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While I love the story I do think their is a size limit where big boobs are sexy and that limit is when your feet no longer touch the ground
I really loved the story! I'd love to maybe see some lactation in the next fic?
Feels like years since I've seen a good BE story from Fimfic. Fantastic job!
Here we are.
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Agreed
I can't wait for chapter 2!
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Agreed. In this case its ok, cause one of the reasons for the growth was to immobilize the ponies, but in other Scenarios, i think, its better, to make the ponies larger overall, and/or give them enhanced strength, so they can handle larger bust sizes better or even give them gravity defying properties.
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Its all in the context of the story so if they are growing just to grow then to the knees is fine but in this case because they where being used as road blocks its also fine I just hope that the girls who where used for road blocks are alright because bust that big have serious health risk
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yup. Thats why i´d like to see a Story, where theres an Explanation for why theres a world filled with large chested Pony Girls, without backpains.
You know how many Shows like RWBY, Hunter x Hunter, DBZ or Naruto have their own Version of magic, be it aura, nen, ki or Chakra, to justify the abilities of their characters?
Basically that, but unlike the other Shows, where only a few People develop those abilities through Training, ponies are born with their protective auras active right from the start.
so most ponies dont even know that those exist, cause even animals like dogs, cats and birds have them (in may the best pet win, we see regular birds sitting on Clouds, so that is actually a Thing).
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I personally think the could thing is anything with wings can sit on a cloud but you do bring up a valid point because in those shows you menchioned you see normall people with out powers because they either didn't want to go into a profession with those powers or they where born without them
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yup. Its especially sad with dragonball. Normal People dont even know, ki exists, even though the fate of the entire multiverse depends on the few, that are good at it. In the original dragonball, there were many strong fighters, even among humans, magical items showed up now and then, and goku and co repeatetly used the kamehameha in tournaments, with everyone being impressed. But after Z began, regular People somehow forgot About all that, and were basically reduced to a resource, either for bad guys like cell to drain, or for the good guys to fuel the spirit bomb, other than that… they have no reason to exist whatsoever.
Compare that to Avatar: not only are half of all People Benders, there were even bendingspecific Jobs, like Lightning and regular firebenders working in powerplants, earthbenders moving rock-Trains with their abilities… It was an interesting world!
MLP has those too, with pegasi having Jobs like weathermanager or simply flying mailmen. Earthponies using their strength for physical Labor, that humans would Need machines for, or unicorns doing Pretty much anything, just with telekinesis, which instantly makes it 1000% cooler.
There should be more stories, that utilize these generic commonplace superpowers, or rather "casual powers". Especially with anthro stories, the ponies mostly act like humans with fur, instead of its own seperate MAGICAL species. The only times we seem to see magic, is in Supernatural Story Settings like this, with a magical artefact that is the Focus of the Story.
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It is sad how normal people are kinda forgotten amoungst the super powered everyone remembers super man but know one remembers his best friend as clark kent. I guess thats why I love the monster hunter lore so much as the hunters do put their lives on the line and they are basically park rangers and police put together. Anyone can become a hunter and its not a bad way to make a living just a more dangerous then being a farmer or a black smith.
I wouldn't mind reading a story about the heros friend that guy/gal has to have all of the will power in the world not to unfriend them with the amount of times the been blown off. Danny Phantom actually covered that topic in a early episode that revolved around tucker being gealious of danny and his ghost powers. while it was a little rushed I still think its a good episode
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Another common Trope in anthro fics, well, at least the ones with a human Protagonist, is that all ponies act out of character (slutty), or males just died out and he has to repopulate the species or whatever, just so there can be a plot where he has to sleep with them. And some fics give the human random superpowers.
Id like to see a fic avert those tropes. Like, the ponies dont have to be slutty, and the human hasnt to be the only male on earth, for sexy stuff to happen. In quadruped Pony land, ponies usually go naked, and no Mention is made of public nudity. But just because they are anthropomorphic they Always(!) develop the Need for clothing. But what if the anthros are also nudists?
And males dont have to die out, Maybe ponies could actually be an all female species, that reproduces assexually, like gems in Steven universe. they just happen to look like the human Definition of sexy, but that Concept is actually unknown to them, so they dont understand, why the human is acting so weird around them, and why he is so upset, that they dont wear clothes. And if they try to fix the Problem, without knowing about human Dresscode....
Also about human powers, since Pony powers are so natural to them, the human should have mundane powers as well, if any. Like, immunity to Poison joke for example: if Poison joke doesnt use its own magic to cause the various effects, but rather uses the victims own magic against them, like a Virus, this would explain the various effects: Rainbow dash spent all her time, Training her wings, so the Poison affected her wings the strongest, same with twilights horn. since the human doesnt have magic, he wont suffer any effects.
