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False Door

If you like feeling awful, you've come to the right place.

False Door Joined 20th Aug, 2021 · Offline

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Caladis
Caladis #2 · Sep 27th, 2023 · · 9 ·
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Nice to see a story that I pitched, and helped edit, make it to the Featured List, 9-27-23.

Stradivarius
Stradivarius #3 · Sep 27th, 2023 · · 1 ·
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if I might suggest an alternate ending: Velvet faked the thyroid thing and the trip with her friends was a lie. She deliberately cut him off for months to steer him into this exact situation, and she was hiding in the closet watching when it happened.

False Door
False Door #4 · Sep 27th, 2023 · · 1 ·
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Ah, you sound like you've been reading my PREVIOUS commission. :rainbowlaugh:

Shakespearicles
Shakespearicles #5 · Oct 9th, 2023 · · ·
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leaving him alone for the weekend with their young daughter who has a well known penchant for going catatonic while reading a good book.

I knew exactly where this was going but hot damn!
Amazing premise!

WordyWrites
WordyWrites #6 · Oct 24th, 2023 · · ·
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I honestly ended up more invested in the drama than the sex. You painted some real characters here, bravo!

False Door
False Door #7 · Oct 25th, 2023 · · ·
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My philosophy is 'plot with clop' instead of the other way around.

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