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After several drafts, including an entire rewrite, this story is finally here.
As some of you might've guessed from a thing I wrote in a past life, I quite enjoy TF stories. I haven't done one in a long while, and I was feeling the itch, so that's how this came about. Originally, the pairing was going to be Rarity and Spike, but sometimes, a story can surprise you by the direction it wants to take.
I struggled a lot with what to name this thing, you know. There are a lot of names I could've gone with, but none of them seemed universally accepted, and I didn't really feel like splitting hairs. Most comments I can brush off if I disagree with what's being said, but the ones that echo the worries in the back of my mind? Ugh, those give me agida.
Always enjoy a good Spike/Starlight fic, and this one seems to have a lot going on! Color me excited
A few typos that could be fixed. But I'm liking it so far.
Hoo, this is good. I am fully on board for this!
Interdasting...
Are there more chapters like this?
I see what you have here, and I like it. Interesting way of cutting out the "interspecies" part of an interspecies romance. Tracking! Keep up the good work!
There better be like..........50 more chapters to come out for this......at the minimum.
His cutie mark is... a draconic caduceus?
... Medical association, or the more like the ancient symbol of Hermes, messenger god? Or the one with additional connotations of wisdom, alchemy, trade, negotiations?
this a great story so far I hope to see more soon.
7862035 I'd assume it's the messenger god, seeing as what Spike does is send messages.
ok you got me hooked
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The latter.
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YOU VILE FIEND!
Jk, jk, I actually like them quite a bit
Ooh! The colored text is used well!
I saw the tags, but still! That spike, er," thingy" scene came out of nowhere! Not unwelcome, but completely out of left field. I wonder how their friends will react when they see them... or if they find them during. >///*///<
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Typos?
I love your fics I'm happy to see another one! Congrats on the feature too you deserve it!
"Oh, fuck the hell, yes."
Totally read this in police girls voice from Helsing Abridged. Made my night even better
Not true. Spike gets a cold in canon.
7863343 technically... a cold is not a disease, but a viral infection. Everyone gets it... no being has a perfect immune system.... but no one cares... this is fanfiction... canon is irrelevant up to whatever point the author deems.
This is interesting. Here's some ideas! I wouldn't have a full blown clop scene for the next chapter and instead build a relationship until then (unless you want to treat people. Not my choice.) . I would also like to see them guide each other down a rightful path thus building a relationship and then it escalating until everything else. Maybe have Starlight be his magic mentor? But yeah. Its well paced and I'm looking forward to reading. It is now in my well earned favorites shelf. Also, do you have a reference picture for what they look like?
Very interesting idea and story. Easily love it and fav already. Great job!
You know something? I don't see Spike and Starlight's transformations as transformations. I see it more as... evolution. Evolution's a funny thing... no matter how many obstacles get in its way, the strongest always survives. Still, you know what they say about evolution? Even amoebas can do it.
I look forward to see how much further our protagonists evolve. Consider this faved and followed.
Also, this:
Makes me think of Twilight asking this after they get back:
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This one reminds of of kilala's works if you combine some subtle leaning towards transformation fetish into it...
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Good observation! This transformation was actually heavily inspired by some of kilala's work. I really like her character designs.
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Not really. I was inspired partially by the OC Crystal Clarity by Kilala, as well as the descriptions of dragons in D&D 3.5e (specifically the Draconomicon).
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I'm planning for one more chapter, followed by an epilogue.
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Truly, I am Fimfiction's greatest monster.
7865849 ok
will there be an illustration of what Starlight and Spike look like?
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It'd certainly be cool, but I don't have that kind of artistic capability.
7865916 im not good a drawing either, that's the reason why I haven't drawn my OC's for my stories
7865823 We all are damned if anyone who ever saw her work didn't include something of her works into her headcannon. And her Dragonpony siblings are easily one of the most influencial in the fandom.
What's your fave parts of her stuff?
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Just one (two, if the epilogue is counted)? Awww...
Dis gon B gud
this chapter. I LIKE IT! ANOTHER!! NOW!!!
Yes!
Let them make more little Kirins!
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Spike got his chocolate in Starlight's peanut butter!
I'm getting a serious Corruption of Champions vibe from this. I like what I see here.
Its refreshing to see something different than another changeling transformation :D
What's so bad about unshorn fetlocks?
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Everything. Imagine hair growing around your feet.
Certainly an interesting start - a chase sequence as the opening? Refreshing. And a nice way to set everything up.
You have my interest and I'll gladly read more of this once you update
Hmm. I have nothing against clop, but I don't really like it here. It starts out beautifully written, well styled for the MLP universe with a fascinating plot, and then penis. I want to read this for the story, not for the clop. :p It's like the back story for one of the characters in my current DnD campaign- I read 3 pages into it, was utterly fascinated, then rape fetish. Which this story on this website clearly doesn't contain.
That being said I'll still read this either way. Very well written.
7875466 You seem to have missed the "Mature" and "Sex" tags on your way in.
7863343 true, dragon's just have a more aggressively diverse immune system