Fly High

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Turquoise Blitz was born with wings, but like all other flying ponies it was hard for him to start flying. One day when he tries to fly; his sister, Claire, sees him and decides to offer her help the only way she knows how to. Things only improve for the young kirin once his father decides to help him through his learning process.

Submission for Kilala97's Fun Fact Contest

Chapters (2)

Quality Time Together · 4th Mar 2015 · 2,511 words
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Soaring Hearts · 10th Mar 2015 · 2,696 words
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VampDash

VampDash #1 · Mar 5th, 2015 · 1 · · Quality Time Together ·

What about the FEELS tag? I'm still waiting for that.

KomodoBrony

KomodoBrony #2 · Mar 5th, 2015 · · · Quality Time Together ·

5698685 I completely agree with you there; you would think there would be more themes other than erotic, scary, and depressing

VampDash

VampDash #3 · Mar 5th, 2015 · · · Quality Time Together ·

5698737 Or laugh your ass off.

LtMajorDude

LtMajorDude #4 · Mar 5th, 2015 · · · Quality Time Together ·

Pretty cute!

Hillbe

Hillbe #5 · Mar 5th, 2015 · · · Quality Time Together ·

"furiously &---> effortlessly <---- flap his wings trying to desperately to keep himself airborne" Got to think about that one

otherwise a nice story

Hillbe

Hillbe #6 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · · Soaring Hearts ·

I'm so going to kill you . . . He's flyin. . . RB gives you wings Smokin hole my bad

dracone

dracone #7 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · · Soaring Hearts ·

Where do you get all this energy from I'll never know.

This just didn't look right. I think you meant to say "Where you get all this energy from I'll never know." or "Where do you get all this energy from?"

Another one that didn't make sense to me