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Oh good, more Night Light and Twilight Velvet sexytimes to add to the fandom! And competently written, no less!

Getting in on this from square one. Looking forward to more.

--CG

Luna happily clapped her hooves. “I knew that you’d say yes! I look forward to seeing your new foal! And who knows with two? Perhaps he or she might even be born an alicorn!”

Oh please let that be some huge foreshadowing.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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If by foreshadowing you mean a reference to Flurry Heart, then yes.

Velvet rolled her eyes. “Pfft, yeah. Like that could ever happen.”

I laughed so damned hard the neighbors came to check on me. XD

It's finally happened. I knew the day would come where their genetics would be weaponized.

Pray.

I'm actually quite surprised that they didn't insist that they get Shining & Twilight's blessing first. I know if I were in Night & Velvet's position, I'd want to at least run the notion by my progeny, rather than surprise them with it. I'm also surprised that they didn't actually state what any of those stipulations are before saying yes. Still, the tale is young, with plenty of potential developments (and sexytimes) ahead :pinkiehappy:

7245055 Doesn't Discord have an Equestria-wide trigger on that specific formation of words to notify himself that Chaos should be invoked? There's probably a multiplier charm when it's uttered in close proximity to his favourite three Princesses.

Yeah. I guess I can keep an eye on this one. Ignore that jerk rolling on the floor.

Story seems really good so far. I am really looking forward to future chapters

Night Light and Twilight Velvet looks exceedingly Asian in the cover art.

No offense to the artist I can't draw to save my life.

I'm glad you brought up all the pressures the kid could face as they would have a lot to live up to their entire lives with Twilight and Shinning. That was something I was thinking on that could in theory even turn the kid into a villain one day from all the weight they'd have to carry. Honestly I forgot that age spell existed but since Trixie used it when she had that amulet it would have to happen and there would be a reason why it's not widely used. Part of me wonders if that's the reasons Celestia and Luna don't age they just keep reusing that spell on themselves every now and again.

I really hope you have their kids reactions to this whole thing, suddenly having their parents younger and that they're trying for another kid would be fun to watch.

Well then, time to see where Celestia and Luna's little breeding program goes.

“Our daughter is an alicorn princess and co-wielder of an all-powerful ancient relic,” Night said calmly. “Our son is the prince consort of a formerly cursed, mythical nation. I think we’re well-acquainted with the ridiculous.”

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Awesome work.

Luna happily clapped her hooves. “I knew that you’d say yes! I look forward to seeing your new foal! And who knows with two? Perhaps he or she might even be born an alicorn!”
Velvet rolled her eyes. “Pfft, yeah. Like that could ever happen.”

And high up above Fate nodded its head and said: Challenge accepted.
:derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy:

great story so far. I am looking forward to see the rest of it. I hope you will consider making a sequel for the foals. Are you thinking of Twilight and Night Light new identities so that the foal could grow up in peace, away from the media?

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Pfff, fuck that. Listen, I love my daughter. But if I manage to survive 'till she's an independent adult (I'd give it fifty-fifty with my health) and my wife and I get offered this deal, her opinion's gonna be way down the list of things I give a shit about.


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And high up above Fate nodded its head and said: Challenge accepted.

That, that right there, made me shoot coffee out of my nose. That's bucking perfect...:derpytongue2:

Cute. Will you have the regression and hormones effect their energy and personalities?^^

Well gosh darn it, i cant tell if this is gonna be an adventure story or a fetish story.

7245948 Coffee? I just shot diet Dr. Pepper out of my nose! It burns! And the fizz hurts as it's popping! Send help!

Celestia: We need you to give birth to the next powerful defender of our land.

Vel: Bitch why don't YOU get knocked up then?

You know... I think that once Celestia finds out how an altered Time Spell when combined with a magical Table allowed for a much more stable form of Time Travel she will go back in time and either kill the idiots or the reporters herself... possibly BOTH groups just to be safe.

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EUGH! And here I thought belches that somehow carried the soda's air out of the nose was bad. that sounds much worse.

I just realized a couple of things that weren't touched on, what will their friends, co-workers and neighbors feel when they suddenly show up decades younger? Will that stigma follow them both as well for instance? Plus would they be able to pull a pension looking so younger or would they? I also kind of wonder what additional things Velvet had in mind for taking this deal.

7244822 I'm with this guy. Absolutely brilliant work.

7245114 I'm pretty sure Murphy is fighting him tooth, claw, and talon for first dibs on it. XD

Everything amazing thing

Something doesn't seem quite right here.

7246213 It hurts a lot more, because you get the acids from the soda all up in those nasal cavities, burning their own ways out; and the carbonation popping is somewhat akin to hitting yourself with a sandblaster at low power (something I accidentally experienced in Auto Tech classes in high school, still have the scar over the back of my hand to remind me)

“Pfft, yeah. Like that could ever happen.”
Open mouth insert hoof jump vigorously. All hands, incoming! Hit the deck

Next Chapter: Karma hits hard.

Perhaps He or She will be an alicorn.

I like the premise and shall be watching. Good start, let's see how it goes.

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This guy/gal makes a good point, I'd like the author's imput

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The things that Agent-G brought up aren't focal points of the story.

Luna happily clapped her hooves. “I knew that you’d say yes! I look forward to seeing your new foal! And who knows with two? Perhaps he or she might even be born an alicorn!”

Velvet rolled her eyes. “Pfft, yeah. Like that could ever happen.”

Do Not Tempt The Fates! They tend to shit on your life when you do!

This story is going to be three to four chapters long, and will be worked on periodically.

No 100+ chapters? Not a regularly updated story? I am sad now.:pinkiesad2:

7248533 I'm a guy just for future reference lol.

7248550 Well I knew they wouldn't be a focus I was just wondering if they would be touched on at some point even if only a little was all.

I haven't even read the story but I have the mental image of Celestia smushing the two together "Equestria needs more heroes. Make more heroes."

Velvet rolled her eyes. “Pfft, yeah. Like that could ever happen.”

She does realise she just triple dog dated destiny, harmony and Discord just for the sake of it, right? :rainbowhuh:

Either way, nice story! I can barely wait for more :twilightsmile:

Unless Night Light and Twilight Velvet learn to teleport, they'll soon be Equestria's Worst Parents (TM). After all, Flurry Hearts was able to teleport shortly after being born, so when their fate-induced alicorn baby is born he she will probably disappear every night.

7249072 oh, and because mages with great potential can do great harm as well as good, every villian will want the next sparkle for their plans.

7249055 No. Just no. Bad brony. Very bad brony. Go sit in the corner.

Very very bad effing brony.

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That's a classic trope for people who find a "Fountain of Youth", of course- death and age are scary, those who find a *ahem* loophole feel out of the loop themselves, etc.

Then again, they already have a potentially immortal daughter. What's a few decades given back to the parents?

Most disturbingly, has Celestia been subtly breeding her little ponies to get this result all along?

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