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Dude let it die

Nice summary. Making the following 1200+ words redundant.

:raritydespair: What have you done now? Well, to be fair, for a story that bills itself as a dark comedy, this did have me grinning in horror. Still... Bad Pinkie! Bad! *hits with rolled-up newspaper* Other than its subject matter, the biggest sin of this story is that it seemed rather rushed. Scenes were clipped short, and Pinkie coming to some rather drastic conclusions was done in the matter of a sentence or two. Still, this story made me feel things, and that counts for something.

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Wow, that was a lot... dark :rainbowderp: The comedy in here was more scary than actually funny. Perhaps you should just focus on making it dark instead.

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