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MetalBrony823


A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/

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This story is a sequel to Sister


Twilight wanted to help Spike be happy, and heal his broken heart about not knowing who his parents were. She became a teenage dragon to make him happy and bring a smile on his face. She does like this new look and transformation, but she realizes that being a dragon is not as easy as it would sound it would be. She asks for a certain friend that she knew to help her out with it, Princess Ember, the new dragon lord of the dragon kingdom, far from Equestria to help her out with that. Can Ember help Twilight be a better pony-turned-dragon?

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 54 )

Well, dragons also eat meat and they have magic-proof scales. I dunno if dragons have their own brand of magic, although it would have a resemblance to the Thu'um of Skyrim. Or maybe the magic is all in the fire or something along those lines. Heck if I know.

Nice, however there are several minor spelling errors (Sox, Sragon and i'll)

more more more mahahahaha

I would like to see another sequel.:heart: It is a very interesting concept and you should continue to explore more into it. :pinkiehappy:

I would love to see a sequel. I can't help shipping TwiDragon and Ember :rainbowlaugh:

Of course, I love it this fiction about him and Dragon Twilight.

Sike and his friends looked on sadly at her.

Spike

i'm sorry I didn't see yoy there... "Are yoy okay?

I'm, you, and you.
There were at least two more mistakes involving "i'm," earlier in the text.

Good start so far.

I would love to see more dragon-twilight stories from you.
Keep up the great work!

Yeap. because they still haven't told Celestia, Luna and Candance

Yes of course we would like another sequel.

Yes please. More Twidragon. Want to see how Canterlot or the rest of Equestria reacted to Twilight becoming a dragon and her visiting the dragonlands with her little brother.

Yes please don't stop keep them coming :pinkiehappy:

You still need to show Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Candace, Starlight Glimmer, Trixie, Twilight's family and her canterlot friends and of course Sunset Shimmer reaction to dragon twilight. You could get some hijinks in with the portal. Would Twilight become a dog? Or would she come through like a biker like Ember did on the Equestria Club Story?

We don't get many stories like this. So yes more! :flutterrage:

U bet i what a follow up story following this one

I felt this chapter was a little repetitive first have ember say how Twilight is good and then the main six say Twilight is good and spike twilight is good at breathing fire. I would suggest you focus more on the sights and sounds of the environment and what's happening and throw a little bit more conflict into the chapter.

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I don’t think dragons are magic proof mlp vise. Twi easily floats spike around with her magic Shirt he’s a baby, but still.

Hello?? Are you OK over there?? Well even if you don't answer this, I just hope everything is going good for you In Real Life.

8615002 Everything's just fine at the moment.

I think it would be cool to have more sequels after this but only if you want to write more I find story's are a lot better if the writer is enjoying his or her self wile doing it

heck yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please do another sequel.

Mayday! mayday! Twilight 1 is down! :rainbowlaugh:

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I agree with the epic lava tree pony.

HECK YEAH !!!!!!!!!!! IM NOT GOING TO TAKE NO AS AN ANSWER

A great sequel here and I’m eager for more! Do another please!

There better be a sequel or i’ll lose it.

Make it so that Twilight Sparkle and Spike will visit Ember in the Dragon Lands.

Love it please make another

Make a sequel right now or Tartarus shall swallow you.

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This is ember 1 twilight 1do you need assistance? :rainbowlaugh:

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we 10/4 purple dragon in a nosedive! requesting assitance through brace pillows! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

9375781 easy. I will make a sequel someday. Probably next year

"I am so sorry, sir!" Twilight was about to go to his aide now, but accidentally ran over Lyra and Bon Bon in the process, knocking them to the ground. She was beginning to panic and didn't know exactly what to do. She wasn't all that big of a dragon like the size a little bigger than the stall Applejack was running, her tail did a lot ofbdamage, and so did her body.

Of damage

"Oh don't worry about us, Sugarcube." said Applejack. "We'll be just fine. You might be a dragon now, but you're still the Twilight we all know in love."

And love

You should really do some rereading, I found quite the amount of typos in the last few chapters.
The story is still nice:twilightsheepish:

The red dragon instantly flew up in the air, and caught both of them off guard. It was just then Twilight felt something grab her as if she was being thrown by a comet from outer space. Garble was trying to plummet her to the earth, but Twilight was quick, and she blew fire in Garble's face, temporary blinding him

Twilight still can perform magic, why didn't she use it

Yes you should proof read first then print it out or try Grammerly ?

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