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KomodoBrony


Follower of great writers and artists; I'm here to create stories for artists and spread the word of great writers everywhere, and I'm always willing to accept and give help to everypony

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Both characters are owned by Kilala97

Based on her post 'Helping Brother Fly'

Turquoise Blitz was born with wings, but like all other flying ponies it was hard for him to start flying. One day when he tries to fly; his sister, Claire, sees him and decides to offer her help the only way she knows how to. Things only improve for the young kirin once his father decides to help him through his learning process.

Submission for Kilala97's Fun Fact Contest

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

What about the FEELS tag? I'm still waiting for that.

5698685 I completely agree with you there; you would think there would be more themes other than erotic, scary, and depressing

5698737 Or laugh your ass off.

"furiously &---> effortlessly <---- flap his wings trying to desperately to keep himself airborne" :scootangel:Got to think about that one:raritystarry::moustache:

otherwise a nice story

:raritystarry: I'm so going to kill you . . .:moustache: He's flyin. . .:rainbowlaugh: RB gives you wings:derpytongue2: Smokin hole my bad

Where do you get all this energy from I'll never know.

This just didn't look right. I think you meant to say "Where you get all this energy from I'll never know." or "Where do you get all this energy from?"

Another one that didn't make sense to me

I'm fly up a bit and you tell me whether I'm going to high for you or not

I think you meant to say " I'll fly up a bit and you tell me whether I'm going to high for you or not"

OMG That so scared me for a minute them calling T's name. But yay! He can fly now!

I...so many emotions going through me while reading this. I’m happy for the family moment, scared from Turquoise falling(making us READERS scared), and just so many others.

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