He might also have been able to retrieve the Crystal heart, without Setting off the Alarm, cause no magic aura to be detected.
However, if he has to have an actual ability or skill, it should be problemsolving. Like, remember quibblepants? in equestria there are only a few ponies with the experience to solve ancient puzzles, but humans do that stuff for fun, anytime they Play zelda, so one could write a Story where a human Teams up with daring doo... Or Maybe they could provide tech support: When twilights map was busted, twi and Starlight found a spell that fixed it up: Which essentially amounted to them turning it off and on again.
In Turnabout storm, the culprit once tried to use telepathy on phoenix wright, only to have the spell intercepted by a cell phone, it would be funny, if you can apply generic technical know how to even the most complicated magical items.
Even beings as powerful as discord have to follow some rules. one such rule, has been the law of equivalent Exchange, which we got explained mostly by Starlight: You cant make stuff disappear, you have to teleport Things somewhere and stuff like that. And the Season 6 finale showed, that even the Lord of chaos cant just create stuff out of Nothing: his flying pigs despawned, when they entered the no magic Zone, implying, that they were just illusions, or made from holodeck matter, like the gems physical forms in SU.
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The asexual one brings up a few problems for creatures that are not made of a rock like if a Virus hits then their goes the population. While I don't have a problem persay with characters forming a love interest I do have a problem when everyone falls in love with the main character because plot demands it and most of the time they are not even subtle about it just look at any harem anime/Fic. If the fic can take the time to flesh out the characters and why they love the hero then thats different
The magic immune human I have seen a couple times one of the best I have seen involved a human being trapped in a circus and the reason for his immunity was do to the fact that he was sending the magic to his home which was clever and unique.
its very important to set rulze for your worlds magic. as much as fairly odd parents has dipped in quality recently it still did a good job setting up its worlds magical rules with DA RULEZ and that book is think so you believe that the wish was really against the rules.
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perhaps i should have explained the asexual part better, essentially, they reproduce by minecraft logic: if two ponies love each other very much, like Lyra and Bonbon for example, a Baby can just spawn into existence. And with my premise, the ponies dont have to fall into love with the human. They dont treat the human different than they would treat a Pony, but thats the Problem. for ponies its no big deal to greet each other with a casual hug, but since the ponies are extremely busty, preferably Amazon sized (10ft or so) and possess super strength (Twilight is considered to be physically weak by Pony Standards, after all she can barely lift 4,5ton Tom, while rainbow and maud can both jugg a weight like thatquite a distance away with no Problem)… Remember what happens after you finish the second dungeon in ocarina of time? Basically that.
As for the magic immune human, most stories, that try this have him being immune to most if not all magic. Thats not what i mean. regular spells still affect him, like force fields or telekinesis, he just lacks certain characteristics that are common to ponies, and isnt registered, by spells that specifically target Living beings, (like how in the american Godzilla movie, heat seeking Missiles couldnt work on Cold blooded creatures because the lower Body temperature) or require the target to have magic. Energy blasts would actually be more deadly to humans, since they dont have a magic aura that prevents the Damage, (rainbow shoots Lightning at them at regular intervals and Twilight had pianos drop on her) and Things like cadences Health bubble might also be able to trap him, even though healthy beings should be able to pass through. And its technically possible to detect him with magic, if you use different Parameters, like detecting Things made from Carbon, water that have a temperature of roughly 37 Degrees Celsius.
Fairly odd parents was never my Thing, at least when it came to DA RULES. In one Episode, they couldnt use magic, to get rid off sentient cockroaches, since they were immune to magic destruction, but they are able to be teleported somewhere else. However in a later Episode, it was revealed, that everything timmy ever wished away, even stuff he created, goes to the Bermuda triangle, since it "had to go somewhere" then why couldnt he wish away the roaches? And sometimes the power of the wands Comes from the fairys themselves, and can be harnessed without a wand (like by mixing their Sweat with lemonade and drink it), sometimes its generated by the wands, and sometimes they bring up a big central wand, that powers the other wands
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I don't follow on they just spawn in you mean through the power of love a baby is made in the uterus if so then I can see that but I am a fan of they use a spell for those woman only equestria funny enough I have not seen a male only equestria while not my cup of tea it would still be a interesting read.
so their resistance depends on the spell so they could either be not very or just barley inconvenienced or its super effective and they go down in one hit is what I'm under standing you may need to explain more
I never said fairly odd parents was consistent just had a good set of rules for their magic
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If two ponies love each other very much, and spend a lot of time together, their magical auras synchronize over time, untill a Baby spawns into existence between them. there might be Symptoms leading up to that, like mood swings, increased appetite and the parents can generally sense, that babies are gonna happen. But there is no pregnancy in the common sense. No lower regions involved at all, featureless crotch in effect and stuff.
thus the entire process is PG13, thus allowing the ponies to be completely oblivious to the Concept of sexuality, which leaves them confused as to why the human needs "alone time".
