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Barley Citrus


I write about the countless coital encounters between humanoid horsies, anthropomorphous equines and at least passably bipedal pony people... Also, I really fuckin like Equestria Girls my dudes.

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While I'm not much of a futa fan I very much enjoyed everything else about this story, there are far to few TwiDance stories so it's always nice to see another. I hope to see more stories, TwiDance or otherwise, from you in the future.

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Thanks, I appreciate that.
I don't have another Twidance in mind just yet
But I have plenty more coming that I'm excited about
and some may even be without futa

Hmmm...always been more of a fan of the "half futa" concept. You know, no balls and keeps the slit? I mean 3/4 isn't bad either (balls, but keeps slit) but something always bothers me at full futa when the slit is replaced completely. Oh, and if you were wondering after I listed the half, 3/4 and full futas, the 1/4 futa is just a super engorged clit (big enough to be a dick) through some process (magic, potion/chemicals, stretching, etc.).

Despite that, this was still an entertaining read, and really captures Sci-Twi's awkwardness and obsessive tenancies, as well as Cadence's "loving sluttieness" where she's portrayed as a horny seductress, but dose so in such a way that she still guides and nurtures her lover. looking forward to a sequel if you're planning one.

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I feel you, the half futa look is also nice. I might try a story with that as well but i'll miss the testacle-play

also, it makes me really happy to hear that
twi's awkwardness and obssesiveness interacting with cadances seductiveness and nurturingness
that is to a T what I wanted to relate here, and I'm so glad that it came through well

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Thanks. The ignorant Starlight impersonator was giving me grief on my terminology though.

You've written a great story here, and I'll probably be looking through your other stories too. Any chance you'd be willing to try a 1/2 futa double teaming of Sci-Twi by Celestia and Luna?

But why futa?

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was a cute story! I’m not much of a foot person myself so it didn’t do a lot for me there but it was still a nice read!

Is there any chance of seeing this expanded upon? Maybe a sequel, or a series of short stories based on their developing relationship?

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But why not?

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well, I'm not good at request based ideas, so it's hard to say. If i think of a good hook for it, then it's more sure to happen. I'll go ahead that, currently speaking, none of my currently planned stories involve eqg celestia and luna.
Though, I'm happy you're interested in my upcoming works. keep an eye out because, although I'm a busy person, I do like to preview what I'm working on.

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Hey, I appreciate that. I assumed people who weren't into the kinks would just get turned away, so I'm happy that you could still enjoy it.

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I have considered it, but nothing's in the works rn
I really just wanted to capture this moment in time for the two and imply a future relationship
though, I could see doing another oneshot at some point in the future

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not sure why, but I've always especially loved Twilight as a futa, more so than any other character.
It just really makes me happy

We are all Alex Jonas .

Definitely gonna need more of this. Kinda like how, in Harry Potter, there's the 19 years later epilogue, except this one needs to be a 3 years later and then them finally fucking.
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She’d never turned twilight down

counter as cadance grabbed

Images of cadance

Capitalize their names

Oh? Nolonger taking

No longer

"ugh…

Capitalize this while you're at it

Watching her legs stretch and seeing how well her ass filled out her panties.

This is an incomplete sentence

this things ruined. shit."

thing's
Also, can you guess my other piece of advice? :trollestia:

met her pantie line.

panty

head, "your family

:/

knees touched the her thighs

delete "the"

A bead a precum oozed

of precum

as the girls cock

girl's

Not into foot stuff but as a whole I still really liked this.

I'm not really a foot guy myself but it was a cute enough story.

Well! That was an adorable bit of fluff! And I’d like to see more, if you ever get the inspiration!

I still think this needs a sequel.

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I appreciate the continued interest
I won't say it's impossible
But I really prefer it remaining open-ended

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I also just finished reading Letting things get out of hand and I enjoyed it as well. Twidance is my third favorite pairing.

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Thanks, I appreciate you commenting

I need more foot stuff from Cadance, she's the perfect girl for such a story ^^

Yeah… I was leery at first, because I’m really not a foot guy. But this was really hot. I only wish there could have been more. The teasing buildup was superb, but I felt like it didn’t really go far enough at the end. I need a chapter 2!

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