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I'm surprised i don't see more of these on here.😕
Nice first chapter by the way.
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1000% agreed!
I feel like this is inspired by the art by khuzang
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*Googles*.
... Yes. Yes, it is.
Best defense ever.
I want twilight to turn into an evil mistress midnight and make everyone her slaves
huh. the ending was pretty funny. almost enough to make up for the blasting of two of my favorite characters by twilight's internal narration
okay, i'll let you off the hook, but i'm very much not a fan of author tracts like that.
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And I'm very much of a fan saying what I want to say.
Besides, the commissioner thought it was funny.
It's always the quiet ones.
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There's only so many slots for similar stories.
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You might be able to commission that.
Damn, that was hot. Now Twilight's thinking with her head!
That was pretty hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I can just see it now
Twilight: Rarity! Why do you look so embarrassed?
Rarity: You would never believe what just happened to me during my presentation! Something felt as though it was digging through my...” delicate bits” and caused me to make a fool of myself! It’s already all over MyStable!
Twilight: oh uh...hehe...well...
Lol, this story is pure shenanigans fuel. Looking forward to more.
Your Queen demands more!
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I live in a republic.
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Even so, thy Kirin Queen demands more of thy enjoyable literature. Set thy digital pen to paper citizen.
Can i get a futa version?
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You could commission it.
Tiny typo:
"think"
as in "you have to think again".
"ooh what do we have here?"
"is it something to eat, Eat, EAT?"
" strange the sentient ones seem to have a hive mind link to the other mindless ones."
"HEY WHAT HE SAY?!?"
"i don't know lets scrap him"
"let me" the insecticons and shockwave ROTDS.
You had better make a sequel
"Octavia, Twilight thought. No. She's too calm and collected."
And how is that a bad thing, Twilight? Half the fun is seeing if such a girl can keep it while you play with her.
will there be a futa version?
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Not unless or until someone commissions it, no.
It's a good thing you decided against Midnight taking over since it will be too simple and cliche. In fact there is no reason for Midnight to come back at all. Twi just got awesome power and can't stop her teenage brain from "misusing" it for sexual fun.
Interesting, specially that ending. I wonder, was Bon-Bon both protecting Twilight and revelling on the opportunity to have a public simultaneous orgasm with her Beau, or did she do it like that for some other reason? Would love to se how this continues, please
Sci-Twi, we love you for taking the risk to experiment like this! Forward, for SCIENCE! And sexy fun-times, yes.
Small typos:
whose
who's
+eyes
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Fixed, thank you.
That's because you are.
According to youtube science videos (wich i don't remember the whole shimuck right now) the (increasing) amount of energy necessary to open a tear between 2 points in space and then keep it open at the edges of the portal should have cooked her hand... screw that, the whole freaking planet should be boiling in radiation and hellfire right now.
But this is magic. Magic with a pinch of porn logic.
So you can just disregard this comment
portals!
Is
ThIs
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JOjO’s
reFerEnCE?
As much as I like some filthy smut, the writing could use some cleaning up. Still, Sci-Twi’s descent into salaciousness is very amusing and constructed believably. Good job!
None of that is true. Just saying.