7046558 Right. I posted chapter 1 and 3, so I could put the SKIP link in 2. THEN I posted 2. You probably were reading chapter 1 while I did that, and went straight to 3 before I posted 2.
Not sure if I should give this a like simply because of the reference to the Broadway Musical, or walk away quietly before I actually read it and like it.
Some small typos that slipped through editing: Chapter#1 The second hand on the clock made it's next complete circuit around the circumference of the clock. -its
Chapter#3 Luna took to the air, horn aglow, lowering the moon as she drifted back down to the ground, it's pale face slipping below the horizon. -its
"In thy absence for just ONE millennium, and this is how events proceed!?" Luna barked. "Now, if we art excused, we shall retire to thy bedchamber for the remainder of the day." - I'm confused here. Isn't "thy" = "your" not "mine" ?
#4 Cadance felt the pressure of it inside her, moving smoothly with it's polished metal surface, until it was completely within her. -its
#5 And her size and actions made it abundantly clear whom had the roles of predator and prey. - who had
#7 "Who's the first and second?" she asked. - "Whose are/is the first and second?" she asked.
"Thou should have informed thine niece before! Should we assume that Princess Twilight is likewise uninformed?" Luna accused. "...Maybe?" Celestia admitted. Luna threw her hooves into the air.
7049333 Fixed! Thanks for the help. 7049565 That is the joke. 7049890 Mission Accomplished! 7050649 I believe this could fit within canon. We'll see how the season premier meshes. If not, I'll add it.
7050922THAT is an excellent question to ask the actual show writers. Although unlike Celestia and Luna, I don't think that she is actually immortal. We see her age progress in the Canterlot Wedding episode, from the flashback to when she was younger, foalsitting young Twilight.
Twilight gets Pregnant because Shinings DNA is so similar to her own, that it doesn't get killed by her Alicorn Immunesystem. And after Celestia tells Twilight about Alicorns inability to conceive she just forgoes normal protecion methods.
Would most certainly be very interresting if one asks me
7057753 PLEASE? at least PM me if you do, if you don't want to just put up that video again. (or to put reverse psychology into play do it anyway and tell so they think that you didn't tell me?)
7046540 My girlfriend actually told me this.
7046547
No I mean, when I finished the first one the option wasn't there to go to the next one. Or maybe I'm misunderstanding you.
7046558 Right. I posted chapter 1 and 3, so I could put the SKIP link in 2.
THEN I posted 2. You probably were reading chapter 1 while I did that, and went straight to 3 before I posted 2.
7046568 Yes. That is correct.
7047482
That is not a question.
You are the hero we need, not the hero we deserve.
7047566 is that ryo from BOF 3?
7046552 Downvoted by GF. Ouch.
7047712
Yes.
Shockingly good.
Not sure if I should give this a like simply because of the reference to the Broadway Musical, or walk away quietly before I actually read it and like it.
7048115 i love that game! it's in my top 5.
7047536
Let me grab a brick to throw at someone
;)
Some small typos that slipped through editing:
Chapter#1
The second hand on the clock made it's next complete circuit around the circumference of the clock.
-its
Chapter#3
Luna took to the air, horn aglow, lowering the moon as she drifted back down to the ground, it's pale face slipping below the horizon.
-its
"In thy absence for just ONE millennium, and this is how events proceed!?" Luna barked.
"Now, if we art excused, we shall retire to thy bedchamber for the remainder of the day."
- I'm confused here. Isn't "thy" = "your" not "mine" ?
#4
Cadance felt the pressure of it inside her, moving smoothly with it's polished metal surface, until it was completely within her.
-its
#5
And her size and actions made it abundantly clear whom had the roles of predator and prey.
- who had
#7
"Who's the first and second?" she asked.
- "Whose are/
isthe first and second?" she asked.7048156
You've been playing Fetish Master, haven't you, Shakespearicles?
Wow good job. I always throw up when I feel sick reading something and this made me feel so sick I threw up on my phone.
Well I can put this in my most horribly sick pile.
Shouldn't this have an alternate universe tag?
7049333 Fixed! Thanks for the help.
7049565 That is the joke.
7049890 Mission Accomplished!
7050649 I believe this could fit within canon. We'll see how the season premier meshes. If not, I'll add it.
7049674 P̏̀ͩ̔̌͏͔̫̜ͅl͐̈́̀̏͢ȧ̼̞̫͖͑̌̊ͩ̓͛y̛̥̐ͪi̖͇̹̅ͥ̏̇ͮ̂͘n̮͋͑̂g̛̘͛̔̾ͬ̚ ̥̹̩̝͍̠͛i̟͂͛ͩ̽̓͞s̥ͩ̄͗̈́ ̈̓͂f̹̺̥̗̙̜ͪͬ̉̒̽ǫ̲͚͓̠̠̎̐́r͖̝̘̠̮̉ͨ͐̆ͪ͒ͅ ̵̬̳̗̤̬͛ͫͪ̓͂͋̑c̭̰͐ͪ̈́͆h̫̤̬̪̾ͤ̓̐͗i̳͍͇͎̓̎ͦ̆̈́ͫ̒l̾͌̇d̲͓̿r̜̗̺̈́ͭ͘ẹ̰̑ñ̞̞̰̹̗ͧͯ̈͆̚.
7050922 THAT is an excellent question to ask the actual show writers.
Although unlike Celestia and Luna, I don't think that she is actually immortal. We see her age progress in the Canterlot Wedding episode, from the flashback to when she was younger, foalsitting young Twilight.
7050887 Excuse me but how did you type like that?
7050887 That's not a no.
Also:
7051225 To be fair, The Journal of the Two Sisters has Celestia and Luna age as well. (Written by the show writers, unlike the Comics)
Well, I am still waiting for the plot twist ...
Twilight gets Pregnant because Shinings DNA is so similar to her own, that it doesn't get killed by her Alicorn Immunesystem.
And after Celestia tells Twilight about Alicorns inability to conceive she just forgoes normal protecion methods.
Would most certainly be very interresting if one asks me
7051912
7057753
PLEASE? at least PM me if you do, if you don't want to just put up that video again. (or to put reverse psychology into play do it anyway and tell so they think that you didn't tell me?)
7058203
*whispers* "No."
- Rorschach
7060463
Fine...
7061458
Pssst, hey psst... Zalgo... S͒͑̒̏͘h̗͙̫̼̙̭̒̏̈́̓͂h͖̺̲̙̟̹̭͗̅̋ͤ͂̍ḧ̸̘͎̣̞̰h̻̹͊ͯ̔ͦ̄̀ȟ͇̭̮̭̿̀̀͂ͣ
7062121
"It's the mystery that endures. Not the explanation. A good mystery can last forever."
- Cain (Sandman - Neil Gaiman)
7062702
"YOU SICK LITTLE MONKEY!"
-Ren (Ren & Stimpy)
7062811 I'm watching you.
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I don't know how I feel about Dr. Dova.