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NeverClever


ACAB | Kinky aroace ♠️ | All pronouns accepted

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Thy princess enjoyed thy story. Thou hast good writing skill hoof servant even if thou hast some odd thoughts.

Not bad, though I doubt Trixie would use a gender swapping spell without making it 'great and powerful' instead of mediocre.

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I shan't contend the latter observation.

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As an illusionist, Trixie knows the value of subtlety.

Old message deleted after realising that it was completely wrong.

Edit:"She saw naked ponies all day" wouldn't anthropomorphized pones you know not walk around completely nude?

2525477
They still have coats and such. The ponies in the show are mentally anthropomorphic, so it's obviously not a cultural thing.

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There's sex later, although if you're after vanilla sex or well-written sex you are absolutely in the wrong place.

Quite enjoyed it. Hope to see the others (Applejack) :ajsmug:

Since this is only Random/romance and not a dark I pray this is a GWTOE. Also I hope romance will make a larger impact.by the way don't forget fluttershy wasn't at the "magic show" so she(Trixie) won't know about her(fluttershy), and might skip over her. just saying

>Futa Trixie
Good
>Cum inflation
Goooood
>Diapers
Why.

I got feed messages from three groups about this story and that was the first fine of its greatness. First there's futa, then there's cum inflation and then diapers. Wow. Its like you read my mind for the stuff I wanted to see most. I overwhelmingly can't wait for more. I really hope Trixie uses a bit of irony with them, I'd get such a huge kick out of her making Rarity wear some humiliating or embarrassing outfit. Even more I can't wait for her to get to Rainbow Dash. She's my favourite pony....and that makes her being mind controlled and humiliated even better. Please, please, please update soon. Let my pathetic grovelling motivate you!

Oh damn I was hoping for some diaper usage this chapter >.>

I don't usually comment on these kinds of stories, butthatwasreallygoodandihopethattherewillbemorestomachfillingandthelikeinthefuture.

I'm a sick person. T~T

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I don't know what "GWTOE" means, sorry. Tags are subject to change, but I usually don't put Sad or Dark tags on porn because I have so much trouble taking clop seriously.

2526977
Pfft, at least you're not the one writing it.

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>Too much diaper use
>Not enough diaper use

:trollestia:

i lust want trixie to win in the end im always sad when the "good-guys" win i just want evil to win for once

This was very good, can't wait to see what you've Trixie's got planned.
I lost my last shred of decency long ago. Bring it on!

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Seeing as I'm the one writing the horrible porn, you'll always have more dignity than me. :twilightsmile:

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Read more hentai; the good guys never ever win in that. Also best typo ever

One and a half? I'm not sure, but I think I should be... impressed? It's not every day I hear that someone cummed half a time.

2531015
I started with the story and finished with something else. Mighta been more 60/40.

And it's actually pretty easy (though not always pleasant) to get halfway there and stop, especially if you're into orgasm denial. Getting partway there, stopping, and repeating that process is a common denial tactic.

2531033 aaah, I see. Well that makes a lot more sense than what I was thinking.

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One of my goals is to include as many fetishes as possible, excluding scat and foals (because ew), to see if I can break Equestria After Dark's kink lists.

Watersports is undecided. I guess it coulda gone in this chapter, too late now.

Ah, wonderful. Another great chapter and so soon! Can't wait for more, this is great.

We are not sure about scat but we are open to all other fetish thou wishes to play with.

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I do and most of the time the story ends with bad guy dying or getting raped as punishment. I don't want another luna's lunacy on my hands (basically nmm raping the mane six taking over equestria only for twilight to win in the end) i just want trixie to win is that so wrong.

Awesome update, mate. :D

Also, more fetishes? That's cool, though the first chapter was one of my favorites. I'll still follow where this is going, as the story itself is just as intriguing. (ifyouknowwhatimean.jpg)

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Try the Mind Control group; lotta bad endings in thar.

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Yes, nothing like a good "plot" winkwinknudgenudge :ajsmug:

Oh boy 100 favorites. I'd almost feel proud, except, well, you know. :trixieshiftright:

In just over a day this vapid porn-splosion has beaten out most of the stories on my SFW account, save the ones featured on EQD (and even one of those). Internet, you crazy. :twistnerd:

2532520
look im just worried that this will be like "like a sex machine" all over again

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No, I don't won't be doing an Indecisive Parody or a half-assed alternate ending as Like a Sex Machine did.

Since this fic has no plot whatsoever I haven't planned anything, thus I can't give you a real answer. I will say I quite enjoy kinky bad endings (within reason), so prolly where it's headed.

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Gonna bring some vore in as well?:rainbowderp:
Not that scat and watersports isn't enough:unsuresweetie:

I give all my loves for this story. expectantly the tags since theres no dark im glad to know this will end on a happy note.

So, is Rarity wearing Mr, and Mrs. Cake and Pinkie as clothes now?

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Just the Cakes; the pink part is Mrs. Cake's mane

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As mentioned here tags are subject to change 2529655 And if you read Obsidian Raindrop's comments you'll note that "bad guy wins without consequences" is a "happy note" for some people :rainbowwild:

I feel a need for tentacles!
Particularly the all-the-way-through, ovipositing kind of tentacles.
Please?:scootangel:

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I completely, utterly, 100% agree with this idea!
2531099
Oh! Good thing I re-read this reply, because the first time I thought you WERE going to include scat. Woo, no poo!

Yay, I love it when they resist~
:twilightsmile:

[Renegade +10]

2535222
If they've gone all the way through then what would be the point of laying eggs? They'd just flop out the other end :rainbowhuh:

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You can, of course, have more than one tentacle. The more, the merrier! Some go for complete pen, others go for the egg-layin.

I have no idea what my eyes just read.
So I have decided to simply grunt ambiguously
Hrm...

Trixie is having a lot of fun, and so are Pinks and Rarity. Time for Rainbow Dash or Luna!

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