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Twilight is in a bad mood, and Pinkie needs Rainbow to deliver a pear pie to her. What could go wrong?

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Wow. That was pretty crazy, lol
Makes me wonder how bad a prank Dash pulled to make Twilight and Pinkie have this kind of revenge on her.

Ohhhh Twilight. That was diabolical! I heartily approve. :pinkiehappy:
There should be more stories like this out there. :twilightsmile:

Well, that was delightful.

This story, I like it. ANOTHER!

<LoL!> Now this has to be the funniest story I have read in a very long time! The surprise ending was even better! This 'prank' definitely beats out the whole town pretending to be zombies from "28 Pranks Later".

Pinkie is perfect for being able to adapt to a situation. Especially if it is one of comedic value. The fact she was able to stay as straight-faced as she did was absolutely astounding.

Though, now that I think of it, I wonder if the color in Pinkie's fur was kind of a hint at how time was passing? No doubt the amount of sun as it crosses the horizon could give awaythe passage of time.

What is most fun is how genuinely RD was made to believe she was being sent back in time over a pie. She got herself in such a 'competitive' mood that her heightened senses of observation from the sky were not being used to notice anything except getting from Point A to Point B.

Outside of needing a shield spell after Twilight tells Dash the truth, I imagine Rainbow needing some time to realize how there were over 19 opportunities to have stopped the 'Froot Loops' if she had used her skills instead of her ego.

I can imagine Derpy being confused over how she keeps seeing Rainbow Dash with a pie heading in the same direction.
"And they make fun of me for how much I like muffins," she'd say while continuing on her pickups and deliveries. "I'll have to remember how much she likes pies for the next time we have a Pegasus meeting. She'll see me as so thoughtful and maybe even say something nice about my eyes!"

Pears.... the Apple Family don't take kindly ter their kind round these here parts.

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This fanfic not only brings joy to people's hearts, but it brings joy to lives I tell ya! You wrote this with such a fantastic idea in mind! Great idea, great writing, fantastic grammar, everything about this is priceless! I hope ya didn't mind, but I had to make a reading on such a great fic!

Audio Liiiiink: https://youtu.be/eOl4qOtoCbU

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment!)

LOL wow, just.....wow! :rainbowlaugh:

That was hilarious all the way though, not sure what kinda prank Rainbow did to Twilight & Pinkie to deserve this but I totally approve! In fact I find this a much better payback than 28 pranks later where it seems Rainbow didn't learned her lesson. :twilightsheepish:

At least both Twilight & Spike will have lots of pies to go though! :moustache:

Well, that didn't work. Well, actually it did. Nice work.

I was surprised Rainbow didn't just walk in and smack Twilight with the pie at one point.

Ohhhhhhhh snap, talk about totally owned! :trollestia:

Also--no wonder Rainbow hates pies. I would too after going through all of this. :rainbowlaugh:

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Yeah, I was thinking that too. Twi's glad it's not me she's trying this with, or else that pie would've gotten shoved in her face right around the time she started complaining about it "being tilted too far to one side." :trixieshiftleft:

“Fruit Loops”

:facehoof:

::THWAP::

I suppose the sequel to this will be entitled, “Hard Cider Reset.” Loved the twist at the end; it was perfect! Have a mustache. :moustache:

Wow. Twilight isn't just moody...she's downright EVIL!

HIlarious! But BRUTAL

Love these pranks fics. Hey let's see a prank war yeah, one pony starts a prank then every pony wants to get back at each other using pranksm

:pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile::rainbowderp::rainbowhuh:
HAHAHAHAHA. Gotta admit I was wondering why Twi was going off the deep end there, lol.

I have to say, I smiled at the "alternate title" when I realized what this was really about.

And then laughed again at the end at the punchline.

Well done.

“Probably think twice about pranking Pinkie and I again for a while,” Twilight said, rubbing her hooves together. “Now come on, hide yourself so you don’t get caught in the collateral when she realizes you know too.”

Let's be honest. Pinkie would help Twilight, no matter what, I feel. Just for the chance to prank Rainbow.

I just find this one really confusing this wasn’t really the story I guess it was ok because I actually finished it

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What could have possibly been a point of confusion in this story for you? Was it the unambiguous explanation of its premise at the end?

Just like Rainbow not to notice how all the OTHER details about the town change each time she makes the trip... such as Sun angle, random ponies walking through, birds, insects, etc.

A hyper-genius like myself would notice immediately, make the connection... and then engage in my own vengeful Omega Prank which would crush everypony's mind for a thousand years! MUWAH HA HA HA HA!!

(Alondro is enveloped by dark powers and becomes Night-stallion Troll. The title doesn't roll off the tongue very well, so he's stuck trying to come up with a new one for days!)

I just saw this on YouTube. Only Rainbow Dash would have fell for this and done it at least 20 times. Personally, after the jig was up, both Twilight and Pinkie would be hearing the sound of breaking glass when they least expect it.

I felt bad for Rainbow. But then I didn’t. :pinkiecrazy:

:twilightblush: NICE!!!!

Now I imagine Twilight chanelling her inner Mr. Ramsey.
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Well, this was fun. :twilightsmile:

Didn't see this coming.

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Later Reviews #87!

My review can be found here.

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