Gems in a Tempest

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Comment posted by byro12345 deleted Nov 30th, 2023

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #2 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Well crap! Here we go again.

Question; Does this story still end up with the Storm King losing in the end, and Tempest "reformed"?

Or does this end up in a very bad end for Twilight and the other four?

Mr Lore miser

Mr Lore miser #3 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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or you could just have the head Cannon, That tempest and rarity are dating and this is just roleplay😁

Djtheking

Djtheking #4 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 2 · ·

Can't find the image

fechlin

fechlin #5 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 4 · ·

This violates the Geneva conventions on the treatment of PoWs

Holocron

Holocron #6 · Nov 30th, 2023 · · ·

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Derpibooru: 1748380

zetasquadron94

zetasquadron94 #7 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 3 · 1 ·

I'd love to see a fic with futa Tempest and Twilight. There aren't enough of them!

Holocron

Holocron #8 · Nov 30th, 2023 · · ·

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My commission slots are always open if you're ever interested my friend.

n1god

n1god #9 · Dec 1st, 2023 · 1 · ·

Sate, Sate, Sate...

Muy bien como dice mi amigo Hanibal Lecter, Vamos por partes.

The story broadly seems to be a kind of "prequel" to another story I had the pleasure of reading, where Twilight gets fucked by Shadow Tempest. Only this time it happens with her friend Rarity.

Starting from how you give atmosphere to the story, it is one of the things that I love about reading in your stories, not only because you try to put the reader in context of what happens, but you also make it clear what will happen to them. to the characters.

Without much to say, this is mostly about an alternative reality to the movie, and I really like what you did here. Not only showing us a very strong Shadow Tempest, but also with an extraordinarily big cock. (Which I like.)

But you also make it clear that Shadow Tempest is a very exceptional and virile Studmare (as I like to call the Futas in Equestria).

With this said, the story is very entertaining and it fulfilled its function and that is why I give it a good like and I hope to see another story like this. I'm really rethinking whether to ask you for a commission in the near future.

Holocron