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I don't even
7045903 Posted for less than five minutes. So many drive-by down-votes.
7045928
I can't even see the score yet. What did you do to, piss in their coffee? Y dey mad?
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Lot of prudes will downvote just because of the sex tag.
I feel like the optional chapter kind of detracts from the fic as a whole. If it's optional, then it cant involve anything important to the plot, and given it's nature, it's more of a distraction. I could have skipped it and come back, but i didn't, and now i feel like the flow of the fic has been jarred.
I'm getting the weirdest sense of deja-vu looking at this story, and I don't know why...
An upvote for you!
I really don't know why there are so many downvotes. Dis story is gud, yo.
7046259 Actually, in that chapter, Shining's flow was jarred.
For whatever reason this chapter wasn't showing up. Weird.
Is it weird that I have a similar self-punishing attitude? I play Team Fortress 2, maining as a medic. Service before self. I was never good at playing primary combat classes like the Demo or Soldier. but when I play as the Medic, I have this transformation where I become megalomaniacal, in a sense. I've always had a mantra of being the healer so that others may live. Though during those brief moments of near invincibility my thirst for blood becomes insatiable.... KILL THEM ALL, RAPE THE SCREAMING CHILDREN, AND PULL THEIR LIMBS UNTIL THE BLOOD RAINS HARD.
Oh, sorry, what was I askng about, again?
7046473 I posted them out of order to put in the SKIP hyperlinks.
7046540 My girlfriend actually told me this.
7046547
No I mean, when I finished the first one the option wasn't there to go to the next one. Or maybe I'm misunderstanding you.
7046558 Right. I posted chapter 1 and 3, so I could put the SKIP link in 2.
THEN I posted 2. You probably were reading chapter 1 while I did that, and went straight to 3 before I posted 2.
Shakes... this doctor is stone cold bug nuts.
7046568 Yes. That is correct.
If the doctor is worried about going to Tartarus. He doesn't have to be. He is going to Tartarus.
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No repeat performance? Awwww, my fav pairing...
Still, awesome chapter!
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Uh. Question.
I can't tell if Twilight planned that, or if her professional detachment is that damn good.
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That is not a question.
You are the hero we need, not the hero we deserve.
7047566 is that ryo from BOF 3?
7046552 Downvoted by GF. Ouch.
Dr. Dova, whom I am assuming has the first name Ben, and a Pirates of the Caribbean reference? Well. That was fun.
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Yes.
Did anyone else read this and think "His patients have been doubled!" in Luna's voice? LOL
Shockingly good.
Not sure if I should give this a like simply because of the reference to the Broadway Musical, or walk away quietly before I actually read it and like it.
7048115 i love that game! it's in my top 5.
7047536
Let me grab a brick to throw at someone
;)
Some small typos that slipped through editing:
Chapter#1
The second hand on the clock made it's next complete circuit around the circumference of the clock.
-its
Chapter#3
Luna took to the air, horn aglow, lowering the moon as she drifted back down to the ground, it's pale face slipping below the horizon.
-its
"In thy absence for just ONE millennium, and this is how events proceed!?" Luna barked.
"Now, if we art excused, we shall retire to thy bedchamber for the remainder of the day."
- I'm confused here. Isn't "thy" = "your" not "mine" ?
#4
Cadance felt the pressure of it inside her, moving smoothly with it's polished metal surface, until it was completely within her.
-its
#5
And her size and actions made it abundantly clear whom had the roles of predator and prey.
- who had
#7
"Who's the first and second?" she asked.
- "Whose are/
isthe first and second?" she asked.Dr. dova reminds me of Dr. Bendova from rocko's modern life. Why.
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7048156
You've been playing Fetish Master, haven't you, Shakespearicles?
Wow good job. I always throw up when I feel sick reading something and this made me feel so sick I threw up on my phone.
Well I can put this in my most horribly sick pile.
HAHAHA
Shouldn't this have an alternate universe tag?
7049333 Fixed! Thanks for the help.
7049565 That is the joke.
7049890 Mission Accomplished!
7050649 I believe this could fit within canon. We'll see how the season premier meshes. If not, I'll add it.
7049674 P̏̀ͩ̔̌͏͔̫̜ͅl͐̈́̀̏͢ȧ̼̞̫͖͑̌̊ͩ̓͛y̛̥̐ͪi̖͇̹̅ͥ̏̇ͮ̂͘n̮͋͑̂g̛̘͛̔̾ͬ̚ ̥̹̩̝͍̠͛i̟͂͛ͩ̽̓͞s̥ͩ̄͗̈́ ̈̓͂f̹̺̥̗̙̜ͪͬ̉̒̽ǫ̲͚͓̠̠̎̐́r͖̝̘̠̮̉ͨ͐̆ͪ͒ͅ ̵̬̳̗̤̬͛ͫͪ̓͂͋̑c̭̰͐ͪ̈́͆h̫̤̬̪̾ͤ̓̐͗i̳͍͇͎̓̎ͦ̆̈́ͫ̒l̾͌̇d̲͓̿r̜̗̺̈́ͭ͘ẹ̰̑ñ̞̞̰̹̗ͧͯ̈͆̚.
If Cadance is immortal, why does she need her kid to be an heir?
7050922 THAT is an excellent question to ask the actual show writers.
Although unlike Celestia and Luna, I don't think that she is actually immortal. We see her age progress in the Canterlot Wedding episode, from the flashback to when she was younger, foalsitting young Twilight.
7050887 Excuse me but how did you type like that?
7050887 That's not a no.
Also:
7051225 To be fair, The Journal of the Two Sisters has Celestia and Luna age as well. (Written by the show writers, unlike the Comics)