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morion87


Show cannon only matters if you let it.

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Princess Skystar wasn't sure what to expect when she went to look at a disturbance on Mount Aris. Certainly not an unconscious lavender alicorn.

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Twilight Sparkle is a pony without a past. Her memories are gone and all that remains of her previous life is her name.

The only life she knows now is what happened after she woke up in Queen Novo's throne room. A life she loves.

But what happens when her past comes calling?

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Ooooh....
I LIKE THIS,!
I am REALLY excited to see where this goes..

So if by instinct will twilight still be the same nerdy bookworm
Nd plus the mane five will they nto take it well and try and force twilight to come back, especially dash

Ri2

Hmm. This looks to be interesting. Intrigued by the minor world-building so far, and curious to see where it's going.

Also, it's 'Coral,' not Choral.

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Somewhat. Twilight's bookworm tendencies will be there but severely taken down a notch. Seaquestria doesn't have enough books to set it off. It's all wall pictures or magic.

As for the Mane 5, well they'll learn next chapter why that would be a severly, horribly, bad idea. Celestia and Luna already know why and why they're not even trying at the moment.

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:twilightblush: Or is it?

No seriously, Grammarly isn't flagging it as spelled wrong. So I don't know. Spellcheck isn't either.

And thanks.

Ri2

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It thinks you mean choral, as in a chorus, rather than coral, as in the marine life.

And I'm guessing the 'third' you're considering is Seaspray? Cute!

So do royal seaponies naturally live longer, or is it a trait for their whole species? What differentiates royals from the rest?

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That makes sense. As for the royals, it's their longer lifespan. They're the seapony version of alicorns. Even those not directly in line for the throne, like Ocean Flow and Silverstream, have it.

As for the third, nope. Look at the character tags. That should tell you.

Ri2

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Meant Silverstream. Got the name wrong

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Then your right. Helps since she, Twilight, and Skystar are all the same age here. Or at least within a few months anyway.

Will we learn why Twilight's memories are never coming back?

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It won't be shown. But the Elements of Harmony erased them when Twilight finished Starswirl's spell. Basically sticking it to Celestia for, well everything Twilight and the girls went through to this point.

Twilight got it because she was the focus of the spell. The girls haven't changed.

Twilight never made it to the Astral Plane (aka the stary place where Celestia met her.)

As for why, there's literally nothing to bring back. Her memories have been erased from existance.

Looking forward to more since I believe this is the only twilight x skystar story here

So the elements are punishing twilight to punish Celestia

The elements are jerks

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They're not punishing Twilight. They're punishing Celestia. Twilight's amnesia was the only way they could giver her a new life away from Celestia's manipulations and shadow.

At the same slapping Celestia in the face with a baseball bat for a lot of things.

As for Twilight and Skystar? I thought it was. Twilight's already having a major crush on her. It'll be mutual eventually.

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Heh, that's a great idea. Might have to get that a spin of my own, preferably in a crossover.

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Which part? I have no idea what you're talking about here.

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They're not punishing Twilight. They're punishing Celestia. Twilight's amnesia was the only way they could giver her a new life away from Celestia's manipulations and shadow.

It won't be shown. But the Elements of Harmony erased them when Twilight finished Starswirl's spell. Basically sticking it to Celestia for, well everything Twilight and the girls went through to this point.
Twilight got it because she was the focus of the spell. The girls haven't changed.
Twilight never made it to the Astral Plane (aka the stary place where Celestia met her.)
As for why, there's literally nothing to bring back. Her memories have been erased from existance.

Her memories are gone and all that remains of her previous life is her name.

This overall idea. Heh, but I would do it a little differently, maybe revert her to a foal or a filly, but still keep the alicorn ascension or maybe change her into something else, like a draconequus.

I still would like to make mine a crossover.

Wow, I really like this so far.

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It’s kind of a punishment to Twilight and her loved ones. You can choose to visit a body but the nurture part of your friend is gone as well as everything that made you friends in the first place. Twilight as she was is basically dead, in her place is merely a blank vessel. If the elements wanted to punish Celestia they should have just taken her power away as opposed to making everyone else suffer.

Don’t get me wrong though, I am looking forward to the next chapter I just have to question your reasoning.

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Why do authors do what they do to characters? Because we can, and we have no obligation to explain why. If people want that, then find an author who panders to it.

I don't feel a need to explain every little bit of a story.

As for where the idea came from? I honestly have no idea what made me think of it. It wasn't the film that did it, even though I'm using the characters from it.

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I wasn’t asking for an explanation I was just saying the logic seems flawed. It is merely my opinion.

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Logic is overrated. If I like it, then I usually go for it.

MOAR Please X3

I love Seaponies X3

Finally Pinkie Pie spoke up. "I just have one question. What's a seapony?"

The word "sea" is in the name, Pinkie. :facehoof:

I wonder if the other elements are going to try something rash.

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To be fair a seaman is someone who work on a boat or ship.

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Plus writing Pinkie as knowing literally everything is stupid and lazy writing this does far too much.

Rarity had fainted,

Classic Rarity, leave it to her to always do the one solution when it comes to something dire: Fainting :rainbowlaugh:

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Think about it for a minute. What would that look like to Twilight? Ponies who say they're her friends, yet they're trying to take her away from the friends she does have.

Big bucket of nope.

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And I'm injecting common sense into it. Someone else would probably be lazy enough to go that route.

Nice job on this chapter, I liked the Old Ones.

I notion for Twilight to stay in Seaquestria please X3

Well this should've been obviously coming if you'been paying attention. All Twilight is missing at the moment is her own Pearl Necklace.

Well of course, given my love for the Seaponies no doubt! X3 :yay: :heart:

*grins grows*
YES, I am excited for this.

Ri2

A kraken? Oh boy!

Ri2

...Those kraken are creepy.

So, how'd the Royal Family tame them, anyway?

Ri2

Cosmos? As in Discord's crazy ex Cosmos?

Ri2

Don't fuck with Seaquestria.

Still, can't help pitying Tempest a little...

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They didn't. It's more by mutual consent the family can command them.

Ri2

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How did that come about?

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Fuck no. That thing has no right existing. This Cosmos is my own character.

Ri2

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Oh, thank god

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Because I thought it was an awesome idea and that's what I'm sticking with. I might fill in how and why eventually.

Ri2

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Well, it IS awesome so good job.

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