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oh wow that is intresting
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thanks! ive spent a lot of time comming up with DA RULES for my amazonian Pony world. Most of them are based on actual stuff from the Show. For example, did you know, that plants in equestria dont require sunlight to live? In the Nightmare moon timeline, it has been night for years, yet the trees are still green. Most likely the chlorophyl in their world processes earthpony magic instead of light, which might be, why changelings caused the plants in their Kingdom to wither, cause they or their throne took away the nutricious magic. This concept can be used, to explain, why "going to the bathroom" in my Version of equestria only implies taking a bath.
Also for the magical reproduction, its possible to craft a device, that can measure, how long it will take for babies to spawn, if you use the stuff Doctor whooves used in his flameless fireworks, which in turn might be reverse engeniered from the changeling slime, that was left over from canterlot wedding… how else would he be able to create a substance, that generates Energy, when exposed to love without knowing how exactly it works?
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okay but does that only apply to the pony and what about the ther races like Zebra, Kirin, dragons and so on
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yes, although there might be slight differences in the reproduction process, while non of them involve sex, some work slightly different. changelings, at least during Chrysalis rule, dont require romance, and they have Pretty much an industrialized process going, making an entire Batch of eggs at once. Dragons also dont really care about love, they just make eggs during rituals like the Dragon Migration (thats what its for in the actual Show too, i think?)
But the Details can be adjusted for the individual Story.
For example, if the Diamond dogs have to be included, itd be ok to have them be a male species, cause i cant really imagine them as Girls. puppies spawning in, when the pack has Need for more members and enough Food is avaiable, they just skip over the Baby Phase, as the Diamond dogs really dont seem to be the type to take care of babies.
There is also the variable of language. If a human is transported to equestria, i think its best, if everyone there just happens to speak english for convenience sake. But for a first contact Story, it would make more sense, if they speak their own language and just learn english really fast, (and later they can invent a Translation spell). This would allow the Story to make more sense in regard of naming Things, like towns: they have actually different names, but are difficult to translate and impossible to pronounce for humans so they just use the ponified names. For example Manehatten might just have a giant Pony statue in its bay, (not necessarily the statue of liberty) but one of the humans compares the town to manhatten because of that, and one of the ponies hears it as manehatten, and the Name just sticks. Also things like apples might not be actually related to earths Counterparts, but be a completely different type of fruit, but they are similiar enough so they are just called apples. Same could go for ponies as a whole, they are not actually related to the equines on earth, but have similiar Features. and the word Pony is nice and short, so the equestrians just adopt it.
The Translation aspect can also be used for Comedy, when figure of speeches dont really translate, leading to confusion and missunderstandings, with the ponies taking everything literal.
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wel you seem to have everything figured out but I can't help but feel like wild animals still do have sex as they don't have the foutune of baby magic
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well, just like all feathered creatures have the ability to walk on Clouds, animals in my Version of equestria also have the Basic magical abilities of all other sentient creatures, and reproduce via minecraft mechanics.
There was one instant of animal magic in the Show, that i find noteworthy: Remember when fluttershy earned her cutiemark? she was caught by a swarm of butterflies when she fell from the sky. In the breezy Episode, we learn, that the more breezies there are, the easier it becomes for the whole swarm to withstant aircurrents, so butterflies could have a similiar ability, which when combined with the pegasis Cloudwalking ability allowed a large enough swarm to carry a pony.
theoretically, if you have enough butterflies or other insects, they could lift an entire Building, like, remember the ending of bee-movie?
Same goes for twittermites and flashbees, as they can Combine their electricity into one big ball of thunder.
So every animal has some magical abilities, even if theyre mostly just really mundane ones.
Although id like to get rid of cows and sheep. The lack of These could be a plot Point in a Story...
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what about phenixes as they are shown to lay eggs
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eggs are compatible with spawning. Just like changelings and Dragons, phoenixes can spawn eggs instinctively.
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you really thought this through well alright I'm stumped
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Ive been working on it for quite a while. I just Need to find someone, willing to write that Story. Gamerscript showed interest in a Monster musume-esque Version, but i dont know, if or when its gonna come around.
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as the saying goes no plan survives first contact