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    Luna visits Cadance with an important question on her mind. Cadance is always happy to help out a fellow princess, especially if that princess is her friend, but she isn't sure why Luna of all ponies would need her help, if she can help at all...
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After meeting Princess Luna at Nightmare Night, Twilight Sparkle has something to say to the recently-returned princess. She's sure she saw who Princess Luna was that night and feels a connection to the mare. Twilight Sparkle knows Princess Luna. That should make things simple, right?


Set after Luna Eclipsed during Season 2. Buy this story! Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Woah. I applaud Luna for her directness but..just, wow.

7644392 This is probably the most beautiful comment I have ever gotten.

No, Princess, just you an me."
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"Twilight Sparkle, I have no time for jests, this is in no way humorous to me, having a pony I barely know - my sister's student - trying to pursue a relationship with me as a prank and claiming I am lonely."

:trollestia:

That...was absolutely beautiful!

Not trying to be heartless here :twilightoops:.

Luna say " if you're trying to seduce me Miss Sparkle, foretell you that your attempt it's pitiful..."

I'm pretty sure that's accurate

Well, THAT was an over reaction on Luna's part if I ever saw one. I understand not feeling the same way, but there is letting someone down gently,(if not firmly) there is simply saying no, and then there's stuff like this- the borderline cruel way of doing it.

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It most certainly does! Thanks for noticing~

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It did, and I said so in an A/N, I think.

A nice twist on the usual proposal that pricks at the heart, supported, of course, by decent prose. This fulfills its scope but doesn't leave much to return too.

I think I know more about how it feels to be sealed away in a celestial body than I did six months ago.

I can't say I'm a fan. Loneliness like this was supposed to be for other, needier people. I thought I had enough data to conclude it couldn't happen to me.

I thought wrong.

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...This comment feels like it's more fitting for, like, three of my other stories that actually deal with being sealed in celestial bodies. Unless it's intentional; if so, I'm afraid you're being a bit too indirect for me to understand your comment. Sorry, dude.

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Just a thought about living in a pandemic.

I guess I've just been free-associating for the past couple hours as I've been searching for something that will make me feel sad in a complicated way even though I know perfectly well that it doesn't work if I'm actively looking for it. Letting my mind wander does not circumvent that, unfortunately.

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I have recs if you want Sad and Complicated. HMU!

I read this so I could read Love Less next. Damn, way to let Twilight down, Luna. To be fair, though, she's not wrong. Twilight put her on a pedestal that Luna wanted no part of. Not surprising of her to do so, considering her relationship with Celestia.

Ooof ouch owie my feelings, but good work.

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To be fair, though, she's not wrong. Twilight put her on a pedestal that Luna wanted no part of. Not surprising of her to do so, considering her relationship with Celestia.

Ooof ouch owie my feelings, but good work.

I tried to go for a blunt-but-true vibe here, and based on your comment, I achieved that.

Gottem.

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