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dirty little secret


I tried so far... and got so hard... but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (SubscribeStar)

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Still not as crazy as the pigeon one.

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Dare I ask about the pigeon one?

Dare I ask about the pigeon one?

You just did. (Click blue words!)

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Oh, and here I was thinking that it would be something on Fimfic.

Of course this isn't going to be the weirdest if I have to compete with Japan.

Though, now that I think of it, I wonder if the subscribestar supporter who suggested this story was basing it on that pigeon story. It does have certain ... similarities.

Okay, I guess I'll bite...

No, not like that!

Pervert.

:rainbowwild:

My god this is amazing

Handsome Shining

Oh glad to see more from you, it feels like it's been awhile. I hope you're doing great and having a wonderful day.

Her likes are romance novels, crystals, and relationship counseling. Her dislikes are infidelity, caves, and insects.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

“Exit is not available until you have completed all three levels,” Sunset’s toneless voice said from behind her.

So you could say she is Banned from Equestria?
...I'll see myself out.

Oh no. She could not do that! She couldn’t stand here and watch that. Not with her brother!

Twilight Sparkle from the show:
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Twilight Sparkle from most dirty little secret stories:
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Source and Source.
(Take that, Shakespearicles!)


Interesting premise!
I look forwards to see where it goes.

(But why so many downvotes?)

slight princest

This is slightly relevant to my interests.

I guess easy mode is Cadance alone. :rainbowderp:
Medium is Twilight assisting. :moustache:
Hard is Twilight taking it all by herself ♡ :pinkiehappy:

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... how did you want me to do it? :rainbowhuh:

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Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part?

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He's extra handsome as a horse.

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Yeah, my SubscribeStar supporters have got me working on a lot of multi-chapter stories that aren't finished and ready to publish yet. But supporters are able to read the things I've been doing in the meantime. I get at least one story/chapter done a month!

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Heh, yeah. It was really difficult and challenging to write a version of Twilight who's not completely into her brother. Weird stuff!
... And you know why there's downvotes, lol. Bestiality with hints of incest? That's going to attract a lot of auto-downvotes.

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Yeah ... just slightly. Incest isn't really a big theme in this one. Which is why I thought about adding it to the incest group, but decided not to.

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Pretty close. ^.^ You'll see soon.
Unless you sign up for my SubscribeStar, in which case you could see right away!

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honestly stallion on woman is my thing at this point so this just does it for me

That picture is without a doubt, the most cursed image I have ever witnessed on this site, which is saying a lot. Kudos to the author for digging it up.

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ah ok well sorry I can't spare the money right now but you you're having a great day

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Heh, yeah. I do wish there was more of it on this site.
But at least...
i.imgur.com/Bd8dekX.png

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Digging it up?
I made it!
(Well, I assembled it from various vector images, anyway.)

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I am having a great day! ^.^

Got my new computer up and running, got a story in the feature box. Life is good.

Holy hell! I literally saw this story yesterday, decided to “watch” it only to realize a few moments later it was published back in August with no new updates despite saying “updated daily”, and then suddenly get a notification that there’s a new chapter? Talk about lucky!

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Same, tho I didn't notice it was first posted in August

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It was written in August, and Fimfic still lists the chapter's date as when it was first uploaded. That's the date the chapter was published, not the date the story was published. And on Fimfic, those can be very different dates.
First posted just yesterday, though.

This whole premise is extremely silly and I think you are doing everyone a real service by exploring it.:pinkiecrazy:

So, is hard mode the rest of her friends, with Sunset and/or Sci-Twi optional? Though 5+ inseminations needed sounds a little more like Nightmare difficulty, unless there's more than one stallion. Wonder who's going to be the lucky stallion(s)? Flash, maybe? Or Zephyr, if we're following the Mane 6 siblings trend.

So, random thought. Hard Mode is going to find Twilight going from the player to the main character, and the stallion in question will be Flash Sentry. The big twist will then be that there was no magic controlling people, and this was set up by Sunset and her friends to finally get Twilight and Flash together.

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I completely agree. *raises a glass*

Another fantastic chapter keep up the good work. 👌👌👌

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Thank my SubscribeStar supporters for voting for it! ^.^

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Way off on that one!

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Right on the money until you get to the twist part. Glad I was setting that up properly!

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Pretty much, I guess.

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Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part?

Twilight never tried walking away. (Invisible game wall!)

Would've been funny to have generic background cars occasionally driving by. Like, Twilight sees what they are, but can also see a weird lack of detail and lack of environmental awareness. But with them this would seem more voyeuristic.

