I feel like the optional chapter kind of detracts from the fic as a whole. If it's optional, then it cant involve anything important to the plot, and given it's nature, it's more of a distraction. I could have skipped it and come back, but i didn't, and now i feel like the flow of the fic has been jarred.
I don't even
7045903 Posted for less than five minutes. So many drive-by down-votes.
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I can't even see the score yet. What did you do to, piss in their coffee? Y dey mad?
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Lot of prudes will downvote just because of the sex tag.
I feel like the optional chapter kind of detracts from the fic as a whole. If it's optional, then it cant involve anything important to the plot, and given it's nature, it's more of a distraction. I could have skipped it and come back, but i didn't, and now i feel like the flow of the fic has been jarred.
I'm getting the weirdest sense of deja-vu looking at this story, and I don't know why...
An upvote for you! I really don't know why there are so many downvotes. Dis story is gud, yo.
7046259 Actually, in that chapter, Shining's flow was jarred.
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