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The Movement Restriction Spell

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Starlight Nova #1 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · 1 ·

Why is there a non-con tag?

Fluffy-Boi #2 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

I like this. Tempest is my fave.

ChaosVA757 #3 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

This could go places

clipclopurpornisaflop

clipclopurpornisaflop #4 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

I think I just found myself a new fetish.

Citrus Recluse #5 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

I felt it prudent to be judicious with that tag given that Twilight is slightly coerced by magic and I've had a few times where I didn't put that tag on there when I really should have.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #6 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

Hot, damn! That's one fine punishment the Sisters came up with. :D

BurningLance #7 · Jun 6th, 2019 · · ·

more please?

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #8 · Jun 6th, 2019 · 2 · ·

“But we do believe in cruel, harsh torments,” Celestia said.

Either a "not" is missing, or that should have been something that Tempest worried about.

Tysk

Tysk #9 · Jun 6th, 2019 · · ·

I liked it. Any chances for story with non-con butt & hips expansion?

Citrus Recluse #10 · Jun 7th, 2019 · · ·

9665197
Fixed, thank you. There was indeed a knot missing.

Hein des Nisseroi

Hein des Nisseroi #11 · 1 week ago · · ·

How long would the spell last in total?

Now for potential errors:

close enough to any mountains to see through them her window.

‘‘(...) see them through her window.’’

She couldn’t believe what she was hearing.”

Unnecessary quotation marks.

It some time, but Tempest eventually managed to (...)

‘‘It took some time, (...)’’

(...) a spell to ‘inhibit my movement,’ Tempest added air quotes to her statement.

Missing closing quotation marks.

Twilight resumed sucling on Tempest's nipple,

suckling (?)

I could try to get a message out oy my friends

to (?)

Twilight did so, nursing at Tempest's.

‘‘(...) at Tempest's nipple.’’ (?)

They were still (...) bigger than they were original, (...)

originally

(...) in case she needed again, and probably for other reasons.

‘‘(...) in case she was needed again, (...)’’

and Tempest paniked.

panicked

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