A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/
Pipsqueak was just woke up on the wrong side of the bed, after the events of "Twilight Time ". Pipsqueak, after a comforting talk with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and Princess Luna, he goes to the Golden Oaks Library and tells Twilight that he's sorry, and Twilight decides to have a fun day with him to cheer him up. Will Twilight forgive him? Or will she be mad at him still? find out now, and we'll see what happens in this tale.
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You REALLY need to work on your grammar and punctuation.
Not a bad start, even with the bad grammar.
4424535 Both of you be nice! I've seen alot of fics with FAR worse grammer than this story. You can't deny the story is good, even if is grammy could use alot of work. At this stage in the story it's important to be supportive of the author. I've known some writers to give up and never write again if they get a bad reception to their fic. I'm not saying you shouldn't point out flaws. Sometimes you need to tell people what the need to hear instead of what they want to but it wouldn't kill you to be encourageing.
Nice story so far. Despite some errors.
Please update wpthis when you can!
Yay. Update.
Polite little gent is he?
(singing in high-pitched)Pipsqueak!!!
Do Pipsqueak have a crush on Dinky?
Daww...nice story.
What did Luna say in reply? I don't get French...
This is so cute!
5429717 A tout a l'heure means "See you later" in French, Princesse means "Princess" in French. Finally, "Au revoir" means, well... there's many meanings for it in english. It's french for both "Bye" And "Goodbye" That's what they mean in french and English. Why they are in French, because I deeply love the French language and anything that has to do with France itself, and the other countries on the planet that speak it. I'm a Francophile