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Holy


What a beautiful Sunset.

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Against your better judgement, you ended up having three little girls that you have to take care of all by yourself now.

As much trouble as they can be sometimes, you still wouldn't trade them for the world.

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 460 )

great job as always Holy.

WAY too SoL for me, but after reading a bit, I can tell it's well written, as always, excellent job Holy.

YES! Oh my gorsch, I was waiting for someone to write a fic about kid Dazzlings and anon-dad! :pinkiehappy:

Oh ho. I thought this was just going to be Ponut Joe-inspired warm fuzzies, but there's a surprising amount of depth here. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

I nearly cried :raritydespair::fluttercry:, so moving...

great story so far. gotta say this one hits a little close to home. the feels

So is this story just going to be about the younger years or will we see the Teen years. Because that will be both fascinating and interesting especially depending on how much of their Siren personality they keep.

D'aaaaw! Aria is so cute! :heart:

Poor Dagi! :fluttercry:
Awesome work, keep it up!

is their mom Suri Polomare? That's the first thing i thought of when i saw Su-

Could be someone else though. ooh! Sunset? Way better too. But then that's sad now because of the implications

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I do actually plan to go through some time with them as teenagers as well. What a nightmare that would be to try and raise three teenage girls at the same time.:raritywink:

Cute story! And you know what? The kid Dazzlings remind me a little bit of Margo, Edith, and Agnus from Despicable Me.

Anyone else see that? Anyone? :twilightsheepish:

Well, in any case, you've earned a like! Well done! :moustache:

7247261 Oh goody goody! I am so curious on how you portray them as Teen's because on the one hand they can't necessarily be the pure evil sirens we all know and love.

But on the other hand they are teenagers and teenagers are the closet thing to evil we have in real life (KIDDING KIDDING! If you're a teen they are plenty of greatness) But you know maybe they are Diva's who are into singing ...you know...something to keep them to their siren roots. Only difference is they still love their dad and are good to him.

Hnnnng...the dazzlings were cute in EQ girls and I've always enjoyed reading things about them but this is going to kill me via sugar.

7247278 oh shit, did she die or something?

I love the story picture, the sirens look adorable as kids. will read the actual story another day tho

Fuck I'm crying.

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Bacon hair!!!! Why did you mess up so badly!?!?! WHY!?!?!

She left behind 3 adorable little demons and a man who loved her and will work himself to death to keep them happy...

Reminds me of my father.

Sees this on the front page.
Hey~

Argh y u do dis that hurts.
Where's the favourite button gone?
And why is it raining inside, is the roof damaged?

I'm going to take a shot in the dark and guess that Sunset passed away. If so, could we expect a possible elaboration in the future? The curiosity is literally killing me!

havent read it just yet just had to say that the cover greatly reminds me of despicable me

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It's definitely going to be a major point in the next couple of chapters.

Wait. If Aria and Sonata don't know yet, then that means...

There's going to be a chapter where they learn the truth, either by Anon telling them or them finding out on their own, isn't there?

Oh no. I don't think my heart can take thinking about how they're going to react. :applecry:

......let's see if this will make me cry like a baby

Please continue

7247173 There's actually a surprising number of characters that would fit. Sugarcoat, Sunny Flare, Suri. I don't know which one of them would be funnier at "trying to take over the world", though, :rainbowlaugh:

7247632 We've got Sugar. Spice. And Everything Nice. Now all we need, is some Chemical-S. (S for Siren). Then we will have super powered girls!

So, transposing the Siren personalities into actual EQG-verse human forms?
Does the portal even exist?

Humor this thought: a green screen skin tone man wearing a prank mask would be normal by EQG human standards.

OH thank god I finally found a slice of life story that touches my hearts and has my three favorite sirens in bite sized forms

This is really good man. Them feels though :fluttercry:

im not crying, my eye's are just sweating from working all day-

ahh who gives a shit, i fucking cried... wait- is this story somehow related to that one story you made a few months back. What's it's called- oh yeah, Sunset and Whiskey?

Love this story even though it hit closer then I thought.

OMIGERSH!! THE ADORABLNESS IS TO MUCH!! HNNNGGG!!!*ded*

Anyway, wonder who the 5th family member is........

7247417 Oh yea, I see it!!:rainbowlaugh:

Oh man, losing a parent sucks! I haven't lost one, so I don't know how it feels!!:fluttershysad: And I don't know if you could count my 'father' having to go because he caused problems:fluttercry:.......

Please do a story where their "dad" is Slender Man....

7247417 Sorry was too busy fixing my fart gun.:twilightblush:

"Oh, middle schoolers are so much easier to deal with,

:ajsmug: Honey, have you ever sat in a middle school classroom? They're a bunch of self-entitled punks.

7247278 You sir are EVIL!!!! but that aside good story, i look forward to reading more!:pinkiecrazy:

Is it raining? Oh no... Just my tears...

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Lol I used to watch powerpuff girls with my niece and she loved that part

here i come with open chest expecting D'awwww's

and you sucker-punch me right in the heart

and im gonna ask for another one

Im still here, amd Im still standing! Throw your best feels at me, I can wither any feels!:flutterrage::fluttercry:

There has to be a group that consists of nothing but Dad-anons! This story would be an example for many more to come! I love it!

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You have the most misleading name ever of all time.

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