As Dracula waited for hours that felt like an eternity, waiting for his secret lover to awaken from passing out several hours before. Dracula and Twilight were closer than anypony even Princess Luna knew. Twilight was treated like a Goddess, or anything else that would you feel like should proudly worship her. Dracula was her protecter, best friend, and a special somepony, but she never even knew that herself. Twilight hated being enived, and that's what cuased her to leave the Shadow Garden in the first place. She ran for days that slowly became weeks, weeks became months, months became years, and for 90 years she never came back home.
"I wish you would just told me why you left, Twilya." Dracula said as he sat there ever since he kissed his lover, he hadn't once moved from his spot.
The sound of groaning caused Dracula to look at Twilight's face, she was waking up. Using a wing, Twilight covered her eyes to keep the blinding light of the setting sun from hurting them. Twilight's eyes soon adjusted to the light around her, she could barely think of anything to say to Dracula, when she recognized the time of his voice.
"Dracula... Is that you?" Twilight asked her voice was soft, calm, and reassuring. Her necklace seemed her eyes to jump out at him, he didn't notice the bright night blue diamonds on the heart made Twilight's eyes shine like stars. Twilight felt like she was dreaming having only one of two ponies who made her feel welcome and wanted in the Shadow Garden.
He could remember the nights he had spent with his Mother,
I was overjoyed when I figured out that Luna wanted me to be the one to make the decisions for the Shadow Garden. Princess Luna came to me on a beautiful and foggy night and we talked a top one of the turrets of the castle.
She said looking out at the gates of Shadow Garden, "I need some pony to keep special watch over Twilight. I think that shall be thou.”
I could not feel my hooves. Over the many nights since my arrival in Shadow Garden Princess Luna certainly taken a like in me but I wasn’t expecting this. I looked up at my mother and her eyes peered right back at me. She wasn’t that taller than me but you could see the difference in height. I tore my gaze away from her and said looking out as I saw dozens of ponies going about their business. "Are you sure there isn’t anyone else?”
Princess Luna sighed heavily giving a slight grin, "Thou hath not be so modest. No one is ever more capable than thou. Since Twilight’s first night thou hath shown many improvements of protection around her. I am even making thou Twilight's protecter.”
I did not say another word. It was all that was on my mind at the moment. She was correct in saying that my dark powers have grown since my first night. As Twilight's protecter it would just make her feel accepted. I looked up at the beautiful and shining moon that allowed my mane and eyes to glisten in the light.
I said, "I am honored to be her protecter, Mother.”
Luna smiled and said in a soothing voice, ”This is good news. Dracula, from this day forward you shall be Twilight's Protecter.”
Twilight remembered that night, it changed everything but there was one thing didn't, the others worshiping her. The next night was the night Twilight ran away from the only she'd ever known.
Love it hope to read more soon
That is a lot of "thou"s in a four sentence paragraph. But I still like none the less.
Great chapter can not wait for more
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Thank you all for your comments, I can't thank you enough for your advice or tips you've given me.
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this is a very good story. might sound cheezy but it felt like reading a poem every chapter so far as been very nice to read. keep up the great work. ^_^
6307789 is this story dead?
7043421 no just tons of writer's block
7328739 sorry to hear that. Do you know when you might start again?
7328769 yes i will
Don't worry, this story will be up and running again as soon as possible
7328908 good. Its such a great story...I'd hate to see it die
7328921 really could use help and suggestions would really work
7328946 make the chapters longer lol. Like a lot longer
7328946 I'd also suggest that you talk to Dark0592 for help cause he wrote a very successful vampire/batpony twilight story. But sadly he hasn't been on in about 3 weeks
7328954 will do
And thanks for the suggestion
7328991 no problem. Always happy to help. If I think of anything else I'll let you know
you could have twilight's friends find out her little secret?
When are you going to continue the story???!!! I ❤ THE STORY