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Some Leech

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Some Leech Joined 26th Jan, 2017 · Offline

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Clopfic Appreciator
Clopfic Appreciator #2 · February 29th · · ·
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Dickmares aren't my usual thing, but I'm making a big exception for Tempest here! This was a damn hot story.

LauraLeBold
LauraLeBold #3 · March 1st · · 1 ·
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Ok I wanna say first up I liked this one. Twilight's flirting was cute, the sex was nice, and it was overall well written. If that's all it was it would definitely be one of my fave erotics. That said though, twilight's internal thoughts were kinda cringy and had huge chaser energy. All the masculinizations Twilight was making about Tempest were really off putting. Phrases like stalionhood, dickmare, calling Tempest stallionly or assuming she would be assertive based on her anatomy were all huge turn offs. That said I would absolutely read a longer form romance sequel fic where Tempest gets pissed that Twilight is fetishizing her and Twilight leaning that shes being kinda weird and gross around trans women and they have an arc about it.

8/10 was a good read

Perpetually Confused
Perpetually Confused #4 · March 1st · · ·
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11837592
I had my chance and I took it!

Turbotune
Turbotune #5 · March 3rd · · ·
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I like the way they express their feelings, whether through actions or not~
Onwards!

zachary12
zachary12 #6 · March 4th · · ·
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nice work:twilightsmile:

dirty little secret
dirty little secret #7 · March 6th · · ·
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Excellent anticipation, but the actual sex was pretty by-the-numbers. Needed a bit of extra flavor. Could have used some more making out and groping in the beginning — Tempest never did actually touch Twi’s enhanced titties, for example. Also could have been nice to give Tempest more nuance, perhaps by keeping her at least a little timid and unsure of herself, like she was in the restaurant. It would make for a nice reveal (and make a lot of sense) if Tempest eventually admitted that she was a virgin and Twi was her very first.

Still, a very serviceable story, and excellent choice of pairing. Love these two together!

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