Barley's Deleted Scenes

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Koshka5

Koshka5 #1 · Feb 16th, 2019 · 3 · · Scrapped SunLight Fic ·

Interesting story, sunset is a terrible liar tho

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #2 · Feb 16th, 2019 · 2 · · Friends:: Original Epilogue ·

That was a good latte alright

zachary12

zachary12 #3 · Mar 3rd, 2019 · 1 · · Friends:: Original Epilogue ·

nice work.

zachary12

zachary12 #4 · Mar 5th, 2019 · 1 · · Benefits Chapter 2:: Original Intro ·

all chapters of your stories are great.

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #5 · Mar 5th, 2019 · · · Benefits Chapter 2:: Original Intro ·

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Thanks
I appreciate it

zachary12

zachary12 #6 · Mar 5th, 2019 · · · Benefits Chapter 2:: Original Intro ·

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no probs

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #7 · Mar 26th, 2019 · 3 · · FwB:: Rarity Flirts With Velvet ·

Alternate Ending::

“Hey Rarity, I’m ready to g-ahh! Oh my god!”

“Ahn… Twi?”

Twilight froze as she entered the kitchen, immediately noticing her mom leaning over the counter with her pants around her ankles. More damningly, Rarity was kneeling behind her and openly licking between the woman’s legs.

“Hm?” Rarity parted from Velvet’s pussy and glanced behind herself at Twilight. “Oh, pardon me, dear. Once I’ve made your mother cum then I’ll be ready to go.”

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #8 · Mar 26th, 2019 · 1 · · FwB:: Rarity Flirts With Velvet ·

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Dear God, do we have a word for reverse-cougars? Because dayum Rarity!

Glad to know alternate timeline Velvet is getting some love.

Funny thought though. What if Twilight did take after her mom more than she already had? Like, if her mom also had a penis. Surprise!

Barley Citrus

Barley Citrus #9 · Mar 26th, 2019 · · · FwB:: Rarity Flirts With Velvet ·

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Whatever you call a reverse-cougar, Rarity is definitely one of those
She just seems like the type

If Velvet had a dick, I would have to seriously question how Twilight was born.

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #10 · Mar 26th, 2019 · 1 · · FwB:: Rarity Flirts With Velvet ·

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Obviously from Night's dadgina.

You thought he had a beer gut? Surprise, it's baby weight from when he carried Twilight. Admittedly he never did make an effort to lose the weight afterwards, but still.

To add extra layers of convolutedness on top. Velvet naturally has a dick like Twilight due to strange genetics, while Night is just a FtM who underwent hormone therapy.

Edit: One, just a crackpot theory for fun. Two, I used "just" to describe Night's hypothetical hormone therapy as opposed to the more weird scenario of Twilight and Velvet's genetics. Not trying to downplay the seriousness of such a thing for transgenders as a whole.

Barley Citrus