Gems in a Tempest

by Holocron

First published

Rarity has been taken by Tempest Shadow, and now she's gonna be interrogated until she reveals the location of Princess Twilight Sparkle.

Canterlot has fallen to the Storm King, and now Princess Twilight Sparkle is on the run. Hunting her down, Tempest Shadow, the tyrant's most valued mercenary, believes she had captured the runaway alicorn. But instead, all she obtained, was Twilight's friend, Rarity. Still, determined to learn what this mare knows, Tempest has her brought back to Canterlot. And in the deepest dungeons, the wicked unicorn is going to try and break the mare.

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Canterlot has been taken, the Storm King now sits on the royal throne. But, he’s missing something, Twilight Sparkle, the alicorn Princess of Friendship. Without this little pony, his plans to drain the magic from the Royal Alicorns and gain ultimate power would fail. Thankfully, his top mercenary and best minion, Tempest Shadow, was on the hunt. After narrowly missing the Princess and her friends through various small misadventures, the savage unicorn has finally claimed her prize. Or so she thought.

Racing back to her ship, she all but dashed down into the holding cells, her hopes and eagerness was fractured when she found not Twilight, but Rarity, her unicorn friend. The mercenary unicorn’s broken horn flared and sparked in her anger, lighting up parts of the room. Rarity only sat there in her cage, her outfit, a once lovely dress, was mostly torn and ripped here and there, but she seemed to be holding onto herself; not showing fear or worry.

“This is who they found?” Tempest groaned, rubbing her temples as she paced angrily. The mare’s chest heaved under her armor with every heavy breath. “I ask those idiots to find Twilight Sparkle, and they bring me some…some random unicorn?!”

Slamming her hand on the cage, more sparks rang out of her horn, which caused Rarity to flinch a little as the magical release nearly touched her. Tempest glared angrily at the mare. Her eyes were looking her over, trying to think of any possible means to use this failure to her advantage. Grunting, she paced angrily back and forth, occasionally looking Rarity over. The unicorn remained as she was, sitting in her cage, but there were still some tinge of fear and worry in her eyes.

“Hmm, wait a minute. Yes, yes, I recognize you now.” Tempest realized, snapping her fingers as her lips curled to a wicked smirk. “You’re one of Twilight’s little friends, aren’t you?” Rarity’s eye twitched, betraying her answer. “I see. Well, where is she?” The unicorn gave no reply, looking away from her captor. “WHERE IS SHE?!” Slamming her fists on the cage, she made more angry, bright sparks.

Rarity stumbled back, but still didn’t speak. She only looked at the mare, holding onto her loyalty and conviction to her friend. Tempest only grumbled, smacking the cage again and again, almost denting the metal bars. Rarity started to shiver, the fear and realization at how dangerous this mare is was filling her. Swallowing nervously, she tried to compose herself, but it was becoming more and more apparent that Tempest was scaring her.

“I see, well I guess if you don’t want to do it the easy way. We’ll have to do this the hard way.” Tempest gritted her teeth, only to compose herself, smirking as she started to run her hand on the damaged cage bars. “Well, since I’m already in a really fucking bad mood, I guess I’m gonna have to really enjoy doing it the hard way.”

“Do what you want. I don’t know where Twilight is.” Rarity replied, trying to sound strong in her conviction; but it was clear by her tone, she was scared. “And even if I did, I would never tell you were she is. I’ll never betray my friends!”

“Oh, don’t you worry about that.” Tempest commented, walking over to the cage door. “When I’m done with you, you’ll learn just like I did, that all friends eventually betray and abandon you.”


Arriving back in Canterlot, Tempest personally brought Rarity off the airship, chains tied on her ankles, wrists, and neck. Her horn held a power dampening ring, and the wicked unicorn said nothing, only tugged at the chains to bring her newest prisoner to the castle. Once there, she brought Rarity down into the dungeons. Along the way, the captured unicorn could only see other ponies, almost all of them mares. But it wasn’t that they were in the deeper sections of the dungeons, but what they were doing.

They were naked, over a dozen or so of them were wearing only collars around their necks, but were otherwise just naked. But when Tempest came into view, the thought to be resting, or unconscious mares lifted their heads. There was a look about them, something in their eyes that shone with a submissive, yet predatory light. Some only trembled and twitched, laying on their backs, sides, or bellies. It was only a few with the strength to reach the bars of their cell that they were reaching out for the mare.

