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Hopeful Soul

I'm just some 27-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.


Upon receiving a strange birthday gift from his grandfather, the peaceful life of an ordinary young human boy is changed forever when he is suddenly teleported straight to Equestria, where he encounters Princess Twilight and her friends and accidentally awakens an ancient evil. Now the boy known as Declan must aid his new friends in defeating this evil in order to get back home.

BTW this is a collab story with Word Worthy, plus Equestria Girls never happened, not that I have anything against it.

Covert Art done by _Vidz_

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 119 )

Cool opening. I can't wait to see what's going to happen.

Might want to separate the box scene from the twilight breakfast scene, felt like stumbling from one to the other.

But all in all, nice and good luck!

hmmmm... you have my attention

Splendid chapter

this is alot better than porting into the everfree forest ^_^

Good job with this chapter

oh shit he just pissed of demon lady

Sweet chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next.

I sure liked this

Loved the chapter.

“Anyways… here’s your bag son.” Harvey said as he tossed Dillon’s backpack to him, which he caught. “Have a good time.”

Twilight and Dillon

Hang on a minute? Wasn't his name...

On the other side of the window, was the bedroom of a preteen boy named Declan Shay,

Declan Shay

Okay? Can you fix that please otherwise I like so far

Did the gem change into an emerald?

In the beginning of this chapter you called him "Toby".

Another "Toby" in this chapter. Good work so far.

Great job, especially all the joking around by Declan.

This was a funny chapter

An excellent job

Now that fight was intense, especially with Declan going berserk.

Certainly was a shock seeing Declan suddenly become a colt.

Splendid work. Declan found his special talent in life.

[quoteToby nodded and zoomed over to the cake, taking piece. “Nice!” he commented, he prepared to take a bite, then stopped and turned to Twilight. “Say… this isn’t made of hay now is it?”] Why would Toby be in this story? Sure he looks like Declan, but they are not the same person! Plus, how could that launch sequence happened to Declan? He's just a kid!

This is a reference to MLP Season 1 The Human Chronicles! Is this a reboot?

You did great. Loved the fight and the funny lines.

You did a splendid job with this chapter.

I hope there will be a sequel.

6472113 Well there may be a series

6472202 This is like a Toby Morrison reboot, isn't it?

6472212 Kinda, yeah, just more slice of life episodes

6473932 Plus, I love what you drew Fluttershy. It matches her perfectly!

6474949 What I drew Fluttershy? What do you mean? If you mean the cover art that was done by Vidz

Make the next chapter, please.

Wonderful job, my friend.

I hope there will be a sequel.

I like this story so far, you have a very strong start to something really, really great :heart:

6656465 Thanks, that means a lot:pinkiesmile:

So far I'm loving this

I like it because the way it is looks and sounds epic

5681634 Hey you made that awesome story called Finding Happiness, Keep up the good work.????:heart:

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