A parent would do anything for their children’s happiness and to keep them safe, even if it was painful for them. Queen Chrysalis knows this more than anyone when she had no other choice than to send her only daughter away, and it still hurts to this day. However, after almost two decades of separation, a royal wedding will bring them together at long last. But how will the young mare take this? Will she accept her heritage and return to her mother, or will she shun her? Only time will tell…
Mostly inspired by Change.
(Cover may have alicorn Twilight and not be anthro, but the image explains itself)
Chapters (3)
That description is word for word from another story.
7518791 Plagarism confirmed?
Well you've got my attention. I'm curious where the crossovers comes in.
I see where you got your inspiration, i like it so far
7521603 Little bit of Warhammer 40k and Age of Sigmar, little bit of Killzone and maybe some other things.
7518791 Really?
I'd like to know what the story's called if it's EXACTLY the same as mine. If it is, maybe we'll have a problem. If not, then I'll just ignore it and do my own thing.
hmmmm I am enjoy the start,
this is awesome! lol I keep forgeting, Anthro ponies! but seriously you're really good at writing. I'm quiting writing, well attempting to, and doing more art cause its fun
7529442 Thanks!
If you want to, you could make some title images for my stories. I give you my full permission to do so if you wish, but know that you MAY be competing with a friend of my sister, as I'll use the one I think is best. But don't worry if your's doesn't make the cut, I'm sure it will still be awesome and I'll link it so that you can get credit.
On a side note, why'd you change your image?
7529832 *shrugs*
This is really cool! I can't wait for more!
Interesting, I wasn't sure if I was going to read this or not 'cause there are a lot of stories where Twi goes off the deep end after finding out a secrete about her birth. I like it when Twi is open minded and well that doesn't happen often or it isn't handled well. But hey, if ya write something good I won't can how ya choose to go about the reveal. I look forward to seeing where you go!
Hmm, I wonder how will this one turn out. So far I like it. I wonder if, aside of changing her form into a point foal, Chryssie also cast a charm of Twilight, or maybe changeling nymphs naturally cause others to want to care for them.
Curiouser and curiouser. I'm interested in the story behind the hive and what seems like an Asgardian that became Chryssie's father.
With ponies it's really a lottery whether you encounter a total racist bastard or an open minded gentle soul.
I'm quite sure Chryssie has to use all her willpower to avoid just hiding Twilight all the time.
Hey, look at that, you were added to a group.
7649757 I'm guessing that was you then? Never knew this existed until now.
7650017 Well, you do now
okay partner, very interesting start, please continue
What this crossover with?
When the next chapter going to be out?
7706005 Hopefully after the third chapter of my other story, "The TwiDash Imperium" gets posted.
7713185 ok and will that be out?
I am interested to see which path this story will take.
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hmmm make me wonder what the recation of everyone will be for twilight,
yea for update hope for more
It's good to see new updates, also I hope that we will see next one soon (Maybe we also see new chapter in other stories, like The TwiDash Imperium)
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Yes, reactions are always the best part
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So i’m I
It lives!
I liked this chapter, these changelings are really badass. Makes me think they might originate from another world entirely.
Can't wait for more.
‘towards the room that her old foalsitter and future sister-in-law stayed’ - stayed in
‘a quick looked around’ - look
‘and changed topic’ - the topic
‘she asks worriedly’ - asked
‘also treating to anypony’ - remove to
‘he asks’ - he asked
‘Suffuse to say’ - suffice
‘irrite’ - irate
‘Chrysalis pushed passed’ - past
‘and run to her daughter’ - ran
8217866 Thanks for spotting the errors, I’ll fix them soon.
I think you mean whirled which is the word you are looking for here.
Interesting. I do love me some Twi is a changeling.
not bad I like the bad ass changling
I'm liking it
will there be more?
PLAGIA
(I thought it would be a go to gag)
Mmh so good so far.
Waiting for more, to give a clear idea about your story.
(Usually I dislike anthro, and I still don't have a real reason as to why you are using anthro. I hope there is one because for now the only thread that could serve as a proof is chryssi's father.)
More damn it!
I usually hate anthro, but this is great. MOARRRR!!!
Well I must say you have my attention. Usually antro stories throw me for a loop but the story was interesting and kept my attention. Can’t wait for more.
update?
So I take it with Nick Fury and the mentioning of Asgardians, this is based around the Avengers for this Equestria's timeline and that Earth might appear later on?
A remake? And your own take on it... Nice
Got more? Sorry I am asking this but this is too interesting
all right you have my attenion, cant wait to see more, plans for an update soon?
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It's dead?
Next to come: Lokie attacks the Crystal Empire and Applejack says; “It seems to ran off of electricity.”
some many marvel comic reframces
9912748
nice
I think it was too short. Where's the next chapter?