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Deathscar


You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth

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Sunset learns that stories don't always have happy endings
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Written for Sunset Shimmer Day on Equestria Daily

Featured on Equestria Daily's Sunset Shimmer Day Fanfic post here!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

I wonder why Rainbow has that locket. I hope nothing bad happened to her. :fluttershysad:

7585372 Heh, it's all up to your speculation :) Thanks for reading it!

Why am I sensing a sequel in the mix.

Aaaaww poor Sunbutt.
The SunDash is strong in this one

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Oroboro gonna be pissed at me for saying this, but I think this is the most engaging Sunset romance story I've read this week.*

*Yes, I'm aware the week isn't over yet, :derpytongue2:

7585436 Sadly not I'm afraid. Though anyone that's interested is free to use this as a basis for a sequel!


7585559 Yeah I felt bad for Sunny when I was writing this. And there's no definite answer to who Rainbow is talking about :derpytongue2: It's up to you to fill him/her in! :)


7585582 Oh wow, that's pretty high praise! Thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Rainbow Dash x Sunset for the win. (Actually, any Sunset pairing with the Humane 5 is awesome in my opinion.)

this needs a sequel RD needs to open up to sunset

7585859 Heh, I prefer Sunlight. Ironic that I wrote this huh? :P


7585865 Sadly a sequel might be far away. If I do make it, I'll be sure to tag those that faved this story! Though it might not be with Rainbow opening up to Sunset, since I purposely left Rainbow's 'other' ambiguous for the readers to fill in the blanks/join the dots!

Its AppleDash. Locket is orange, AJ is orange.:ajsmug: Either it's AJ or it's Sunset. :rainbowhuh:And Sunset couldn't have given her the locket. :derpytongue2:It could've been Flash, but he likes Twilight,:unsuresweetie: so when she has the orange locket, it might've been something she wanted to give Sunset, or something. Probably. :rainbowderp:Or maybe Sunset gave it to her as a friendly gift, and she's going to return the favor by doing something for bacon hair that is way friendlier? I don't know... Sequel soon!:raritystarry:

This was a very nice read. A bit hesitant at first, but once you got the ball rolling with Rainbow and Sunset talking together, it took off.

Nice subtext with RD's unknown issues. I like it when an author doesn't tell me everything. :)

7592845 Heh thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story :)

Hmm... quite the interesting read, I like it! :yay: Nicely written, nicely written.

I think that locket's for sunny...
Because "who said this was the end of yours?"

This story was gr8,nice writing :3

One of the best stories I have ever read. You make me feel so connected to Sunset. Her emotional coctail went through me and it was perfect!
You show us Sunset and Rainbow Dash in interesting light. Love it.
Great work, 10/10 for sure. And you managed to create such beautiful story in less then 10'000 words. Well done!

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Well thanks for giving it a shot and I'm happy you like it!

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Ah, I'd rather you not do that. I'm sorry! But I really appreciate you asking me first!

I know this is a old story but great job and , god damn it flash! This is why not many people don’t like you! You just Ruined Sunlight god dam it flash :flutterrage::twilightangry2:😠

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