While Sweetie Belle is away on tour, Button Mash has to look after Pixel Bit...
This goes about as well as you might expect.
One of my entries in the Kilala "Fun Fact" Contest
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Midnight Crescent
Fairly new to both writing and FiM. Creator of many ideas, completer of none... so far.
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I remember that song. Probably the only one here under 50 who does.
I like the characterization, the ending, and the smooth transitions, but it would've been nice to see BM get punished a little more. I mean, playing games ALL DAY?! Sounds like a colt Button, not an adult. However, that was also really funny.
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Speak for yourself.
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Well, in the first draft, I did have Sweetie making Button sleep on the couch for at least a week, but when I was writing it up, it just seemed to be taking Sweetie more and more out of character. I decided to try for something more in character, even if the punishment does come off a little light.
As for Button playing games all day - I don't think I ever gave a time frame for any of this, other than the brief "Immediately" explanation in the Author's Notes. It'll be interesting to see how long anyone else thinks he was playing for...
That was so fun. Great job. I can't wait to read what happens in a future story. Good luck with that.
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I'm under 30...
Heh, adorable. Could use some touch-ups but the father-daughter gaming moments are cute, and the end reference is awesome. Pixel is fun to read about. Well done.