the first truly good story I've read lately. Very well written! :twilightsmile:

Congrats on EqD! :twilightsmile:

I've had this on my read later list for months... gah, now I really have to read it!

"A train traveling sixty miles per hour leaves the train station. Ten minutes later, a pegasus pony traveling up to Mach five starts chasing it." How awesome is that?

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, I would remove the comedy tag.

You should definitely write about what happens on Hearth's Warming Eve.

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