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Alphamon_Ouryuken


"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

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OMFG ROTGLMAO this is gonna be rich!!!! Hahahahahahahaha!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I approve of these shippings. Well done sir :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I give this story all of this.:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::raritywink::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::yay::moustache:

Three words RD RUN.LIKE.HELL

Yep you're going to love her... literally :pinkiecrazy:

Excellent work Twilight! Really, I couldn't have done better myself!

ha HA! Twilight you have outdone yourself! This magic accident is the funniest yet! And they're all in love with somepony else! Bravo, BRAVO!

We go live to chief correspondent George Takei for his expert option. Mr. Takei what do you have to say on this?

Thank you, Mr. Takei.

Oh Shit Son, It's Bout ta Get All Sorts a Real Up In Hea'!!!:trollestia::moustache::trollestia::moustache::trollestia:

Must. . . Have. . . Moar!!:pinkiehappy::moustache::pinkiehappy::moustache:

I have the feeling this is gonna end in a massive massacure or discord saying "my work here is not needed.

So the other three don't get the picture treatment?

NO PINKIE! IT'S A TRAP....

CupcakeMuffins: The pastry revolution has begun! :moustache:

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YES, PINKIE! IT IS A TRAP.....AND YOU FELL FOR IT HOOK, LINE, AND SINKER!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

You don't need an apostrophe every time you add an S to the end of a word. It's only for if you're showing that the character owns something or if the S stands for "is". Click here for more details.

That picture (Rarity)...

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Just ...yes some how you nailed my reaction right on the head. Well done Sir.


Yours Truly Thecakedevil.

:yay::pinkiehappy::ajsmug: There's no brakes on the rape train, no? ::rainbowderp::raritycry::twilightoops:
:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::yay::moustache::pinkiecrazy::scootangel::eeyup:

for some reason ch. 5 keeps asking for a password:rainbowhuh:. if this is a fluke I'm sorry to bother you but I would really like to read it:fluttercry:

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Sorry but chapter 5 isn't done yet, I published the unfinished version by mistake before taking it down.

That was HOT!!!
Now I want to see the roles reversed as Applejack, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie become the subdued and taken. As well as Rarity, Twilight and Rainbow Dash in their sexy outfits.

"Twilight Sparkle was on the brink of insanity right know."

Typo in the first sentence? :applejackunsure:

My reaction to Rarity's picture: Ok time to see how Rarity looks like.......WHAT THE FUCK!

I was surprised how expose Rarity was, damn I didnt expect that.
Of course im not saying seeing Rarity expose like that was a bad thing. :)

This looks mighty interesting to read ~Adds read later list~

Is the next chapter a role reversal?

Love the story so far......only problem is I couldn't see Rarity picture! It's just a question mark now! :fluttercry:

Heh heh now this is great! I can't wait for the rest of the chapters to come out. :pinkiehappy:

A bit too much with Rarity dont you think?

The premiss is really great, and the idea very original.
That being said, the sentence structure, tense usage and grammar needs a little bit of tweaking.
All in all, the story has great potential. You might want to consider getting an editor though, or at least a pre-reader.

I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!! When is the next chapters coming out? Favorite, like. and read later. A-mazing!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush:

Ummm, the plural for Pegasus and pony is Pegasi and ponies not Pegasuses and pony's...

After witch she began to spruce her home up.

wrong "which"

Ironically, I actually read a story with a similar scenario here. fall in love spell, accidentally hits groups of people, chaos arises as they fall in love with the first person they see. XD it was some story i came across in fanfiction long time ago. Great story by the way. *gives thumbs up*

I guess the story was alright. The grammar and spelling killed most of the story for me. And extra words being added that shouldn't had been added. The idea of the story was alright.

So is there away to see any of those pics? :pinkiehappy: I'm still loving this story btw.

Next chapter, we see the tables turned. Oh yeah!
3477972 I, too, would love to see those pictures. Anyway, you can link them?
Edit: Just read the rules. Please PM the links.

"Witch is why we're gonna go get another

wrong 'which'

shame you can post nsfw pic anymore. how about links to the pics in the text?

3478681 Your not allowed to link, even if it's from a NSFW story.

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These are some of the most retarded rules I've ever heard of:twilightangry2:and FIMfiction now sucks a little more for it.

3480817 Have to agree there. If the story was SFW then I would understand, but NSFW stories as well, that just doesn't make any sense.

Shouldn't this story need an alternate universe tag?

I "HNNNNNNNG"-ed so hard at the Bible Black reference. Who knows what horrors were just avoided...for now...*dun-dun-DUNNNN!!!*

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