• Member Since 22nd Sep, 2013
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Hopeful Soul

I'm just some 25-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.


Whilst joining a nice day the Mane Six discover that a new dance, born from the last part of Twilight and Cadance's 'Sunshine, Sunshine, Ladybugs Awake' dance, has just been created and one by one everypony in Ponyville, including half of the pony gang begins to join in and shake their rumps.

Fluttershy, Rarity and Applejack are the only ones who oppose this new dance and struggle to not be tempted by it and join in, but will their willpower be enough? Or will they all succumb to this new bizarre, and also fun, dance craze?

This is a collab created alongside Brony kaiju soldier.

Just a really silly little story I thought I'd do, and it sure was fun doing it, especially with a friend:twilightsmile:. I do hope you all enjoy it but if you don't like it don't read it.

Credit for cover art goes to Silentmatten

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Comments ( 19 )

First viewers review:


I had alot of fun helping write this.

Another good piece dedicated to the ponies wanting to just shake their flanks in the air without even a care.

Two things come to mind:

7066320 Yep, that about sums it up:eeyup:

Question...... why is the cast the mane six AND Apple jack, Rarity, and Fluttershy?

7066399 Only way to include the rest of them, include AJ, Fluttershy and Rarity are kind of the main roles while the rest of the Mane 6 also have important roles but not the main ones

7066410 so basically it's about the mane six but specifically about those three?

7066420 lol, aye. Just saying you didn't need to go THAT into detail, but alas, I applaud your attention to detail

7066454 Thanks, it's probably no where near as good as Rarity's but I try

Shake shake shake.

I believe this happened in G1 as well

My fetish just came back at me again.
And I Love It!!!

7066676 Glad you liked it :)

One of the only songs I can shake MY rump to is this:

I'm sure Blitz would like this story but...wait, what am I saying? He isn't here.

ANYWAYS, even though this story made me go "Eh?", it was rather interesting.

It was like a zombie movie without the zombies...

Lol! This is hilarious. Someone please do an animation, comic, and/or fanfic reading of this.

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