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Secrets, they have the power to destroy friendships, topple empires and slay giants. Secrets can be evil, hurtful or even deadly but sometimes, some things must be kept secret for if the world were to know of them then it would bring about its destruction.

The average pony’s secrets could bring a family to ruin or tempt a disaster to strike an innocent town. So, if that is what an average pony’s secrets can do, what can the secrets of a God bring?

A thousand years ago Nightmare moon was defeated but she was not the only evil to disappear all those years ago. Now, that very same evil, one of Celestia’s greatest secrets will be revealed for all of Equestria to see and on that day, that evil will return once again to enact its vengeance upon those who attempted to destroy it so long ago, only this time, Equestria may not survive its brutal resurrection.

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Comment posted by xXOriginXx deleted Feb 17th, 2014

More! For the love of Celestia may i please have more!!??

This is amazing so far.:pinkiehappy:
Celestia is Rainbow's mother.:trixieshiftright:
Well then the balls have been dropped and Twilight has flopped.:facehoof:

*Insert Double Rainbow joke here*

Oh my god, it's a Quadruple Rainbow.:pinkiecrazy:
(Totally can happen)

cool chap i like this story :3 :rainbowwild: i can't wait on next chap

Keep writing!!!:derpytongue2:

Ps. I think head of Twiling Explode XD ... cuz i have her head at picecs in my room ... :scootangel:

I'll admit...this chapter didn't keep my attention like the rest. I found myself skipping through full paragraphs, dunno why.
Sorry

4118836 No need to be sorry, it might be because this was more of a 'set up' chapter than anything else. Hope the next is more entertaining.

So Rainbow has provided all of her friends with a bodyguard?

4204103 That's pretty much it, well except for...Nah you don't need to know that

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Well 3 options on who gets none (If I interpret it this the obvious way).
Applejack would have been my first guess (stubborn, distrusting). Since shes out Rarity is most likely to be headstrong enough to refuse, but I think she wouldn't since a bodyguard is a sign of status.
As long as you won't kill off Fluttershy due to lack of protection, (I had the faint impression you like her least)
I'll just wait for what is the meaning of your allusion.

Sweet, really enjoyed this chapter!

What?:rainbowhuh: Cool chapter, the guards seem to be getting on well with most of the mane six from what I've seen so far. Oh no a cliffhanger :pinkiegasp: Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

“I, suppose it couldn’t hurt”

You need to put either a . , ! Or ? Before the speech mark, like this:

“I, suppose it couldn’t hurt.” As soon as she uttered the words she was dragged over to them and a costume was quickly arranged for her,

You didn't do this the entire paragraph, that's just bad grammar son :ajbemused:

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Imma do another echo part for you guys: DAYUUUUUUUUMMMMM

*reads the part where Celestia says shes RD's mom*
...Trollestia? :trollestia::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::rainbowderp::pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsmile::moustache::moustache:
*reads more*
No trollestia :fluttershysad:

I know how dash became an Alicorn, it was when she had the itchy spot in her head then turning into pain, that was the horn growing in her head, but I don’t know why she became an Alicorn in the first place, gonna have to read the next chapter to find out.:twilightsmile:if you are wondering how she became an Alicorn, you’re welcome:scootangel:

Couldn’t handle Celestia nuzzling dashhuh:applejackunsure:

Comment posted by Rainbow sparkle1 deleted Nov 6th, 2019

HOLY CRAP WHAT A PLOT TWIST, CELESTIA IS DASH’S MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

enjoyed this chapter a lot and had a lot of fun reading it, however in the end I was saddened since it is the last one.
when will the next one come out?

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