OMFG ROTGLMAO this is gonna be rich!!!! Hahahahahahahaha!!!

I approve of these shippings. Well done sir

I give this story all of this.

Excellent work Twilight! Really, I couldn't have done better myself!

We go live to chief correspondent George Takei for his expert option. Mr. Takei what do you have to say on this?

Thank you, Mr. Takei.

"Twilight Sparkle was on the brink of insanity right know."

Typo in the first sentence?

The premiss is really great, and the idea very original.
That being said, the sentence structure, tense usage and grammar needs a little bit of tweaking.
All in all, the story has great potential. You might want to consider getting an editor though, or at least a pre-reader.

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Would you like to volunteer?

"Applebloom: uhhhh, what just happened?" they are getting laid, dear little applebloom, ask about the birds and the bees next time you get the chance

Well this can only end in madness. And possibly tears. And lots of fighting. And many, many shenanigans.

Sweetie Bell

Oops.
Anyway, very good story.

Pinkie placed a finger

And here's another one.

must resist......oh what the heck SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX!!!!

I SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX TO THE EXTREME!!!!!