Over His Dead Body

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mylaptop

mylaptop #1 · Mar 22nd, 2016 · 1 · ·

.........no

The Boy Zone

The Boy Zone #2 · Mar 22nd, 2016 · · ·

What?

TheWorstDiscord

TheWorstDiscord #3 · Mar 22nd, 2016 · · ·

But... Oranges

La Barata

La Barata #4 · Mar 22nd, 2016 · 1 · ·

Dude let it die

eraser

eraser #5 · Apr 18th, 2016 · · ·

Nice summary. Making the following 1200+ words redundant.

ocalhoun

ocalhoun #6 · May 16th, 2016 · · ·

What have you done now? Well, to be fair, for a story that bills itself as a dark comedy, this did have me grinning in horror. Still... Bad Pinkie! Bad! *hits with rolled-up newspaper* Other than its subject matter, the biggest sin of this story is that it seemed rather rushed. Scenes were clipped short, and Pinkie coming to some rather drastic conclusions was done in the matter of a sentence or two. Still, this story made me feel things, and that counts for something.

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