Victory

Sunset Shimmer has won.

Twilight and her friends are out of the picture. With no one to stop her, Sunset prepares to lead her army of brainwashed teenage zombies against Equestria.

If she can get the damn crown to work!

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redandready45

redandready45 #1 · Sep 26th, 2021 · 6 · 1 ·

I honestly believed Sunset in the first EG movie was more of an arrogant brat who tried to be edgy. This fanfic really shows just how inept of the supervillain Sunset would actually be.

Celestia treating her like a little brat needing a time out, rather than a serious threat, is just icing on the cake.

Very well done!

Flint-Lock

Flint-Lock #2 · Sep 26th, 2021 · · ·

10991944
Did you find all the pop-culture references?

redandready45

redandready45 #3 · Sep 26th, 2021 · 1 · ·

10991946

Yes, I did. I especially loved good ol'Rick's cameo.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #4 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 4 · ·

Another, a cranberry-colored girl, kept mumbling “In your head….” over and over again.

I see what you did there.

And several other places. Though really, Snails doesn't make for a good Beavis or Butthead.

In any case, yeah, there were definitely a few holes in Sunset's plan. I like to think it was mostly the demonic corruption talking when she started assembling a teenage zombie army. Goodness knows she proved to be more subtle than that earlier on.

Amusing stuff throughout; thank you for it.

Block

Block #5 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 1 · ·

10991946
I only got Rick and Morty.
Can you explain the rest?

Flint-Lock

Flint-Lock #6 · Sep 27th, 2021 · · ·

10992208
Here are a few franchises that get mentioned in this fic:

Control
Invader Zim
Beavis and Butthead

Just to name a few

Block

Block #7 · Sep 27th, 2021 · · ·

10992553
Yeah, but I'm not getting the references cuz I don't know any of those.

Ri2

Ri2 #8 · Sep 27th, 2021 · 6 · ·

Given the sheer incompetence of the Royal Guard and Celestia...are we SURE Sunset would have lost?

hamster wizard

hamster wizard #9 · Sep 28th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Evil plan:

1. Steal magic crown
2. Get teenage zombie army
3 ?????
4. Profit

Not the most well thought out plans in the end.

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #10 · Jun 27th, 2023 · · ·

10992819
Yes. Humans turned into ponies, with zero idea how to use their magic, against ponies that don't know they're mind controlled zombies, and therefore won't pull punches.
10994878
Eeyup.