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orivonfist


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well, since the author did not consider it necessary to warn readers about the content, I will do it.
The first chapter contains: futa, futa on male, infidelity, clouding of the mind, cock vore(?).

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cock vore(?)

cock transformation (ctf) and identity death.
I wouldn't call it cock vore as that implies things getting shoved or pulled in there.

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I just don't know what it's called, so I wrote the first thing I remembered.
thanks for the correction.

First time posting a story on here. Could you give me some advice on how to do the spoiler tags?

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Fixed... I think

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If you want the text blacked out till hover? Like this;
[spoiler]stuff here[/spoiler]
Results in stuff here
At least that's how it works in comments, i'd assume the site uses the same formatting everywhere.
Otherwise it looks ok as is. (it's spelled worship tho.)

Also Fimfiction's comment system takes some getting used to, if you don't use the reply code (you did in your second comment) it doesn't notify them you've replied.
Fimfiction treats it as a standalone comment on the story and only notifies the author instead of the person you were talking to.

I liked it, hope there will be more.

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There will be. It will just take time. I am happy you like it.

Alright, a promising start. I'll stick around and see what comes next.

Pretty spicy.


Wonder what will happen with Spike in this honestly?

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He is in this story. But until I get enough cash it will be a minute.

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