The dragon-pony hybrid story has always interested me, so this is my version of if Twilight sparkle was a dragon-pony hybrid.
Her mother is a dragon OC I created and her father is also an OC, so keep that in mind when reading the story, and Spike will be her younger half brother.
In this story, we will be following the life and times of Violet, then her hybrid daughter Twilight, and Spike, I'm going to be including some parts of the show, like holidays, major events, and even a twist on how she got her cutie mark. Also since a lot of episodes in the show are season based I'm going to rearrange a lot of episodes to make the seasons make more sense.
Chapters (30)
Please combine all current chapters into one and please minimize chapters to 1000 or 2000 words thanks
>>Ragebob
Yeah about that, you see I like to write my stories in sections that way it's easier to know when to stop and move on to the next, also it's easier for me since sometimes I just a burst of inspiration and other times it will take me a while to write the next section.
moreplease
i like it and please cure Bookworm
I say let him die from the illness ^,..,^b
Please cure Bookworm! :)
You already stated that Bookworm is going to die in the description. Keep up the good work!
I actually didn't outright state that he's going to die, I left it open ended because I really am torn between curing him or killing him off. I honestly needed an excuse on why Spike is Twilight's half brother and a full dragon, unlike miss hybrid, but now I'm not so sure if killing off Bookworm is a good excuse anymore.
As a balance between the two options, I think you should cure him but he should have a disability as a scar from the disease or whatever he has.
>>Robotic Soulcharm
That's an interesting idea do you have any suggestions for the disability?
7867352 I'm not really sure. I thought maybe you had a couple ideas that would be good as disabilities.
i want him to live
wait he is alive :D
Meh I still vote for death if nothing to show that magic can't cure every thing yes yes I know both paths are somewhat cliche but would make a lesson for young Twi.
Wow you are a cruel person death of the mind is still a long drawn out DEATH! But eh death always wins.
ok this is lovey story I want moar
i like it and twilight went to moon dancer party O_O
>>dream1990
Of course, she did, she didn't read the book yet.... it's that book the one about Nightmare moon coming so without that distracting her she went to the party.
make me wonder how ponyville going to treat twilight, and how discord going to react to her...
keep up the good work,
>>Eshiraith Malyra
Ah right, that... I'm doing the story as I continue it, ideas come to me and I work with them. Sometimes I change my story a bit if something isn't working for me and my readers like, the whole Bookworm dying thing was changed. I'm not sure what to do with the story arcs because I have to rework a lot of elements in those arcs to make them work...
Friendship is magic, the return of harmony, a Canterlot wedding, the crystal empire, magical mystery cure, princess twilight sparkle, Twilight's kingdom, the cutie map, the cutie re-mark, the crystalling, and to where and back again are all major story arcs I have to rework and they are all major events I have to add in because I said I would. Some I don't have to change much but others I have to change a lot, when the time comes I might just ask for your guy's opinion on what I should do, and what I should or shouldn't change.
there made it easier on myself I took away her wings, why? Because magical mystery cure gives Twilight wings, so the solution? Just take them away and give them back when it happens.
well I can't wait for the next chapter, and I can easily see Fang coming back at a later date.
FIRST ONE 2 READ!!!!!
"AJ laughed, "Oh is that why you asked? We apples don't judge others on appearance," yah well see if thats true when zecora comes around agian.
>>ObsidianDust
Zecora comes from the everfree forest, wears a clock, and does some odd things. She appears in episode nine of season one but in episode six of season one what came out of that forest? Oh yeah, the Ursa minor, so their fear of anything that comes out of that forest was explained early on, also this was way before the forest wasn't so scary anymore.
good chapter, I cant wait till she meet fluttershy, or rarity,
well I am quite interested in what/whom Rarity has worked with.
I kind of want twilight to meet discord,
I half expected for nightmare moon to think twilight to be discord return or freak out at first at twilight.....
Also make me wonder how they react to the zebra
7901935 I think they will still treat Zecora the same.
got to admit i like the therm you got hear the higher the number of chapters the the higher the word count
7907630
I've always have had a bad habit of doing that but it's just my writing style. I start with the first chapter and end it when I see fit, the next I make longer than the first and so on and so forth. It makes it easier for myself to know how much progress I've done, how much sentences I need to do to be longer than the last, and know when to stop.
7907675 ya I get it. I am just saying I like I because it is a wrighting style I don't see often, and I like how even though each chapter is getting longer it feels like it isn't with the way u wright. And while I am reading it is like all the chapters are all the same langth
have to say I love the running gag of how no one seem to care that she a hybrid
wait twilight has no wings, but I though base on the cover picture that she had wings.....
7908594
I took away her wings because of magical mystery cure, where Twilight the unicorn get's wings and I thought the story arcs will make more since if Twilight the hybrid doesn't have wings until that story arc.
7907726
I'm glad about that fact, I don't want my readers to get bored reading long chapters but at the same time give them something fresh and new, if the chapters feel the same length but aren't then I know I'm doing the right thing.
7908715 ok then thank for letting me and others knew
good story btw keep up the good work
I expected an AU but these are practically rewrites of the original chapters.
7909829
I guess I can work harder to make them more AU... sigh. I hope you realize I already have the major story arcs to completely rewrite, I just can't skip to them, like, 'I just stopped Nightmare moon!' next chapter, 'Here we are at the gala!' and it's like where's the rest?
Easton has a very good point on to that slow it down a bit I would like to know more about this version of Twilight the other five you don't need to change up as much. What dose this Twilight like to eat dose she eat pony only foods, gems, meat? How is she dealing with the fact her ill father is in a hospital in Canterlot? How is her mother handling the news of this on top of the fact Celestia put her daughter in danger like she did? Why would Twilight wish to go to a event only to be stared at and give odd looks by everyone? Why isn't Twilight flame breath enchanted to send letters to Celestia as it would be a better option? I would like to know stuff like this as of now it's just been a quick run down of the show only with a hybrid Twilight.
7910059
Okay I give you guys make good points, ask me questions in the comments and I'll answer them in the story as best as I can fit them in.
Wait a sec... Twi already ate meat why is she still hungry?
i kind of want to see how everything with the dragon in the cave and the dragon migration going to happen
7910829
as a teenage dragon hybrid, she needs to eat more than a normal pony, Spike is still a baby dragon so he doesn't need to eat as much.
7911462 good answer,
good story keep up the good work,
7911462 okay well understood.....thanks
"We apples don't judge others on appearance" Yeah right!
good chapter,