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Harms Way

Admirer of Sunset Shimmer and Adagio Dazzle



After a rather weird, yet awkward moment in the cafeteria of Canterlot High, you find yourself having a series of strange encounters with the same group of three girls who've taken a somewhat obsessive interest in you.

Chapters marked "Original" will remain up, but are no longer considered canon to the series.

This story was inspired by "Going Somewhere...?", a very well-written and just plain awesome story written by trevordark. If you haven't read it yet, take a look.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 188 )

Well then!:rainbowderp:
That escalated quickly... like it got really out of hand

I like where this is going! :pinkiehappy:

I hope this guy escapes. If not... may he rest in peace. :rainbowderp:

This is somewhat similar to a fic I read here... I like it. Please update.

I hope Anon one-ups the Dazzlings. Can't wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

This story is interesting.

Nice chase scene. It was awesome.

I'm hunting down whoever disliked this!
have my fav sir/madam!

Reminds me of when Andrea was hunted down by the Govenor in season 3. Of course, this one had WAY different outcomes...

I've been waiting for something like this, thank you.

heh xD I wrote a story similar to this last month. Me likey... >:3

*Looks at your top favorites* Wait... xD

Knew it! :3

Holy crap, I was not expecting this much support for this story. Thank you all so much. This literally made my day.


Your story was my inspiration to try and write stories like this one. I tried keeping the similarities to a minimum. I'm really looking forward to your next story that is coming out.


I'm not sure I know of the show you're referring to. But I'll take it as a compliment. :pinkiehappy:


I'm glad you liked the story. The dislikes appeared before the second chapter came out. :twilightblush:

I'm not worried about them. I'm just happy to have it where it is right now. :pinkiehappy:

I would be worried about them this means someone can't tell a good story from a bad one!!!


Well, as the old saying goes..."You can't please everyone." Nonetheless, I wish you good luck on your quest.

Isn't it: "if you can't please everyone you just get rid off them" or is that just a goblin thing?

5817405 Thanks! By the way, it was The Walking Dead.

5817391 I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D I loved this, hoping to see where it goes... ;)

I forgot to ask, couldn't anon just run away on foot? I mean, the Dazzlings don't have a car to chase him down, right?

This should've been played during the chase:


Well, the next chapter coming up will keep this story at T for now, still trying to decide whether to make one massive M-rated chapter or branch it out into three separate M-rated chapters, one for each Dazzling.

The tiny purple top was just barely managing to contain the siren's breasts.

Thou shalt not snatch! *Looks away*

I love Sonata...but man that was funny:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:.

This chapter was entertaining. Poor guy is getting teased but at least we got some background on the girls.

The next chapter I have planned for this story will force me to change this from Teen to Mature with the "sex" tag. I hope ya'll have enjoyed the story thus far. :raritywink:

My reaction


Is that a good or a bad reaction.

5826532 Bit of both. I get you need to add this, but do you really need to make this a Clopfic? Do you really need to?


Well its kind of been building to this point throughout the story. Hmm.... perhaps I could always just leave this story as it is and make the Mature rated part into a sequel for this story.


I suppose that could work as well

5826609 Well, do what you think is best. It is your story.

but still, oh HELL no!

For the record, I wouldn't mind clop. I suppose posting the sexually explicit scenes in a separate story would be the best solution for all sides.

Oh my, I wonder what Aria is going to do. :trixieshiftright: Considering his situation and what they have to do, either very fun or very painful. :raritywink:

After much consideration on where to go from here, and a coin toss, I have decided to end the story at this point and post the upcoming chapters in a separate Mature-rated story. I hope to have at least the first chapter up on here within a few days or so.

Thank you all for the support on this story. I'll admit, I was a bit hesitant before posting the first chapter since this was my first attempt at a story like this. But looking back, I'm glad I decided to put it up. Plus it makes me very happy to know that I'm not the only person who feels that way.

EDIT: First chapter of the sequel is already in the works. Hope to have it up in 1-2 days.

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