Shining and Cadance? Yup. Easy mode. They probably do this on their own. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmmmm... Twily, you should have totally selected Celly's "lips and peach" option when Big Mac stalled there. Just sayin'...

Or maybe Luna's "lips and peach" option.

Not sure which woulda' gotten Luna in front of Celly, but that's what experimentation is for! Science! Totally!

Here's how you do it Twi:

Rush him. Grab him around the neck. Stare intently right into his very surprised eyes. Tell him, "Cum. In me. Now!"

Works even better if Sunset is there.

:rainbowlaugh:

It was discord all along. 🤣

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Heh, yeah. Maybe I should have taken more time to explore the game mechanics.
But can you blame me for wanting to get to the good part?

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Works even better if Sunset is there.

Gotta take Sunset's clothes off, though.

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As usual. ^.^

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Why would pony Sunset be wearing clothes...?

Did you forget that pony Twilight was considering doing more or less that to pony Flash after she returned to ponyland? I'm just helping!

Yup, this is easy mode. I'm liking Twilight's scientific approach to stuff, even when trapped in a hentai dating sim.

Getting better and better! Wish there was the 🍈🍆🍈 option for Celestia, too. :twilightsheepish: The way you described her she's more than stacked enough to handle even Big Mac!

I'm a paizuri fan.

Pinkie asking for a replay of the Princess level made me laugh!

Good finish for a really fun story. You know this needs a sequel, now, with Twilight getting her date, and getting plowed by Flash Sentry? :twilightblush:

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You know this needs a sequel, now

Sadly, all my stories seem to! :facehoof:

Big Mac’s progress bar was already at over half, and his cock already throbbing hard. This medium mode wasn’t going to be so hard after all!

:pinkiehappy:: "Careful: this chapter isn't even halfway done yet."

“Victory is indicated by insemination,” Sunset replied ... quite unhelpfully.
“Um hello!” Twilight pointed at Luna’s pussy, still oozing cum. “Does that not look like insemination to you? Because it sure looks like it from where I’m standing!”

:trollestia:: "Do I look inseminated to you?"

Celestia wasn’t the only one who seemed to notice, though. Was Big Mac staring as well? And was seeing Twilight’s finger inside her own pussy actually contributing to his progress bar? It sure seemed to be going up faster than it had been a moment ago.

I'm starting to believe this whole game may be a collaboration between the Royal Sisters, Sunset Shimmer al well as the other characters to have a little fun at Twilight's expense.
All of them are perfectly aware of what they are doing, and will remember everything...
Or maybe Midnight Sparkle somehow survived and is behind this.

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Midnight Sparkle somehow survived

Just like Palpatine.

:trollestia:: "Do I look inseminated to you?"

I think this has good meme potential, lol!

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You know, i had a feeling discord was involved on medium mode, and also i almost thought twiliy was gonna flay him alive there for a second.

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Heh, knowing my stories, his punishment is likely to be something more ... intimate.

Twilight’s jaw dropped. And, despite his horse-like appearance, she felt her cheeks beginning to heat up.

Despite?

Hm... The bar still didn’t move. This wasn’t going to work, was it?
Oh! But wait! Cadance, Celestia, Luna – they’d all taken clothes off when their stallion said the right thing. Would that work?

Yup, this is definitely a setup by someone.
The only question is by who. And whether the other characters of this game (?) are conscious or mere fabrications.

But there wasn’t any other way out of this, was there? She had to win the game, didn’t she? She had to ... have sex with Flash Sentry.

Would you prefer any of the other two stallions you had seen earlier?
:twilightoops:: "..."
:twilightblush:: "Do I have to pick just one?"

Yeah, she liked Flash ... but that was fast. Was she losing control of herself? Had the game somehow taken control of her?
Or was she just that much of a repressed little slut deep down inside?

Yes. To all three questions.

There! The eggplant and peach icon! She jabbed her finger at it repeatedly, not thinking of the consequences, only of her lustful need.
The consequences were swift. Flash snorted, his huge horsey muscles bunched as his thighs flexed, and he pushed.

The logical part of her brain: :twilightoops:: "Oh no!"
The rest of her entire body: :twilightsmile:: "Oh yes!"


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

An alternative ending could have been Twilight (still cum covered) returning home and nothing appears to be out of the ordinary, keeping her guessing for ages what just happened.

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keeping her guessing for ages what just happened.

And keeping her wondering whether she should ever dare to return and check if it's still that way or not.

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