“Tempest…Tempest…” Some moaned, cooing and clawing out to grab at the unicorn. “Breed me more…fuck my whore cunt…please…” Others joined in this echo of moans and pleading cries of lust and madness. “I want more…more fat cock…give me more cock…”

“Well, there goes the surprise.” Tempest chuckled, looking back at Rarity, who was trembling in fear. “Oh, don’t worry. You’ll be like them soon enough.” Her lips curled into a wicked, sinister smile. “So far, there hasn’t been a bitch I couldn’t break.”

Opening the door to the interrogation room, Tempest revealed the fear and shaking that Rarity was giving off. The mare’s eyes widened at what she saw. The room was filthy, utterly disgusting, the antithesis of who she was as a dignified, clean living mare. The floor was stained in what could only be dried, and some still drying, pools of spunk, with a rusted, dirty and cum stained stock in the middle of the room. Other various means of interogation and torture were visible, but were shoved off to the far end of the room.

“Now, let’s get started.” Tempest commented. With a hard tug of the chains, she yanked Rarity into the room, causing her to stumble and fall forward on the cold, stone floor. Closing the door behind them, the wicked unicorn smirked at her newest prey. “Now, just in case you think you can just run away.”

Snapping her fingers, a small, multi-colored flame ignited in her hand. Smirking at the mare, Tempest tossed it at Rarity. The mare screamed in fear and panic as her clothes caught fire, and while the tossed, flailed, and struggled to put it out, the flames ate away her clothes, leaving her naked and unharmed. Panting, sweating, and trembling in fear, Rarity was like some weak prey to the predator Tempest. Grabbing at the chain, she pulled the unicorn up, getting a much better look at her newest toy’s body.

The damaged gown had already given the impression that Rarity had a fairly attractive and mature looking body. Despite being in her early twenties, she had a figure that would put most mares twice her age to shame. A pair of large, round tits that hung in a perky manner. Her inverted nipples were plum and large, and they bounced and swayed as Tempest dragged Rarity about.

Looking downwards, Tempest saw that Rarity must live a very well off lifestyle. Her midsection was so smooth and slender looking. Her white fur coat only shone a bit in a faded, glossy fashion. No doubt, she frequented places like spas and beauty parlors to get a figure like this. And when she saw the unicorn’s flank, her eyes widened. Rarity’s ass almost rivaled her tits in size and softness. Plump, rounded, and meeting together in a shaved and well maintained, plump looking pussy.

“Oh wow. You are by far the most well maintained whore I’ve broken.” Tempest commented, gently running a finger from Rarity’s belly, and up between her tits, and ending at her chin. “Oh, don’t be afraid, you’re going to love it soon.”

Taking the naked mare, Tempest forced her into the stock, locking her neck and wrists on the top, and her ankles on the bottom of the platform it was held up on. With no more need for them, she removed Rarity’s chains, but kept the magic dampening ring on her horn. The mare was trembling, her body shivered as she could tell what was about to happen. She was about to be raped. No doubt Tempest was going to leave the room, and bring in some group of vulgar creatures she commanded to rape her repeatedly.

“There we go, nice and ready.” Tempest commented, walking around the front of Rarity. “Now, here’s how things are going to go.” As she spoke, she started to slowly take off her armor. “Firstly, I prefer fear. But you held out back on the ship.” Her bracers dropped to the floor. “Secondly, I bring my prisoners down here to see my other victims. But you haven’t broken yet.” Her leg armor dropped off. “But now that you’re in my stock, I’m gonna see just how long you last.” Taking off the last of the armor, the mare stood naked before Rarity.

Rarity gasped in shock and horror. Tempest, the unicorn mare who had captured her. The one who was looking for her friend. She was more than just a mercenary threat. Between her legs, was a cock, a massive stallion’s cock that, even limp, hung down to a little above the knees. At first, Rarity would’ve thought Tempest was just a fit twink, some fem stallion who dressed as a mare. But she was wrong. The mare had a pair of modest, but perky tits. All with a set of strong looking abs between them.

“You like it?” Tempest asked, mocking the mare as she reached down to start stroking herself off. “Now, this is the last step of how I like to interrogate sluts like you.” Rarity’s lip trembled as she looked at this dick growing and swelling in size. Bigger and bigger, far larger than any stallion had ever seen or known. “Now, I’m not going to believe anything you say. At first at least.” Swaying over, she playfully slapped her half erect cock on Rarity’s cheek. “But that’s only until I’ve fucked that whore throat of yours a few times.”

Rarity trembled, feeling the disgusting, hard, precum oozing cockhead pushing against her lips. She wanted to resist, but there was no telling what Tempest was going to do to her if she kept fighting back. She had seen what the other mares had gone through, and there were no doubts that this unicorn was going to have her way, one way or another. All Rarity could hope for, was to endure and outlast this savage mare.

