Princess Luna had many Children she took under her wing, those who were forsaken and abandoned. But one night Luna found a foal who was different from all of her other Children she cared for. This Child was day-night-walker, or more commonly known as a Two-World Walker, a Child who could walk between the night and the day without needing magic.
Luna was the only other pony closest to the young filly, and understood how she felt to be misunderstood. The Other pony was a young colt named Dracula, who envied the filly he named Twilight Amila Sparkle. Many other Children of the Night envied her as well, for she was half vampire half unicorn, but stronger than both, but Little Twilight wasn't stronger than a werewolf pony(were-pony).
What happened when Twilight left the Children of the Night for some unknown reason? What if Cadence knew of Twilight's secret, never told anypony?
Twilight was adopted by Twilight Velvet and Night Light after her 100th year of living, but she never told them what she really was for she didn't trust them enough with her secret... They wanted to help Twilight with her problems, but she always hid herself within the shadows of her room or the forest out side of Canterlot. She hated the fact that she was a half-breed and no pony she knew was around anymore. Twilight often ran away from home, hoping to find her brothers and sisters of the Night but she never did...
inspired by: Children of the Night
Love this is there going to be more?
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Yes but I'm having trouble starting Chapter 2: Twilight's Secret Revealed...
Do you have any ideas that may help?
Night
6134336 Sorry but I am almost all ways stuck on writers block but you should read some filly twilight stories as well as some twilight vampire stories to get some ideas. I do that when I need inspiration and I am still trying to get a new story out. I hope that helped a littlie. Love the Story
TwilightXLuna Out
Loved it cant wait fore more
6177810 there on the and we have somepony special in the next Chapter...
Do you know who he might be?
Night
6178243 No but I am thinking Cadence
6178263 nope not Cadence....
But if you think hard you might just the name of the pony....
Night
6186209 Flutterbat
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Nope but super close
And Chapter 3 is done
Enjoy...
Night
Are u going to make some more chapters please say yes
I really liked it hope to read more soon
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Yes I am...
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There's on the way...
Night
When is the next update
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No clue but until the chapter's done I have in clue...
Night
If you need help I can help
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That'd be great...
Okay so...
This Next Chapter is a flshback, about 3 days after Twilight was adopted by Twilight Velvet and Night Light.
Cadence foalsat Twilight for at least a few hour before telling her she had a secret, one just like little Twilight's bit a bit different.
I'm kinda lost on what to start out with...
Night
I let you know when i come up with a start off
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Thanks
Night
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This is what I have so far...
What do you think?
Night
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I think its a wonderful way to start it
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Thanks but whenever I'm close to spelling a word right it get by an Auto-Correct feature on my computer, and strongly dislike that feature...
Night
Do you know how to continue the flashback from where it left off?
Because I'm stuck, like my mind has been glued, or something like that...
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I try first time to do and help with a fanfic and go to your settings and turn off auto correct
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I've try but I can't find the button for it...
Well, I'll keep looking...
Night
But what do you think about to continue the start I've come up with?
Nevermind found it....
Loving it- keep it going it's a great story.
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thanks - and there's more to come
Night
i like the story so far cant wait for the next chapter
Cool chapter
Cute can not wait for more
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Dracula and Twilight are closer than anypony even Princess Luna knows. Twilight was treated like a Goddess, or anything else that would you feel like should proudly worship her. Dracula was her protecter, best friend, and a special somepony, but she never even knew that.
Twilight hated being enived, and what cuased her to leave the Shadow Garden in the first place.
Night
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Thanks
Night
Soo diabetes inducing cute! Moar?
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working on Chapter 5 now....
Chapter 5's taking a little longer than expected to finish...
But it almost done...
Night
Love it hope to read more soon
That is a lot of "thou"s in a four sentence paragraph. But I still like none the less.
Great chapter can not wait for more
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Thank you all for your comments, I can't thank you enough for your advice or tips you've given me.
Night
this is a very good story. might sound cheezy but it felt like reading a poem every chapter so far as been very nice to read. keep up the great work. ^_^
6307789 is this story dead?
7043421 no just tons of writer's block
7328739 sorry to hear that. Do you know when you might start again?
7328769 yes i will
Don't worry, this story will be up and running again as soon as possible
7328908 good. Its such a great story...I'd hate to see it die
7328921 really could use help and suggestions would really work
7328946 make the chapters longer lol. Like a lot longer
7328946 I'd also suggest that you talk to Dark0592 for help cause he wrote a very successful vampire/batpony twilight story. But sadly he hasn't been on in about 3 weeks
7328954 will do
And thanks for the suggestion
7328991 no problem. Always happy to help. If I think of anything else I'll let you know