Chaotic Seduction

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Chaotic Note

Chaotic Note #1 · Dec 5th, 2013 · 3 · ·

Oooh this is a clopfic I can read.

Alphamon_Ouryuken

Alphamon_Ouryuken #2 · Dec 6th, 2013 · 2 · ·

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Small spoiler: I'm planning on a small sequel chapter between Eris and Spike...

Dash The Stampede

Dash The Stampede #3 · Dec 6th, 2013 · 2 · ·

I could like it, but there's some major errors in the work. for example,
-the use of "friend's". It's just friends. no apostrophe.
-watch the use of to, too. "I saw Dashie there too!" "Spike, take that to the post office"
-"arousle" should be arousal.
There's a few more small capitalization and spelling errors
Maybe run this by an editor or a friend, work out the kinks, it could be something good with a bit of work.

Niklashg

Niklashg #4 · Dec 6th, 2013 · · ·

what did the white light do? I really do not understand what the X did.

Comment posted by LanceOmikron deleted Dec 15th, 2013

Alphamon_Ouryuken

Alphamon_Ouryuken #6 · Dec 7th, 2013 · · ·

3587338 Follow the link when Eris says "you have my word as a goddess" basically after she hypnotized Dusk, he fell asleep while still under her power so that qualified as her breaking her word.

Niklashg

Niklashg #7 · Dec 7th, 2013 · 1 · ·

3591065 I know that but I wanted to know what breaking her word did? I know she broke her word but what happened to her?

Edit: is the story supposed to be marked as Incomplete?

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #8 · Dec 8th, 2013 · · ·

3587338
I'm wondering what exactly happened as well . . .

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #9 · Dec 8th, 2013 · · ·

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What did the X do, shoot her a few feet in the air? What did it do besides burst in a white light?

Alphamon_Ouryuken

Alphamon_Ouryuken #10 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

3597675 It basically reversed the spell she put on him.

Tiaa OwO

Tiaa OwO #11 · Dec 15th, 2013 · · ·

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Ah, I see. I should've known that.

The Watcher 509

The Watcher 509 #12 · Dec 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I love Sinbad

DragonOverlord2012

DragonOverlord2012 #13 · Feb 12th, 2014 · 2 · ·

3597675
It's based on the animated Sinbad movie, Sinbad: Legend of the Seven Seas. In it the goddess Eris crossed her heart and made a promise as a goddess which "bound her to her word for all eternity". Same thing here. The X was a spell that bound Eris to her word that she wouldn't do anything to make him close his eyes. In the end when she broke her word the terms of the challenge were rendered null and void and so was her spell on Dusk.

Tiaa OwO