“There we go, nice and easy.” Tempest groaned, feeling as Rarity’s mouth slowly opened, allowing her almost monster cock in her warm, velvety embrace. “Fuck…your mouth is tighter than I thought. I could’ve sworn you were some noble stallion's side bitch. But your throat is almost virgin tight.”

This had been the first time Rarity had taken a dick like this. Her body was just naturally flexible, but all this did was make it easier for Tempest to fuck her deeper. Taking it slowly at first, Tempest didn’t want to rush into this. She loved breaking mares like this, and loved to enjoy the process. As well as this, she didn’t want to go too hard, too fast. Unlike the others, the information Rarity had was too valueable to risk fucking her into a broken coma over it.

“Oh yeah, fuck your mouth feels good.” Tempest cooed, starting to pant as she nearly had over half her full length in the mare’s mouth. “I’m gonna see if I can fit the whole thing in there.”

Picking up a steady pace, Tempest started thrusting herself in and out of Rarity’s mouth. The mare could only hold herself back from gagging as the unicorn’s brutal cock was rubbing along the inside of her throat. This dick was so big, and it had such a strong taste and smell to it, Rarity could feel herself almost choking on it as she struggled to breathe. Her nostrils flared as she took in what air she could, and the sweaty musk of Tempest’s cock only burned in her nose and lungs.

Tempest only huffed, wanting to savor her fun, but not take too long as she was facefucking Rarity at a faster and faster pace. The mare’s throat was just so warm and tight, the mercenary just couldn’t hold herself back for long. It had been so long since she fucked a whore’s mouth this good, and it was making her already pent up and tense cock throb harder and harder. Her balls were churning with hot, thick cum, tightening against her body as she was going to cum at any moment.

“Come on whore, tighten up that mouth!” Tempest grunted, feeling as her cock was swelling. She could feel as the orgasm was rapidly approaching. “I can’t get my whole dick in there, if you’re…too…tight…”

At once, Tempest bottomed out in Rarity’s mouth. The mare’s eyes widened in the shock and pain that ran through her sore throat and jaw as the hot cum flooded her insides. Unable to spit it out, the spunk only filled in Rarity’s belly. She was forced to drink down gulp after a heavy gulp of Tempest’s load. Holding herself in place, the mercenary only wanted to see how long she could choke the mare on her throbbing cock. Rarity’s body didn’t take long before it started to struggle and flail.

Her eyes were watering, getting red as air was getting harder and harder. Because she was breathing faster and faster, some cum ended up in Rarity’s nose, cutting off more and more air. Tempest grabbed at the mare’s mane, tugging at it as she started to rub her cock in and out of the mare’s mouth, trying to get a second spurt of cum in. Huffing her own hot breath, the unicorn felt as another hot load was about to cum.

“Don’t pass out on me now, bitch!” Tempest moaned, feeling a rush of pleasure. Her nipples were getting hard as her petite tits bounced from her thrusting. “Let’s just stuff your slutty face…one…more…fuck…”

Moaning out in pleasure, Tempest released herself in Rarity’s mouth, flooding more and more of her belly in the hot seed. The unicorn drank and drank more of this spunk, feeling disgusted and violated by the violent facefucking she had suffered. Her body only continued to tremble and shiver. But there was something else, something deep in the back of Rarity’s mind. Was it pleasure? No, no, that couldn’t be it. She was being raped by this mare; assaulted and tortured by this mare’s big, fat, throbbing cock.

“Well, I think that’s enough of that.” Tempest commented, chuckling as she released Rarity’s mane. Slowly pulling herself from the mare’s fucked mouth, she only savored as the mix of cum and saliva created a dripping fuck slime that kept her the still hard cockhead, and Rarity’s quivering lips connected. “Now then, enough foreplay.”

Walking around Rarity, Tempest gently ran her hand over the mare’s body, making her tremble as her palm groped at the unicorn’s ass. The mercenary only smirked, raising a hand to smack at the soft, round flank, making Rarity yelp out in the pain. Enjoying the sound she was making, Tempest smacked the softness, enjoying both the painful cries, and the way it ripples with each strike. Eventually, she stopped, leaving a visible red palm mark on this softness.

“Alright, I think you’re ready for the real thing.” Tempest commented, grabbing at Rarity’s thighs. Though the mare offered up some resistance, she was far too weak to put up much of a fight. But when her legs were spread, the unicorn’s eyes widened as her smirk spread. “Holy shit, are you actually getting wet?” Shaking her head, she laughed, mocking the mare. “Such a whore, and whores need to be properly taught their place.”

