When you put an 's at the end of a word it shows ownership, not a plural. For example when you say "Trixie's services don't come cheap" that's correct. But when you say "We don't have any bit's" you don't need an apostrophe on "bits". TBH this error is popping up so often that its nearly preventing me from reading this chapter.
As for the content itself, things seem to be getting interesting at the end there. It looks like Twilight's figured out how to spread the love spell to focus on all of the mane 6 instead of just one.
With exception of some errors, this truly evolved into something. Something good. More than just good even! It's A masterpiece. A cloppy masterpiece. And, what has to be said concerning what happened here, AWWW YEAAHHi never would have thought i would play with textsizes before...
great so far keep it up
WOOOYAYAYAYAYAYA
Ok I'll say it......what the shit taco just happen?! Lol all and all though this story is great be keep it up.
When you put an 's at the end of a word it shows ownership, not a plural. For example when you say "Trixie's services don't come cheap" that's correct. But when you say "We don't have any bit's" you don't need an apostrophe on "bits". TBH this error is popping up so often that its nearly preventing me from reading this chapter.
As for the content itself, things seem to be getting interesting at the end there. It looks like Twilight's figured out how to spread the love spell to focus on all of the mane 6 instead of just one.
WOOOOOO YEEEEAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!
With exception of some errors, this truly evolved into something. Something good. More than just good even! It's
A masterpiece. A cloppy masterpiece. And, what has to be said concerning what happened here,
AWWW YEAAHHi never would have thought i would play with textsizes before...
IT'S ABOUT TIME!!
I was wondering when they were just going to have an orgy and be done with it.
A massive orgy. How predictable. Goddamnit.
I think u won't finish it
great my eyes are stuck open this will take a while to get to able close them again
Spike and Trixie briefly interact. This is the only chapter worth reading.