Upon receiving a strange birthday gift from his grandfather, the peaceful life of an ordinary young human boy is changed forever when he is suddenly teleported straight to Equestria, where he encounters Princess Twilight and her friends and accidentally awakens an ancient evil. Now the boy known as Declan must aid his new friends in defeating this evil in order to get back home.
BTW this is a collab story with Word Worthy, plus Equestria Girls never happened, not that I have anything against it.
Covert Art done by _Vidz_
Chapters (17)
Cool opening. I can't wait to see what's going to happen.
Interesting.....
Might want to separate the box scene from the twilight breakfast scene, felt like stumbling from one to the other.
But all in all, nice and good luck!
hmmmm... you have my attention
Good job.
Splendid chapter
this is alot better than porting into the everfree forest ^_^
5681804 IKR?
Good job with this chapter
oh shit he just pissed of demon lady
Good job here
Sweet chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next.
I sure liked this
Loved the chapter.
Hang on a minute? Wasn't his name...
Declan Shay
Okay? Can you fix that please otherwise I like so far
6030649 Oh, sorry about that
Did the gem change into an emerald?
6036093 Whoops, error, sorry
Excellent job
In the beginning of this chapter you called him "Toby".
Another "Toby" in this chapter. Good work so far.
6036592 Where?
6036592 Oh, never mind
Great job, especially all the joking around by Declan.
This was a funny chapter
An excellent job
Will you continue this?
Now that fight was intense, especially with Declan going berserk.
Certainly was a shock seeing Declan suddenly become a colt.
Splendid work. Declan found his special talent in life.
[quoteToby nodded and zoomed over to the cake, taking piece. “Nice!” he commented, he prepared to take a bite, then stopped and turned to Twilight. “Say… this isn’t made of hay now is it?”] Why would Toby be in this story? Sure he looks like Declan, but they are not the same person! Plus, how could that launch sequence happened to Declan? He's just a kid!
This is a reference to MLP Season 1 The Human Chronicles! Is this a reboot?
6367487 Sorry, typo
You did great. Loved the fight and the funny lines.
You did a splendid job with this chapter.
I hope there will be a sequel.
6472113 Well there may be a series
6472202 This is like a Toby Morrison reboot, isn't it?
6472212 Kinda, yeah, just more slice of life episodes
6472289 Like in Season 5?
6473768 Kinda
6473932 Plus, I love what you drew Fluttershy. It matches her perfectly!
6474949 What I drew Fluttershy? What do you mean? If you mean the cover art that was done by Vidz
Make the next chapter, please.
Wonderful job, my friend.
I hope there will be a sequel.
I like this story so far, you have a very strong start to something really, really great
6656465 Thanks, that means a lot
So far I'm loving this
I like it because the way it is looks and sounds epic
5681634 Hey you made that awesome story called Finding Happiness, Keep up the good work.????