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Hopeful Soul


I'm just some 29-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.

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On what seemed like an average and quiet day at Canterlot High, following the Friendship Games, Sunset is approached by Snips and Snails who managed to get a hold of her magic journal, discovering a secret and shameful act that she only shared with the Princess. In order to keep them from telling everyone, Sunset agrees to do as they say, which involves streaking across the school and destroying every bit of dignity she had...

Contains streaking, nudity and big butts

Don't read if you don't like this kind of stuff.

This is collab written alongside Calming Moon (Hinata Linn) and Mariofan7013.

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Comments ( 28 )

But how will I know if I like it or not until I read it? :pinkiecrazy:

Your sequels wont phase me... please partner, don't just give up keep writing.
Don't take this comment(if you can call it that) seriously.

“Of course. Now I would recommend leaving now and pray that nobody calls you ‘Streaking Shimmer’ or… ‘Bunset Shimmer’.”

I got one better: I hereby dub thee "Sunstreak" and to go with thy new name a obligatory musical reference.

Could be worse.

..What did Sunset do.. Oh...Oh!!

I know it's beside the point, but I'm having trouble seeing how the punishment is better than the blackmail getting out.

YAY! Happy ending!

I'm pretty sure that having to run around the school naked and the entire school having pictures of your butt is far worse than your secret Sunset, which isn't even really a big deal to begin with.

I'm sorry but I just can't ignore this. Sunset here...was really...dumb.

surprised luna let them off so easily since snips and snails you know, broke the law.

Comment posted by Rhulain deleted Jun 24th, 2016

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As much as it was horrible, Sunset kinda had it coming

MMMMMMM SUNSEST SHIMMERS ASS WHILE!!! AND THAT WHOLE PART ABOUT HER ON ALL FOURS WITH HER ASS POINTED UP WAS PARTICURALLY TASTY LOL FUCK YA MAN GREAT STORY PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!

Remind me to beat up Snips and Snails for blackmailing Sunset Shimmer.

You know, you really think the two retards would learn after happened in the first film.

7436749 I would have my own OC beat the living shit out of these two jackasses, for what they did to Sunset.

Hmmm, would beating them with law books to teach them the error of ways be allowed?

The Sad thing is you couldn't put Sunset Naked on the thumbnail so you went with that. I get it.

I'm not even mad anymore. I'm getting used to stories like this.

“Boy I really need to go on a diet after this…” Sunset muttered to herself. “Assuming I don’t end up committing suicide first.”

Been there MANY TIMES

Comment posted by Hoping for death deleted Jul 6th, 2021

Wasn’t there a story where sunset shimmer was humiliated by Trixie, strawberry sweet, Gilda, and starlight by taking pictures of her bare butt, only for the main six to humiliate them?

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The author deleted his account. Besides that story nearly killed someone.

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What?! Killed someone?

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It was my other account. Morbidly Drpressed Brony.

Rainbow rubbed in-between her eyes. “Pinkie Pie… you are so random…” Then it hit her. “Hey, I wanted a slice of that.”

yep, she really is.

“Yeah she won’t know what hit her!” Snips smiled evilly as they began to sneak toward the school, following the girls as they started to walk toward the main building; completely unaware of the two dunderheads that were spying on them.

Seems like those two have somebody spying on them as well, but who?

“And that thing you did together last weekend.” Snails smirked. He and Snips both chuckled evilly.

I'm guessing they went out on a date or something and made out is my guess.

Sunset thought for a moment, knowing what will happen if her secret got out. She took a deep breath, swallowed her pride and did the only thing she could do follow the paper instructions, even though it killed her inside to do so, and would make her the laughing stalk of the school until their 20 year high school reunion.

Don't you mean 10-year reunion?

“And you can't stop for any reason, not even if your friend’s try to talk to you and/or stop you. Not even if Principal Celestia and/or Vice Principal Luna tries to talk to you and/or stop you.” Snails added. “And you have to wear a smile, and laugh as you’re running.”

Yeah, she's screwed.

Sunset gasped in horror as she turned and saw that she had just been spotted and her fear quickly increased when she saw other kids coming around the same corner, spotting her rather quickly before they began to burst out laughing upon getting a good look at her butt. She quickly turned around, covered herself and backed away.

Well, she's screwed now.

“In Principal Celestia’s office."

Well looks like she'll have to go back out and try not to be seen.

“After her!” A student shouted as they began to chase after her, wanting more pictures of her.

Oh, come on! Doesn't anyone know what privacy means!

“And leave exuberantly!” Pinkie added, chipper as they all began to rush down the hallways towards the other end of the school, which Sunset was beginning to near.

Don't worry Sunset, help is on the way!

“Let that be a lesson to both of you.” Sunset said, firmly.

Yep, they deserve a good punishment for what they're doing to her!!! :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

“Sunset Shimmer! What do you think you are doing?” Vice Principal Luna asked walking up to the nude girl.

You just had to say it Sunset.

“Well it could be worse. I just got detention for a week and a notice on my record.” Sunset explained to her friends, ecstatic that it wasn’t worse then they imagined.

Still, the blame goes to Snips & Snails! 😡

As the two dunderheads continued to yell at each other angrily with the signs Pinkie made still on their necks, the girls all laughed in amusement at the duo’s misfortune

a good punishment if you ask me.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Jul 11th, 2023

“You completely deserve this though. After how you treated the entire school. How you treated us ! After everything we did for you.” Snips growled turning red with anger.

I can’t believe I actually agree with snips.

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