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Ice Star


🖤 i eat children 🖤

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This story is a sequel to The Care and Keeping of Hidden Castles


One night on Canterhorn Mountain, above the city of Canterlot, two souls share a night away from ponies and watch the stars.

It's only a mountain clearing that they gather at, but why is it so special, and why would they want to escape ponies? Just what did they find in the solitude so many would reject that made it so enjoyable?

Only they would know, and they aren't about to tell anypony.


Proofread by fluffysam. Cover art by MagnaLuna. Contribute to the TVTropes page!

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Comments ( 8 )

tfw you missed the release because fuck camping but you're still here before everyone else


welp k imma just go roll around in notifications now bye

Great job!!! This was a nice read.

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You do that.
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Thank you!

Tonight started off wading through hours of conversation that was meandering like a river. Contemplations flowed in parallel, voiced and debated lightly and pondered in the silence between them. Wit was tossed back and forth. Small questions popped into being, with curiosities that had to be satisfied.

I love how detailed this is

"Indeed! You are truly infamous in your choice to remain hidden from the public instead of throwing yourself among them and declare your—" she held a hoof to her mouth to hide her shining smile and choked giggles, "—alleged 'reformation' to all every chance you get."

I love how much of a foil Sombra is to Discord in your stories, just as Luna is to Celestia.

Another sweet little romance here. :twilightsmile: The werelights/magical stars portion was my favorite part. Sombra so fascinated, almost child-like, with Luna's latest magical creation was beyond adorable. These two really are in their own little slice of paradise here, and both of them deserve every bit of it. :heart:

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I love how much of a foil Sombra is to Discord in your stories, just as Luna is to Celestia.

Tia and Luna are born foils to one another, but I'm curious that you see Sombra and Discord as foils. I don't give them too much interaction even in my later stuff, and I think you're the first to compare and contrast the two in any way. The closest that it's been so far is someone pointing out that both Luna and Tia aren't romantically involved with ponies.

The werelights/magical stars portion was my favorite part. Sombra so fascinated, almost child-like, with Luna's latest magical creation was beyond adorable.

Are you sure that you don't mean cat-like there, Gadot? :trixieshiftright:

A VERY NICE STORY !!!!!

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