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sonicfan05


I'm a Sonic fan (obviously) who is also a fan of this show. ...not much else to say.

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This story is a sequel to Freezer Burned


Apple Bloom suspected Applejack's strange behaviors lately, including going out late at night before supper. She couldn't figure out why.

When she and her two best friends saw the Diamond Bandit (who bears much resemblance to her sister) from a T.V. show called Equestria's Most Wanted, she and her friends were shocked beyond belief.

Apple Bloom refused to believe it. There's no way Applejack is a thief.

...is she?


Cover art designed by me.

Constructive criticism welcomed!

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 61 )

Can't wait to see next chapter :heart:

Okay, I'm hooked. :yay: Let't see how this goes.

The TV References I see so far are

My Little Pony itself (in Gerbil form)

Sonic Boom (and Sonic X in reference)

The Walking Dead

Great Premise so far. :twilightsmile:

AWESOME! !:rainbowkiss: the cliffhangers are killing me. .

going on favs, though i have not yet red it :)

You have attracted my attention. Love the references.:pinkiehappy:

Really interesting idea (although I always imagined that in such situation, it would be Rarity the one suspected! :applejackconfused::raritydespair:) (it should not be tagged "Mystery" or "Thriller" too?)

And the plot really thickens with such discovery! :pinkiegasp::twilightoops:
I wonder if the Crusaders will bring the rest Human6 and Sunset into the mix...

I wonder if we will see a "Diamond Bandit Applejack" fanart...

Can't wait to see how it will develop!

And kind of related:

You've got bushels of wrong words scattered throughout the story. I got the largest laugh out of the "chilly". Chili is what you were looking for.

It's me or Applebloom inherited Applejack's short tempered idiotness.

Deeeyyyuuuummmmmm

Well... this just went from bad to worse.::rainbowderp:

Trainwreck coming!

Why I have the feeling that the Crusaders could avoid a lot of trouble if they just confide in one of the girls and/or confront Applejack with the suspicion (they could show the video to Applejack)...?

Since that even Sonata and Snails are aware of the similarity between the Diamond Bandit and Applejack... why one of the Humane6 raise it with the farmer?

I wonder if it wasn't Applejack but someone who looks like her?

7079262 I can answer the second question. Not everyone watched the show that night. So the Humane6 weren't aware of it. There is another reason but I won't spoil anything just yet.

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I can answer the second question. Not everyone watched the show that night. So the Humane6 weren't aware of it. There is another reason but I won't spoil anything just yet.

Fair enough. Although I'm really curious to see how this will develop!
Do you intend post a chapter per day?

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I wonder if it wasn't Applejack but someone who looks like her?

That would be the most reasconable explanation... now the path to find it? That looks that will be interesting.

7079567 Yes. I'll post a new chapter everyday until April 3rd.

Wait sneak in to the jewelry store...ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR LITTLE MINDS!:twilightangry2:
It'll only go bad for you three.

Even more scary possibility: what if the Crusaders meet the real Diamond Bandit and think that she is Applejack? :twilightoops::raritydespair:

Crusaders Standard Operation Procedure: :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

I'd get black duct tape and cover the pink suits in that.

Not bad for a start

Well....this is not a good idea :twilightoops:

Cant wait for the next one *gasp* ADD THE MISSON IMPOSSIBLE MUSIC PLEASE :pinkiehappy:

"Mission Impossible 37" featuring Scootaloo, AB aaaand Sweetie Bell. :rainbowlaugh:

10/10 for this chapter :heart:

7083529 Then you're going to love the next chapter. :raritywink:

Wow...this is getting good
good job

This story is a real



diamond
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

And so it begins...

dun dun da dun dun dun da dun dun
dadadadaaaa dadadaaaaaa dadadaaaaa
da da

Oh Boy! At last the meeting between the Crusaders and the Diamond Bandit didn't become dangerous as I was afraid.

The camera twist was a good one.

And Sweetie Belle! :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

Now three final mysteries to solve: How Applejack will react to the Crusaders' mess and the reason of her strange behavior and the hidden diamonds...

But if AJ is not the Diamond Bandit, then what is she doing late at night? :rainbowhuh:

W8... aren't safes supposed to be airtight?! Does that mean the CMC's and Shining Armor are gonna DIE?! Oh shit. :pinkiegasp:

I was tempted to click on the link labeled "theme song" of Scootaloo's favorite spy movie series. My mind picked up what you are referring soon after.

So if Applejack isn't the Theif... What is she doing at night? :rainbowhuh:

GOD DAMN IT SWEETIE BELLE

Nice ending - and poor Sweetie Belle :unsuresweetie:! Here we go again indeed!

Waiting the bonus chapter! (if only to explain where Applejack got that diamonds that the Crusaders found..)

You deserve a medal for this story m8. It's quite dank. I told h8ers that I'll tell my nan that they said mean things to me on club penguin if they h8 and don't particip8. I r8 meme/10.

7089226 All will be revealed on the last chapter! :raritywink:

Hey, I know where that ending comes from! :pinkiehappy:

I really had a great time reading this story. :pinkiehappy:

The story was very well balanced with facts and details which made every chapter enjoyable to read. (Even IF the chapters were a bit short sometimes, when you want more juicy details...:twilightsheepish: )

For once I DID NOT need to complain about the grammar from the writer. I rearly found any!:moustache:
(Just because I write this comment, it's probably going to be full of grammar mistakes!:facehoof: )

Hope you will write anything similar to this in the future, mabye then Applejack will be the thief...:derpytongue2:

Have a VERY nice day!!!:heart:

~TheTwistedWizard

This doesn't quite answer where Applejack got the Diamonds she hid in the couch. I assume those were Granny Smith's present, but it doesn't clarify it.

7090950 I'm glad you enjoyed my story and thank you for your compliments! :pinkiehappy:

I hope you stick around because I have one more chapter to go later today. :raritywink:

7091203 As I said in the Author's Notes, there is still one more chapter left which will be posted later today. That last chapter will explain where Applejack got the diamonds from.

I'm sorry, I don't know if the semi-circle at the bottom of AppleJack's face is a smile, but that's what my mind pictured it as, and I laughed my fucking ass off.

And now the mysteries have been cleared! :ajsmug:

And I'm really glad that Applejack left her second job if it was where it was implied to be! :applejackconfused:

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