It's a lovely day, and everypony is happy except for Starburst. Star's having an awful day, and all she wants to go home and stew. The last thing she needs is an insistent friend trying to make her smile. There will be no smiling on this day as far as Starburst is concerned.
Written for the Kilala97 Fan Works Fun Fact Contest! Based off of the fun fact for Cotton Candy: "Candy was Starburst's first and best friend when they were little. Since Star was a crybaby, Candy would always cheer her up. Now, even though Starburst is serious and tough, Candy makes it a goal of hers to make Star smile everyday somehow."
Cover art, as well as Starburst/Cotton Candy/Prism Bolt/Golden Delicious/Anthea, are created by the wonderfully-talented Kilala97.
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That was sweet. I loved this story. Good luck with any future stories you write.
Why are you such a Ms. Grumpypants, Starburst?
This was cute.
Love Kilala's Next Generation work.
If only Time Traveling Kids of the Mane 6 would update.
http://shrapnelleader.deviantart.com/art/Children-of-the-Mane-Six-303310388
Very cute. Good job, Twinkle!
Great story. I loved the ending.
That was fun, I liked it. Since this is for a writing contest I think it's only fair I point out this
I think you meant to say "often enough." And it wouldn't hurt to read over the whole thing to see if you can spot any errors, self-checking should always be a thing in my opinion.
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Haha, I could have sworn I fixed that one. Thanks!
5756179 That's why it's always a good idea to read through what you have posted at least once a week, it helps you find things ya missed and helps remind you of what you had going on at that point in the story.
Will be reviewing this story. Good news is that I am a fan of Kilala's Next Generation universe. Bad news is... I am a fan of Kilala's Next Generation universe. Won't be going easy on those details.
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I eagerly anticipate your review!
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Ah, forgive me. But UK English is the Master Race.
Cute story! I'll have the review for you soon.
Your story has been reviewed by the PCaRG!