As soon as her soaked cockhead pressed against Rarity’s soft, moistness, Tempest grabbed at the mare’s hips, and rammed her cock forward. Both mares screamed out in pleasure. The mercenary couldn’t stop herself as she was fucking faster and faster, while the fashionista could only moan out as her body had utterly broke under the violent fucking that her over sensitive pussy was taking.

“That’s it, scream for me. Moan like the bitch you are!” Tempest grunted, not pausing as she was set to fuck as hard and deep as she could in Rarity’s soft fuck hole. “I’m not done with you yet. I’m gonna keep fucking you until you’re a broken whore!”

For a moment, Tempest had forgotten about her mission. Her only thoughts were about how much pleasure she could fuck out of the mare that was crying out. Rarity never stood a chance, the fear she was already feeling, mixed with the way her body was being pleasured by this fat cock. They blurred together, blending until all she could feel was the instinct to survive. If that meant being little more than a stuffed cock sleeve, or if she would have to sell out her friends, then so be it. Tempest’s cock had broken her body, and was now melting her mind.

“We’re almost there…you fucking bitch…you filthy whore…” Tempest grunted, thrusting in and out of Rarity’s pussy. She could feel as her cock was throbbing, the mare’s pussy was squeezing along her length as if to milk her of every thick, potent, virile drop inside her heavy balls. “Come on, come on, come on, come on, I’m gonna cum…gonna cum…cumming…”

Rarity moaned, feeling as if she couldn’t stop cumming. Tempest’s cock was just too much, it was too good. Fear gave way to pleasure, her body was tightly squeezing along this cock, wanting to feel every drop in her fertile womb. She was going to be like them, the dozens of mares she saw who were nothing more than a moaning, babbling whore that was addicted to this futa’s dick. And as she felt the throbbing sensation pulsing throughout her pussy, she could only feel as she had submitted to this mare.

“Almost…almost there…just about…fuck…fuck…fuck…fuck…” Tempest moaned, gritting her teeth as she hissed. Glaring at Rarity, she raised a hand, smacking the other side of the mare’s ass to make more red marks. “Scream like a whore while I rape another hot load of my bastards inside you!”

Rarity screamed out, feeling as Tempest bottomed out. A rush of hot cum flooded through her pussy, filling her womb with the hot, potent seed. The mare shook violently, tightly holding her new mistress’ cock in place as she didn’t want a drop to go to waste. Tempest held held herself in the soft, gooey fuck hole that was once a prideful mare’s sex canal. All that cum only further filled and swelled Rarity’s womb, causing her belly to bulge as the spunk couldn’t go anywhere else.

“There we go, that’s how I make sure my bitches are good and broken.” Tempest commented, sighing as she trembled from the afterglow of her orgasm. “I must say, you’re way more fuckable than most of the mares I’ve broken. Though you certainly submitted far faster than the rest.” She laughed for a moment. “Maybe you’ve always been a dirty whore, and all I did was show you the truth.”

Shaking her head, she pulled herself out of Rarity’s pussy. The fucked open, gaping hole gushed out the still steaming, thick cum that had no doubt left more than just the aftermath of mind breaking orgasms in there. Tempest only laughed, her voice further mocking the unicorn as he reached for her mane. After screaming in orgasm, Rarity’s body went limp, and so the mercenary yanked at the mane, lifting her face. Whatever was left of the fashionista’s pride or dignity had been fucked out of her. All that was gone, all that remained of the once beautiful Element of Generosity, was a fucked broken whore.

“Now that’s a much better look on your face.” Tempest laughed, taking her soaked, but still hard cock and playfully smacked it against Rarity’s face. “But there’s plenty I can do with you. And if you want to feel my cock in that pathetic mouth of yours again, let alone your now pregnant cunt, you’re going to help me capture your former friend.”

Rarity, for a moment, this last moment of possible sanity and what remained of the mare’s loyalty to her friends, it flickered. But it was only that, a moment. She had tried to stay strong on the airship, she had tried to not panic when she was put in chains and in the dungeons, but she just couldn’t hold herself together after this brutal rape and torment, as short as it may have been; it felt like an eternity to her. Opening her mouth, Rarity began to obediently lick and suckle along Tempest’s cock, as if to worship at it for what it had done to her.

“There we go, that’s a good pet.” Tempest commented, releasing her hold on Rarity’s now messy and matted mane so she could rub it. “Once you clean me up, I’ll give you more of my cock. And when we have Twilight, I’ll make sure your friends join you too.” Rarity almost came to the notion. She, and her friends, would be this mercenary’s bred, broken whores, forever.