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Deathscar


You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth

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Sunset never thought that it would happen. Yet here she was, holding hands with the girl of her dreams.

Read about the many moments they have shared together, be it happy, sad or romantic. And see how the hardships they have had to overcome have made their relationship stronger than ever.

WIP title: Deathscar really wanted to write some Sunlight.


Takes place before and during Camp Everfree

Inspired by this tumblr post

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

have a like on the strength that Sunlight is the best ship in EG...#Sunlight :heart::twilightsmile::raritywink:

7646610 Thank you so much! And yes, best ship for sure

7646615 The Sunsets into Twilight

Check out my fic if you like, if you haven't read the story that it is a spiritual squeal to...DO IT!

...yeeeeeaaaah, Everfree left me extremely bummed. Clearly you know why.

Thank you for taking it head-on, and showing me that there can be Sunlight life afterwards. Could use a once-over for punctuation, but otherwise, this was just the fluff (and well-done fluff, I might add) that I needed, right place, right time. :raritywink:

7646668 Thank you! Yeah, sorry for any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors! I didn't think the fic warranted a once over by my super-busy proofreader. But I'm really glad you enjoyed it! (And yes, LoE left me super bummed as well :(, though it was a damn good movie, Sunset x Twilight would have made it perfect!)

Brighten my day? I wish this was on Legend of Everfree! As much as I like the fourth EQG movie, SunLight is my OTP. And Hasbro Studios giving a "Canon" reason for my ship to probably never happen hurts, a lot. But seeing people writing cute romantic stories of SunLight always make me smile and see the bright side of life. Thank you.

Aw. You gotta love these two dorks in love. Well written

Yep, this totally should have happened in the movie. NOTHING CAN STOP THE SUNLIGHT!

Good story for the most part. The only complaint I can think of is that Twilight and Sunset kept repeating 'I love you' and 'I love you too' a bit more than was strictly necessary. I know they do love each other in this story, but they don't need to say it all the time to make that clear. Still, that's just a very minor nitpick, no need to fret about it.

7646790 You're welcome! Thanks for giving it a read!


7647330 Thanks!


7647462 Ah, I was worried about that. But thanks for reading and giving me some feedback to work with!

Now comes the hard part for SciTwiSet: Meeting the Sparkle family.

Yaaaaay more Sci-Twi x Sunset :heart:

7646790 What was their reason? Because it was a fan-ship?

This is why I love fanfictions. SunLight till the end.:heart:

Nice work dude.

good thoe the speedy recap of everfree just with sunset as scitwis love was kinda un needed beyond the first part

Quality Sunlight here, 10/10 would tan under again

7661503 That is one of the best comments I've received. I hope you've been sufficiently tanned.

Nice. I love all the little scenes, but once you hit LoE, the progression starts to seem off. With all the things that happened previously, Twilight not opening up to Sunset about her nightmares sooner doesn't sit right. I wish writers would choose to be brave more often and break away from canon rather than clumsily squeeze their story within its confines. It's not even that badly done in this case, but the fact that it's an imperfect fit is very much felt.

One part I did like is that they relatively quickly progressed to being open about their relationship, which also let them deflect Timber nicely. Seeing his lame attempts to impress Twilight really made me appreciate Flash Sentry in contrast. I wasn't any more thrilled by the writers' awkward attempts to fabricate some kind of romance out of him and Twilight repeatedly bumping into each other in the earlier movies, but at least he had sincerity going for him. If I had to choose between him and Timber, I'd pick Flash as Twilight's love interest every time. Good thing we don't have to choose and can go with SunLight instead, though :pinkiehappy:

7647462 As a counterpoint to this, I'd like to say that I didn't notice this as an issue here, though I've seen other stories where the main characters overuse this phrase, using it to express all sorts of things that would be better served by more specific words. It's definitely worth making sure these three words aren't overused. If you write your romance right, your characters' actions will speak plenty loud enough so that the words themselves don't need to be frequently spoken.

7671599 Yeah that's very true. I'll try to keep that in mind in the future when I write romance! Thanks for the comments and criticisms and thanks for taking the time to read the story! :)

I really love stories like this :D

Every moment is just a pure pleasure to read. SunLight forever.

*siiiiiigh* I never get tired of this pairing...it's so adorkable...

Really adorable! This ship is becoming one of my favourites. Fic is so cute that now I need more cuteness :pinkiehappy:

This was so beautiful, I loved this story. These two are so cute together.

“Ooo pink! How’d you know what my favorite color was?” Pinkie held the t-shirt to her chest, unaware of the perplexed stares her friends were giving her.

Poor, naive, innocent Pinkie Pie. :rainbowlaugh:

7671579
I always thought Flash was such a dumb character. He literally has no character development and does nothing for the plot. He is useless as a human and a pony. There is no point for Flash.

7671579
True, but is Timber any better? I have not been impressed with either of the Twilight-centric romance attempts by the writers and am glad it doesn't receive more attention and screen time than it does.

“Don’t be, Twilight.” Sunset’s swift answer caught Twilight off guard. “What kind of girlfriend would I be if I wasn’t there for you? And I know you’d do the same for me.” Suddenly, Sunset heard a sob. Followed by another. “Twilight?” She shot out of her resting position. “Did I say something wrong?”

Wait.
When did they start dating?

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